Jin Hyuuga Ready for Grading Please

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PERSONOLOGY[/u]

• Name: Jin Hyuuga
  
  
• Age: 16
  
  
• Clan/Blood Line: Hyuuga
  
  
• Country and/or Village: Leaf/ Konoha
  
  
• Rank & Profession: Genin
  
  
• Difficulty Setting: Normal
  
  
• Releases/Senses: Raiton (lightning)
  
  
• Type: Ninjutsu, Taijutsu, Genjutsu
  
  
  PHYSICALITY

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[/li][li]Height: 5'3

[/li][li]Weight: 101

[/li][li]Apparel:

Battle Mode: Jin wears standard black ninja shoes that roll up to her ankles, underneath the shoes she has wrappings around her ankles to her shin. A leaf green Kung fu pants that go down to mid shin, Her shirt is a V cut with medium sided collars sticking up but slightly curved at the end. Ninja Jacket, and a bow for her hair, Jin has her headband tied around her hip. Inside her jacket hides her ninja packs, there are wrappings around her wrist and fist.

Home Mode: At home Jin wears a knee high gray silk kimono with the Hyuuga Emblem on the back, and still has her village head band around her waist. Her tiny feet in Sandals with socks hiding her bare feet, her wrappings are off both hands and ankles. Underneath her kimono she has a small gray T shirt and a tight black yoga shorts for trousers.

[/li][li]Body Appearance: Jin is fit, muscular, she wears her blonde hair short with a tiny bow on the side. Her face is small and has a square shaped jaw line, her tiny nose emphasizes her blueish/gray eyes, her eye lashes long and naturally dark. Her hair is dyed blonde and a part in her hair covers a side of her face. She is small but quick, trained in the art of Gentle Fist her hands are heavy with callus, and yet still sensitive to touch. Her legs are slender but capable of withstanding 12 hours of horse stance while being struck repeatedly by her friends. No markings or tattoos appear anywhere on her body, with her dyed hair and her eyes she almost seems as if a pure light.

[/li][li]Blemishes & Scars: Fair skinned, no scars.

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COGNITION[/u]



[/li][li]Personality: Jin is happy, she likes to be happy all the time. She always enjoys the best in life, enjoys the setting and the rising sun, quietly stares into space of a "thousand yard stare". She has been known to be very blunt with her words, she. She as likes to make others laugh and smile. Jin is "one" with the earth (she's a hippy), she loves mother nature and thinks plastic is lame.
She is a powerful enemy but even stronger friend. She is well mannered and polite with strangers when customs call for it. Her loyalty is with her family/clan but she will make time for friends.
Driven to always shoot for the stars her ultimate goal is to be the strongest in her clan. Blind to everything else she charges forward. She is slightly tom boyish hearing stories of the Mighty Rock Lee. Jin wants to create the next level of gentle fist, she keeps training and pushing herself to the every plateau. Her forte is Ninjutsu, but Jin enjoys Taijutsu above all activities.

Family[/i]: Jin loves her family and her Clan above all things including her life. There is nothing she isn't willing to do, She is obedient and never questions until the job is complete. She is a good cook, but hates cooking unless asked by her family.

Enemy: Beware the wrath of Jin. Well versed in The Art of War by Sun Tsu, Jin is no tiny obstacle.

[/li][li]Alignment: neutral; will listen to any ones cause and only if i must, i will react.

[/li][li]Allegiance: Hyuga, Konoha

[/li][li]Quirks & Tendencies: Jin likes to Train, she always wants to be come just like her older sister. By no means is Jin a strategist but she has been known to play chess with her family. Its not anything that has been publicly announced and something Jin keeps quiet for the sake of name calling.

[/li][li]Likes & Dislikes: Jin likes smiling, she see's the world in ways she feels is comedic and twisted which makes her smile. Animals, natures other beasts, watching animals and their grazing pattern, habits, lifestyles is an all time favorite of hers. When She was a child her mother had taken her and her sister to the Wilderness on a vacation. The bugs, with their colonies, nests, organization got the best of Jin. For two days she followed the bugs and archived everything. She did all this from a meter away with her byakugan. She learned to cook wild game, how to gut, clean and prep the meat and the hot springs JIN LOVES HOT springs after a long day there is nothing better than sitting in naturally heated water and feel all your chakra returning at a rapid rate.
She DISLIKES bad vibes, and mad men. Jin does not dislike things much.
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ARMAMENTS[/u]

• Primary Weapons:
  
  "Fist Knife"
  Rank: C
  Type: Primary / Melee
  Description: A fist knife is, as its name implies, a small dagger with T-shaped handle. The user grips the handle so that the blade protrudes at the knuckles, allowing for the use of full force behind a close-fisted thrust.
  
