Hozuki abilities~

[Sayomi]

Mizuchikku

[/u] {Water cosmetics}
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: --
Special: Can only be used if the Hozuki successfully kills the target
Description: The Hozuki reshapes their body's composition, cosmetically, utilizing their watery body and at the same time henge knowledge after sending their essence forward an drowning the victim and basically absorbing their physical makeup. Their body harmonizes with that of the victims allowing them not only the appearance, but also the voice of the person they are impersonating.
Domain: Hozuki

Suimihari[/u] {Water guard}
Rank: B
Type: Offensive/ Defensive
Range: See special
Special: D rank Hydration you get 10 meters of length, +10 meters for each rank of Hydration.
Description: Once the Hozuki began to understand their physical composition an build they are able to send spikes from their own self while still maintaining their physical appearance. The spikes that extend an jut from their body spiral forward. As thin as senbon, a multitude form an shoot out, their numbers ranging anywhere from 50 senbon sized spikes to 100. These water spikes are able to pierce B rank defenses an move equal to the Hozuki's speed.
Domain: Hozuki

Kisokuenen[/u] {Gasping for breath}
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: See special
Special: D rank Hydration you get 10 meters of length, +10 meters for each rank of Hydration. Must know Kan'oke before Kisokuenen.
Description: This technique can only be used if the opponent is standing upon a body of water and the Hozuki has fully merged with it. By delving deep into the body of waters depth the Hozuki is able to move at speeds double that of the Hozuki's and rise up, pulling the victim underwater.

Once submerged the Hozuki once more merges back with the body of water around where the opponent is and creates a dense bubble like perimeter around the using their own body. Within seconds from the crushing density and the corrosive jelly of the Hozuki the opponent shall find themselves crushed, drowned, and their flesh severely corroded away.
Domain: Hozuki

Ekisuterusu[/u] {Liquid stealth}
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: See special
Special: Must have A rank Hydration or above. Also in this form the Hozuki's speed is halved.
Description: This forces the Hozuki's body to break up into a compact puddle of water, allowing a more stealthily approach or even escape. The Hozuki cannot launch attacks while in this form and it last equal to the amount of turns the Hozuki's Hydration technique lasts. As an added bonus by utilizing their unique jelly their able to effectively blend in to the environment, but if moving the their visibility goes to 50% while if they are still its 100%. The downside is this does not protect the Hozuki from sensory type shinobi an doujutsu's such as Sharigan and Byakugan..
Domain: Hozuki

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The following is an ability based of how Suigetsu utilizes his bloodline in the game-Naurto Ultimate Ninja Storm 2.

Kyūryū: Suika no Jutsu[/u] {Torrent: Water Transformation Jutsu}[/url]
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: See special
Special: D rank Hydration you get 10 meters of length, +10 meters for each rank of Hydration.
Description: The epitome of the Hozuki bloodline-Kyūryū: Suika no Jutsu allows the Hozuki to change their entire essence into a large mass of water at will, propelling it forward at great speeds. The Hozuki essentially transforms into a wave of water which crashes into the opponent, from there the Hozuki is than able to reform using that body of water behind the opponent for a quick attack.
Domain: Hozuki


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Mizuchikku {Water cosmetics}
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: --
Special: The transformation lasts one turn, plus another retrained. Can only be used if the Hozuki successfully kills the target
Description: The Hozuki reshapes their body's composition, cosmetically, utilizing their watery body and at the same time henge knowledge after sending their essence forward an drowning the victim. Their body harmonizes with that of the victims allowing them not only the appearance, but also the voice of the person they are impersonating.
Domain: Hozuki

From what i'm reading, the hozuki is basically allowed to jut themselves forward in a coat-like form over the opponent and then absorb their physical properties and drown them? Seems OP for C rank imo. Not because of the drowning property, but because it is a technique that multi-tasks in the way of stealing the victim's physical and mental features.

Suimihari {Water guard}
Rank: B
Type: Offensive/ Defensive
Range: See special
Special: The range of Suimihari is dependent upon the rank of hydration, so from D rank and up 10 meters is tacked on.
Description: Once the Hozuki began to understand their physical composition an build they are able to send spikes from their own self while still maintaining their physical appearance. The spikes that extend an jut from their body spiral forward. These water spikes are able to pierce B rank defenses an move double the Hozuki's speed.
Domain: Hozuki

Because the water spikes are created from the user itself, it'd make more sense that the technique travel as fast as the actual hozuki his/herself because the technique derives from the user and therefore would have the properties of the particular person. so this seems unlikely as well :s

[Sayomi]

Fixed an also added three more abilities.

