Reiki Bakafuu

[Kazegetsu Matsu]

Reiki Bakafuu[/u]
Rank: B - S
Type: Specialized Ninjutsu
Range: 2 Meter Radius
Special: Blocks all forms of attacks of equal rank and below. Can be used once per battle plus one more time each time retrained up to 5 uses. The user may not move until the blast has ended. Blast only lasts a few seconds. Does not require seals but requires a 3 second charge time.
Description: Reiki Bakafuu is strong blast of Chakra from the core of its user. The user builds up pressure by focusing a large portion of chakra in their chest. When they can no longer bear the pressure the Chakra is released, creating a spherical shockwave. This shockwave, once released, encompasses the user, creating a barrier that can protect them from incoming attacks; in addition if the opponent is close enough, the concussion can hurt them and send them spiraling backwards as well.
Domain: Universal Ninjutsu

[.DEVIOUS]

The entire point of Samurai ninjutsu is to modify your sword in order to attack. In no way are you allowed to simply build chakra outside of your weapon and 'release' it. Samurai ninjutsu is about making your sword sharper to cut and attack, and in rare cases use it to defend yourself from harm. This does not fit under the Samurai category.

Explain when and how you would be able to repel a technique back at the opponent. Although, to be honest, I'm more inclined to flat-out deny that specific portion of the technique so you're better off removing it from the discussion in the first place.

You don't give any sort of timelimit for the duration of the technique, you don't state whether or not you can move in/out of the sphere or if it follows you, you don't say whether or not you can attack from the inside of the sphere, and there's no information about which version of the technique you would need to relearn in order to use it multiple times .

The way that you describe the technique would not protect you from Genjutsu, either. It takes chakra coming into the body in a massive burst to free the user from Genjutsu, not chakra leaving the body. That being said, I wouldn't accept this part of the technique in combination with the other effects of the technique, anyways. It makes it too powerful.

Overall, I dislike the custom in general and am more inclined to decline its acceptance. I'll hold off on an official deny to see a response from you and to see if you can make some changes to make it acceptable, but overall be ready for a denial.

[Kazegetsu Matsu]

I removed the portion where it sends projectiles back at opponents and also the domain.

I fixed the description slightly.

Now with the genjutsu cancellation, Genjutsu is the opponent manipulating your chakra to make you see/feel what they want. I thought that since it was a sudden blast of chakra it would disrupt the opponents manipulation of your chakra, thus cancelling the genjutsu.

[.DEVIOUS]

Chakra ways to remove Genjutsu:

1) Kai - A burst of chakra directed internally to remove a Genjutsu.
2) Ally - Sending a burst of chakra into your system.
3) Gates - A massive increase in your own chakra circulatory system (i.e. a burst of internal chakra)

Otherwise it could be argued that any technique releases you from Genjutsu because you're gathering a large amount of chakra and expelling it from your body in order to manipulate whatever you're manipulating. The 'burst' of chakra has to be directed internally on the user in order for the user to be released from the Genjutsu.

Is the change that you made taking it away from being a Samurai Ninjutsu and making it into a Universal Ninjutsu? If so, please modify that domain.

[Kazegetsu Matsu]

Edited domain and removed Genjutsu Negation.

[.DEVIOUS]

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