Kirigakure Exclusive Techniques

[kajika]

Fuzen Gisou no Jutsu (Imperfect Camouflage Technique)[/u]
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary Ninjutsu
Range: Self
Special: Makes the user harder to detect when moving through shadows, mist or water at high speed
Description: Fuzen Gisou no Jutsu is a popular technique among the famous Mist Assassins. It alters the surface of their body to, vaguely, match that of their surroundings. This is virtually useless out in the open, but quite useful in areas that consist mainly out of the same color, such as shadows, water or mist. Especially when moving, this can make the user just difficult enough to spot for his assassination to succeed.
Domain: Henge no Jutsu, Kirigakure shinobi only

Suiton: Gyorai Shindou no Jutsu (Water Release: Torpedo Impact Technique)[/u]
Rank: C
Type: Offensive Ninjutsu
Range: Can charge from up to 15 meters distance
Special: -
Description: Gyorai Shindou no Jutsu is a close-range Suiton technique initially used by Kiri shinobi to sink boats. The user forms a cone of pressurized water around himself as he begins to rotate his own body. He then uses Suiton to push the water behind him backwards, propelling himself forward in a torpedo-like fashion and ramming him into his target.
Domain: Suiton, Kirigakure shinobi only

[.DEVIOUS]

Ninpou: Kirigakure Chacha (Ninja Art: Hidden Mist Disruption): The only way to conceal your chakra is through Sensory, unfortunately. I'm going to have to deny this one.

Fuzen Gisou no Jutsu (Imperfect Camouflage Technique): This technique should require Henge in the Doman, otherwise I'm okay with this.

Suiton: Gyorai no Jutsu (Water Release: Torpedo Technique): We're not allowing multiplicative or additive 'stat' bonuses as we want to avoid the arguments of "I have .2% faster speed than you, I win". That being said, I don't really care for the technique in general, as I feel that it gives away the domain of the Hozuki and the Hoshigake to people outside of the respective Kekkai Genkai.

Suiton: Gyorai Shindou no Jutsu (Water Release: Torpedo Impact Technique): You only have one rank listed and then say that the damage capable of being done is dependent on learning multiple ranks. You should probably fix that. The technique needs some sort of max range that you can torpedo towards someone. Other than that, this looks okay.

[kajika]

Fixed.

I'm not sure if Fuzen Gisou should ask for Henge no Jutsu. I mean, every ninja knows that technique by default anyway. Stating the technique requires Henge no Jutsu would be purely cosmetic, right?

[.DEVIOUS]

Non-Ninjas do not start with the knowledge of Henge, and if a Non-Ninja stole the Kirigakure scrolls and attempted to learn the technique ...

[kajika]

Aha, I see.

Fixed.

[Kii!]

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[kajika]

B.U.M.P

[.DEVIOUS]

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