Re-make +2

[✘TAIGA]

The following is being re-submitted to better fit the sites jutsu.

Fūton: Shinkū Taigyoku (Vacuum Great Sphere)
Rank: B
Type: Fūton, offensive
Range: 30 meters
Chakra: High
Special: When re-trained 10 meters is added onto Shinkū Taigyoku's total range and the size of wind blast increases by 5 meters.
Description: Being the mastered version of it's predecessor, this technique takes up the entirety of the inhaled breath. Much like with the Shinkūgyoku, they will allow the air to mix with their chakra; compressing the mixture into a large (5 meter) ball of wind to be expelled with great force. At speeds twice that of thrown projectiles, this jutsu soars towards its target in attempt to crush anything within it's path. The force of this wrecking ball can match the concussive force of five exploding notes, barreling through jutsu of equal prowess.
Domain: Fūton

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These here are new

Fūton: Shinkū Renpa (Vacuum Blast Barrage )
Rank: B
Type: Fūton, offensive
Range: 20 meters
Chakra: High
Special: When first learned only five blades of wind are able to be unleashed at once, in one breath plus one more when retrained. Can only be retrained for a maximum of five more times for a max of 10 overall blades.
Description: The user takes a deep breath and exhales several large blades of wind at different angles, by rapidly moving their head in various directions. Each blade of wind is released in the one breath exhaled; moving at the speed of thrice a kunai. The blades of wind are five meters in total width and length, and are sharp enough to cut through limbs, boulders, or trees. Can cut right through jutsu of equal rank.
Domain: Fūton

Fūton: Shinkū Suikomi (Vacuum Suction )
Rank: B
Type: Fūton, offensive
Range: 20x20 meters
Chakra: High (mid to sustain per turn)
Special: Each time retrained the user gains and additional turn to hold the jutsu, 5 meters of distance and also the weight able to be pulled increases by one hundred pounds.
Description: Once the user completes the hand-seals, they inhale, and continuously began drawing air from the outside. Anything within its effective range is immediately and abruptly pulled in by the strong suction. While inhaling the user cannot move or the technique is canceled. Shinkū Suikomi is powerful enough to spirit away a total weight of five hundred pounds. Draws in anything of suction mass at speeds of ten meter per two seconds.
Domain: Fūton

[chiatsuki]

Fūton: Shinkū Renpa (Vacuum Blast Barrage )
Rank: C
Type: Fūton, offensive
Range: 20 meters
Chakra: Mid
Special: No hand seals required! When first learned only five blades of wind are able to be unleashed at once, in one breath.
Description: The user takes a deep breath and exhales several blades of wind at different angles, by rapidly moving their head in various directions. The blades of wind are twenty meters in total size and are sharp enough to sever limbs with repeated hits upon one spot. Typically if not concentrated it does equal damage as Kamaitachi.
Domain: Fūton

This is a derivation of kamaitachi - a technique that's being nerfed right now. I'll let an LM look at it.

Fūton: Shinkū Suikomi (Vacuum Suction )
Rank: B
Type: Fūton, offensive
Range: 40x40 meters
Chakra: High (mid to sustain per turn)
Special: Each time retrained the user gains and additional turn to hold the jutsu, and also the weight able to be pulled increases by one hundred pounds.
Description: Once the user completes the hand-seals, they inhale, and continuously began drawing air from the outside. Anything within its effective range is immediately and abruptly pulled in by the strong suction. While inhaling the user cannot move or the technique is canceled. Shinkū Suikomi is powerful enough to spirit away a total weight of five hundred pounds. Draws in anything of suction mass at speeds of ten meter per two seconds.
Domain: Fūton

Bump the range down to 20 meters + 5 each time retrained.

[✘TAIGA]

Done, also Vacuum Blast Barrage was a jutsu used by danzo in the anime; however I had tweaked it to make it more accessible, but I decided to edit it once more and make it more true to the original, so its been edited as well.

[chiatsuki]

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[.DEVIOUS]

Fūton: Shinkū Renpa (Vacuum Blast Barrage )
Rank: B
Type: Fūton, offensive
Range: 20 meters
Chakra: High
Special: When first learned only five blades of wind are able to be unleashed at once, in one breath.
Description: The user takes a deep breath and exhales several large blades of wind at different angles, by rapidly moving their head in various directions. The blades of wind are twenty meters in total size and length and are sharp enough to cut through limbs, boulders, or trees. Can cut right through jutsu of equal rank.
Domain: Fūton

So you get 5 wind blades that are 20 meters wide and can go 20 meters in distance? That seems a bit large for a B Rank technique, don't you think? I feel like the technique would be fine if you dropped the size of the cutters down to 5 meters but left the range alone. It would also more accurately display the amount of chakra that you're utilizing.

[Sayomi]

edited as asked and clarified how many blast could be gained per re-train

[.DEVIOUS]

2/2.