Speed & Balance

[KEITH]

Kaneau (Good Balance)
Rank: C.
Type: Supplementary / Taijutsu
Range: Self.
Stamina: Low.
Special: This technique can only be used once per thread, and once more when it is retrained. Can be retrained 6 times.
Description: Kaneau is a Taijutsu technique that makes it easier for one to shift their own weight in an instant, providing them with good balance when they would land on one foot, no matter what they do or what kind of position they are in. This technique was developed by Taijutsu masters to give them good balance while they did the most ridiculous types of Taijutsu moves that would naturally leave them off balance.
Domain: Universal Taijutsu.

[Shinryu]

Okay.

1st:

Special: This technique can only be used once per thread, and once again when it is retrained.

Does this mean it can only be used twice per thread, or once more per each retrain? The wording is unclear, so that ought to be cleared up.

2nd:

Description: Kaneau is a Taijutsu technique that makes it easily for one to shift their weight, in an instant, proving them with good balance no matter what they do or what kind of position they are in. This technique was developed by Taijutsu masters to give them good balance while they did the most ridiculous types of Taijutsu moves that would naturally leave them off balance.

What is the limit to this? Does it allow people to balance on one fingertip? Can they do a perfect limbo with a bar that's less than 2 feet high? The description is really ambiguous and IMO ought to be cleared up to give a better perameter for what the technique can physically allow you to do.

[.DEVIOUS]

^ essentially covered my questions with that technique. There are also quite a few typos in there that could be cleaned up.

Shuurai (Lightning Strike)
Rank: D, C, B, A, S
Type: Supplementary / Kenjutsu
Range: Sword.
Stamina: Low - Very High
Special: With each rank of the technique achieved, the users striking speed increases by 10%:

D: 10%
C: 20%
B: 30%
A: 40%
S: 50%

Description: Shuurai is a technique that allows the user to strike faster than the average person would normally be able to strike. This Battoujutsu technique is suppose to give the user greater speed through all of the training that they go through, trying to improve themselves to be the best that they could be.
Domain: Kenjutsu. Battoujutsu 'D - S'.

Battoujutsu already strikes incredibly fast, as witnessed by the descriptions of the technique. The style doesn't need nor do I want a supplement to that striking speed. If you want to go any faster, then you need to pick up the Gates. That's about all I can say with it. >:

[KEITH]

Edited.

[.DEVIOUS]

1/2

[chiatsuki]

2/2 lovely.