New Hozuki techs

[Nao]

Kusshin

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Rank: D
Type: Supplementary Ninjutsu
Range: 0-50 Meters
Special: Allows the user to extend one of their limbs, allowing them to increase the range of their jutsu and attacks. Range increase is based off of the users Hydration Rank. D rank Hydration allows the user to extend a limb 10 meters while S rank Hydration allows for an extension of up to 50 Meters. Does not require seals.
Description: Utilizing their ability to convert their bodies to water, a Hozuki can actually achieve the elongation of their limbs. By utilizing this ability, a Hozuki can increase the range of their attacks. However, due to the properties of inertia if a hozuki were to throw a punch and extend their arm, they would not be able to change the trajectory of the punch mid-attack. As the User masters their ability to liquefy their body, their ability to stretch their limbs will also increase.
Domain: Hozuki. Requires D rank Hydration.[/quote]

Dassuishou

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Rank: D,C,B,A,S
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: See Special
Special:
1) Allows the user to suck the water from the opponents skin and back into their own, causing dehydration in the opponent; causes a drop in their speed and physical power. Effects of Dehydration last until the opponent drinks something. The User must grasp the opponent for at least a turn to get the full effect of the jutsu. The higher the rank of the jutsu, the more water that can be drained per turn, thus increasing the severity of the dehydration.

2) Can also absorb a single Suiton jutsu of equal or lower rank at a time. Once the water from the absorbed jutsu is used up, the user may absorb another attack and so on.

3) If a Hozuki is touched by this jutsu it has a different effect. If the opponents Hydration rank is equal to or lower to the rank of this jutsu, the opponent may not Hydrate as long as they are being touched.

*For all effects the user must touch the target.

Description: By utilizing their knowledge of the water element, a ninja may draw water from their surroundings to use for jutsu; this jutsu is a variation on that skill. By coming into contact with an opponent’s skin, a Hozuki can sap the water straight from their body. When enough water is sapped from the human body, a condition called dehydration can occur. The effects of dehydration include headache, lethargy, muscle cramping, and in some cases unconsciousness. In addition to this, The Hozuki may absorb the water used in Suiton techniques by drawing it into their own bodies, allowing them to use it against an opponent at a later date. If another Hozuki is touched by this jutsu, their cells aren’t able to hydrate properly, making it so they cannot liquefy; if already liquefied it can allow the user to hit the opponent.
Domain:Hozuki.[/quote]

[.DEVIOUS]

The first one is fine.

The second technique's effect is too strong. There's no drawback to you using the technique and the effect of draining the water from an opponent's body is an incredibly potent attack. Considering the fact that you don't give any sort of timeframe for the technique, it would be assumed to be instantaneous, which absolutely cannot be the case if you're sucking down the water from another person's body. It would need to take several turns for the ability to be acceptable to me by any means, and you would have to maintain contact on the person for the full duration of the technique. There should also probably be a drawback stating that at maximum you could absorb ONE Suiton technique of your level of the ability (which is to say that if you know the B Rank you couldn't absorb B rank and then a second B Rank later until the first B rank's water had been removed from your technique).

[Nao]

Maybe I misworded what the technique is supposed to do...

When the opponent is touched for a few seconds a small amount of water is sapped from there body. The longer the touch, the more water is taken. Also at higher ranks it takes less time to take larger amounts of water from the opponent.

As for the Absorption of the tech, I like your idea better actually. - Fixing

[.DEVIOUS]

I'm glad you changed the absorption portion of the technique. However, I don't really think that a touch is enough of a medium to be able to use the first portion of the technique. I believe you would need to actually hold onto a person for a continuous amount of time before being able to draw any kind of moisture from a person's body - the higher the rank, the more moisture you can absorb from them over a given course of time. I can't see myself accepting the technique with the allowance of just a touch doing the work. It needs to happen over a span of time, like per turn. It's late (early, actually, but...) and I'm not sure if I'm making my meaning clear. Let me know if you need further clarification.

[Nao]

Fixed - Hopefully this is what you were looking for. I hope that still conveys the effect of the ability to inflict dehydration on the opponent.

[Sharkk]

Not a mod, but isn't the first technique really similar to the basic Kage-Hebi technique?

- Nan-Kaizou (Way of the Snake - Soften Modification)
Rank: D, C, B, A, S
Type: Supplementary / Clan Ninjutsu
Range: 0 - 50 meters
Special: By default, this jutsu allows the user to move one appendages (legs or arms) to stretch. With each rank earned, one more appendage can be stretched at the same time, as well as for longer distances. The head and torso can only be stretched once the user learn the ‘S’ ranked version of this jutsu. Stretching distance begins at 10 meters, and increases by 10 with each new rank attained.
Description: Nan Kaizou is one the most essential Kagehebi ninjutsu technique, as it allows a ninja to make their body extremely malleable, much like a snake. It was originally developed for spying activities, but perfected in the hands of the Kagehebi and their natural snake-infused blood. When used the clan member can stretch and twist their body at any angle, allowing them to surprise their opponents, spy on situations normally out of reach, and react much like a snake would. The only drawback is that while malleable, their bodies are highly susceptible to damage in this form as their bone structure is no longer ‘normal’.

[Kazegetsu Matsu]

I didn't even see that O-o

Either way it makes sense for the hozuki to have a similar technique considering that its basically a variation of the strong arm tech, except instead of making the arm thicker and meatier it makes it thinner and longer

[Kii!]

1.2 Unless Lash still has a problem with the dehydration.

[Sharkk]

Bumping cause I'd like to use these once they get accepted, good work Nao.

[Fuck Yeah!]

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