The Wind Lord

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Dagron Hoshigake
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The Wind Lord Jun 28, 2011 2:46:58 GMT -8

Post by Dagron Hoshigake on Jun 28, 2011 2:46:58 GMT -8

Fēng Qiāng/Kaze Yari "Wind Lance"[/u]
Rank: B
Type: Offensive Ninjutsu
Range: 20m ( travel distance. Formed close to user. )
Chakra/Stamina: Mid
Special: One Wind Lance can be conjured at a time, plus one more each time retrained up to a maximum of ten. Piercing damage up to B rank is applied depending the range from which it makes contact. The further the target is away the less damage is done, but closer and it can tear through the body of the victim. Used in conjunction with Kaze Bunshin, Wind Lances can be formed up to as far as 10 meters from the user.
Description: Without a doubt a fearsome technique capable of devastating opponents of any rank and title. Forming the necessary handseals, the user can summon devastating lances of wind that spiral pierce through solid objects until they run out of power or disperse at maximum range. Useful against opponents who hide, use elemental defenses, or generally destroying opposition.
Domain: Fuuton, Hiden "Ip."

( Nothing explodes.

Last Edit: Jun 28, 2011 8:59:22 GMT -8 by Dagron Hoshigake

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DAVID BOWE
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The Wind Lord Jun 28, 2011 4:29:04 GMT -8

Post by DAVID BOWE on Jun 28, 2011 4:29:04 GMT -8

Kaze Bunshin -- lul, are you really trying to make something basic as a wind bunshin selfish? The reason something is selfish is because it wasn't thought of by anyone else and isn't something that could be commonly conjured up. This isn't a selfish and difficult technique to conjure up, and I won't approve it as a selfish technique. That and you're lacking various descriptions; mainly how large the explosion is when or if the wind clone were to do so. Just woke up and rushing for work. Haters gonna hate.

Kaze Yari -- "Used in conjunction with Kaze Bunshin, Wind Lances can be formed up to as far as 10 meters from the user." Whut? The range says twenty but this says ten. That and what're you meaning when you say this can be used in conjunction with Kaze Bunshin? Is this an attack where wind lances race towards the opponent? Also again, need to state how large this explosion is. Anyway, off to work. Just wanted to make sure no-one actually accepted a wind bunshin that is a selfish technique, lul. When I read 'dispersing' I assumed you were implying that it would cover a radius of cutting winds before being eliminated and not just ending. Again, haters gonna hate.

Last Edit: Jun 28, 2011 5:08:30 GMT -8 by DAVID BOWE