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1/2 - Mizuchikku {Water Cosmetics}


1/2 - Suimihari {Water Guard}

Ekisuterusu {Liquid stealth}
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: See special
Special: Must have A rank Hydration or above.
Description: This forces the Hozuki's body to break up into a compact puddle of water, allowing a more stealthily approach or even escape. The Hozuki cannot launch attacks while in this form and it last equal to the amount of turns the Hozuki's Hydration technique lasts. As an added bonus by utilizing their unique jelly their able to effectively blend in to the environment, but if moving the their visibility goes to 50% while if they are still its 100%. The downside is this does not protect the Hozuki from sensory type shinobi an doujutsu's such as Sharigan and Byakugan..
Domain: Hozuki

Why does it need A rank hydration for a C rank?

Once again, your C rank is multi-tasking and has other special properties added to it so its OP imo for a C rank but I may be wrong on this one. The only real problem I have with the jutsu is the camouflaging part. I understand that a puddle of water is very environmental itself but how can a user move when in puddle state? Would they need to hold a seal to keep this jutsu active? Or would it simply just disperse when they move? It seems to make more sense to allow the jutsu to wear off as soon as the user moves because what does a 50% visible puddle look like? Maybe its just the wording thats catching me off guard but lets be realistic here.

Kisokuenen {Gasping for breath}
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: See special
Special: The range of Kisokuenen is dependent upon the rank of hydration, so from D rank and up 10 meters is tacked on. Must know Kan'oke before Kisokuenen.
Description: This technique can only be used if the opponent is standing upon a body of water and the Hozuki has fully merged with it. By delving deep into the body of waters depth the Hozuki is able to move at speeds equal to Shunshin and rise up, pulling the victim underwater.

Once submerged the Hozuki once more merges back with the body of water around where the opponent is and creates a dense bubble like perimeter around the using their own body. Within seconds from the crushing density and the corrosive jelly of the Hozuki the opponent shall find themselves crushed, drowned, and severely burned.
Domain: Hozuki

Okay, from what i've read you pull the user under a puddle and from that puddle is created a bubble. So from the hole where that water was currently inhabiting the user is sitting, being forced under from the bubble and being drown simultaneously from the water underneath...correct?

1/2 unless Lash has some other input, which i'm sure he will for this tech seeing it not S rank (its a finisher). But for now I see no problems with it.

[Sayomi]

Why does it need A rank hydration for a C rank?

Once again, your C rank is multi-tasking and has other special properties added to it so its OP imo for a C rank but I may be wrong on this one. The only real problem I have with the jutsu is the camouflaging part. I understand that a puddle of water is very environmental itself but how can a user move when in puddle state? Would they need to hold a seal to keep this jutsu active? Or would it simply just disperse when they move? It seems to make more sense to allow the jutsu to wear off as soon as the user moves because what does a 50% visible puddle look like? Maybe its just the wording thats catching me off guard but lets be realistic here.

Because one can't really fully Hydrate even at A rank, its the Hozuki Hydration rank which states you need S rank to fully turn your entire body into water upon will. Next the Hozuki has great control over their body an can still move while even fully transformed into a watery state. I also believe in the show when escaping Suigetsu remains as a small puddle an crawls along the ground, not sure I'f i'm right on that, but this feat should be simple.

Anyway I up'd it to B rank so if there are any problems just let me know.

Also for Kisokuenen it works like Kan'oke, but is different in execution, so seeing Kan'oke is A rank I thought this to be the best rank.

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Okay then. Im glad you changed it to B rank only because it'd take a lot more than a c rank chakra to allow someone to move their full body in the shape of a puddle, especially per turn. But because the user is not allowed to attack while in that form its not too powerful so..


1/2 on all items. Please contact Lash to be your second approval, i'd like his input on this as well.

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Mizuchikku {Water cosmetics} - I'd like for this technique to remain in effect until the user changes his or her mind and reverts the jutsu. Basically, I believe there's no need to limit its duration since once you've changed your shape it doesn't cost any additional chakra to maintain it.

Suimihari: The way that the range is given is sort of peculiar to me. It is my assumption that when you have D rank Hydration you get 10 meters of length, +10 meters for each rank of Hydration. It should probably say it like that just to avoid a little bit of confusion. Also, you don't have a limit towards the number of spikes you can create, nor how thick the spikes are, only their maximum distance.

Kisokuenen: I really feel like for you to be able to be moving at Shunshin speeds that this technique should be both S Rank and contain some sort of significant drawback towards usage, like a massive internal cooldown on the ability (such as using the technique massively dehydrates the user and prevents them from using a Hozuki technique again afterwards for 3 or more turns). Also, how are you burning the user with the technique? There's no compositional jelly technique which allows you to burn, there's currently only an acidic one. Do you combine the technique with the acid one to burn them? If so, you should consider adding that technique to the domain of your jutsu.

Ekisuterusu: Does using this ability impair your movement speed at all?

[Sayomi]

fixed, added one more jutsu

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1.2

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