Shintarou Gou-Ken

[Dagron Hoshigake]

Rokira: "Open Palm."[/u]
Rank: B
Type: Offensive Taijutsu
Range: Hands Reach
Special: Requires superb form and strength.
Description: This is a powerful open palm strike to the solar plexis of the opponent. This strike goes beyond the normal power for a hit to the solar plexis, causing the ribs to cave inward beyond knocking the wind out of someone. When the person’s ribs cave, they will tear small holes in the persons lung making it very hard for them to catch their breath and killing them if medical attention isn’t sought out within 12 hours.
Domain: N/A

Kobu’zadotora: "Fist of The Earth Tiger."[/u]
Rank: B
Type: Offensive Taijutsu
Range: Hands Reach
Special: Requires great strength.
Description: This is a powerful attack to the opponents chest, powerful enough that the true strength of the attack is not shown upon impact. Once hit the opponents body will cave in slightly around the strike, on the opposite side of their body a hole will blow out of their clothing though their skin is intact. A split second after this, the opponent is sent flying backwards from the strike, more then likely hitting anything in their way and causing more damage to themselves. ( 15m. Knock Back. )
Domain: N/A

Kûgami Renda : "Sky Lion Barrage."[/u]
Rank: B
Type: Offensive Taijutsu
Range: 3 Ft.
Special: Requires great strength.
Description: This is a powerful axe kick delivered to the top of the opponents head. Like a normal Axe kick, the user will bring his leg straight up then bring it straight down using his heel to hit the opponent on the top of their head. This is capable of fracturing the opponent skull, if unblocked and can even damage limbs if blocked.
Domain: N/A

[Kii!]

I'd just like something slightly more specific on Kaijou: "Opening." Like, "increases all taijutsu with power equal to rank" or "increases all taijutsu by one rank" or what have you.

Oh, and a knockback distance on the second one would be good.

[Dagron Hoshigake]

Better?

[Sayomi]

Kaijou: Increase the rank of this to B, A. The trade off for an rank more in Taijutsu for the cost of C, D chakra is to little. Also why is this jutsu multi ranked? What is achieved by the higher rank?

[adero]

Kaijou: "Opening."
Rank: D, C
Type: Reflexive.
Range: 0
Special: Increases Strength.
Description: The user will course their own chakra into their limbs, causing a temporary power up of the muscles to inflict greater damage. The muscles will tighten and look to be flexed which in some cases is capable of tearing off normal clothing. Can scale based on users ability ( Increases all Taijutsu by one rank. )
Domain: N/A

Isn't that basically what gates does?... to a lesser extent I'd suppose...?

[Dagron Hoshigake]

@masumi: I figured it gave it more flexibility in certain situations where a little boost would be sufficient while in others a greater may be required. Giving what would be a weaker Satsui a chance to stand against far stronger ninja.

adero: In a sense I suppose that's what it is. Except it isn't eight gates of straight up pwn.

Fix'd.

[Kii!]

Still more on the last one xD. I'm either going to need a specific amount of chakra drained per level (in the form of rank, i.e. B rank chakra drained on activation and C each turn thereafter) OR I need it to last a set amount of turns and have a cooldown for activation.

[Dagron Hoshigake]

How about you just give me what you think is a fair amount and I'll add it?

[Kii!]

If it were me, I'd give it a three turn activation period with a three turn cooldown.

[Dagron Hoshigake]

Edit:

I understand. Edited.

[Kii!]

1.2 I suppose.

[.DEVIOUS]

I'd feel better if a technique like Opening was left specifically to the Chakra Gates, to be honest. I'm okay with the rest of the techniques but, while this isn't "instant 8 gate pwnage", it is the domain of the chakra gates and should probably remain that way, especially since it's not part of a style that prohibits learning the chakra gates, and could also possibly be used in conjunction or as a way around both learning the Gates and the Gates drawbacks.

[Dagron Hoshigake]

Actually, I think logically, using the technique in itself would have it's own drawbacks. Artificially boosting the muscles with energy would probably have similar effects as the gates, though obviously not as crippling. And the increase really isn't exponential, so I don't see how it can be that bad. It only boosts strength, not speed or anything.

[.DEVIOUS]

Nobody said that the effects were exponential. However, a technique that boosts your taijutsu with no listed drawback that isn't a part of the Chakra Gates (i.e. stealing from the Domain of the Chakra Gates) really can't be acceptable. Even without boosting speed, this ability both removes some, if not all, of the need of learning the Chakra Gates to a Taijutsu user and does so in a way that is completely unrestricted and fully capable of being abused on more than one level.

Simply put, I won't accept it. Sorry. =/

[Dagron Hoshigake]

For the sake of hurrying this up. I deleted it. Just accept the rest.