  
• Secondary Weapons:
  
  
• 1) "Makibishi" (Ground Spikes)
  Rank: D
  Type: Secondary / Ranged
  Special: 20 per Pack.
  Description: Makibishi are small, sharp objects that are mainly used to inhibit someone from walking in a certain direction or area, since they would injure the ninja's feet if they tried to walk over them. Although ineffective when used individually, they can severely cripple a whole enemy unit with appropriate use.
  
  
• 2) "Senbon Launcher"
  Rank: C
  Type: Modification
  Special: Launcher holds up to 5 Senbon. Takes up 2 'Pack' slots. Senbon travel 20 meters at double their normal speed before losing effectiveness and crashing.
  Description: Usually hidden on either of the user's forearm, this launcher can be used to send needles at their opponents at higher speeds with better accuracy. Up to five needles can be launched at once, resulting in deadly surprise.
  
  
• 3)"Senbon" (Throwing Needles)
  Rank: D
  Type: Secondary / Ranged
  Special: 10 per Pack.
  Description: Senbon were first used by doctors in acupuncture, but due to its reported widespread effectiveness, it was quickly adopted by ninja in order to hit points on the body that can induce paralysis, loss of consciousness, or even death.
  
  
• 4) Kunai (Throwing Knife)
  Rank: D
  Type: Secondary / Melee + Ranged
  Special: 2 per Pack.
  Description: This throwing knife is one of the common weapons of a ninja. It is often kept in a holster on the leg in a pouch attached to the belt. What makes it so versatile and universal is the fact the Kunai can be used in conjunction with explosive tags and other weapons to form deadly combos out of simple, easily accessible items.
  
  

• Items:
  
  
• "Radio"
  Rank: C
  Type: Accessory / Self
  Special: Has a range up to 10 miles.
  Description: The short range radio is capable of keeping ninja in contact across several miles. The radio can accept multiple frequencies and is activated to talk by pushing a button on the neck attachment, making it simple to use even in the most dire of situations. With a durable carapace, it is designed to withstand water damage and even the pressure of extreme altitudes.
  
  
  
  
• Jutsu:
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• 4 D, 2 C

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[/li][li]Reppuu (Violent Wind)
Rank: D
Type: Offensive / Taijutsu
Range: 0 - 5 meters
Stamina: Low
Special: Affects up to one opponent per kick, plus one more each time retrained, as long as opponent's are within the 5 meter vicinity of the kick.
Description: Using their quickness and agility, the user moves low to the ground, dropping and delivering a spinning kick to sweep their opponent off their feet.
Domain: Goken.

[/li][li]Genjutsu Kai! (Release)
Rank: D, C, B, A, S
Type: Supplementary / Ninjutsu
Range: Self
Chakra: See special!
Special: User can only release themselves from illusions of equal or lower rank. Chakra costs is equal to the Genjutsu being dispelled.
Description: Kai is a Ninjutsu technique which allows the ninja to avoid the effects of a Genjutsu illusion. After forming the needed handseals, the Genjutsu technique will not affect the ninja. The ninja can also use the technique on another individual who was unable to avoid the attack. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja touches the one affected to end the affect of the spell.
Domain: Universal Ninjutsu.

[/li][li]Juuho Soushiken (Gentle Step Twin Lion Fist)
Rank: D, C, B, A, S
Type: Offensive / Clan Taijutsu
Range: Self
Chakra: D: Low, C-B: Mid, A-S: High per turn.
Special: Sharpness of claws and victim chakra loss is determined by the highest known rank.
Description: Of the few non-main Gentle Fist techniques, Juuho Soushiken is nonetheless an attack to be feared. After gathering chakra into their fists, the Hyuuga will skillfully spin and rush towards their target in order strike them. Spectral heads of pure, Hyuuga chakra will then form around their fists, forming two large lion-shaped shrouds that can be used to attacks the opponent. Because of their nature, they can move past solid defenses and attack the opponent internally. Best of all, because of the chakra's nature, any contact the claws have with the victim's chakra network results in immediate chakra loss - a condition made likely with the tenketsu revealing powers of Byakugan.
Domain: Hyuuga.


[/li][li]Jūkenpō Ichigekishin (Ultimate One Body Blow)
Rank: D, C, B, A, S
Type: Defensive / Offensive / Clan Taijutsu
Range: Self
Chakra: Low - Massive
Special: Uses up chakra proportionate to highest rank learned. Requires contact. Breaks through prisons equal to highest rank learned.
Description: Using their ability to expel chakra from every chakra point on their body, a member of the Hyuuga clan can hit their opponent with a blast of chakra that will send them flying away from the user in the form of a single handtap, or even when the enemy attempts to touch the Hyuuga or trap them. It is also useful when the Hyuuga has been bound by an enemy, targeting weak points in the prison that they see with their Byakugan with their sudden chakra rush in order to dispel it. This technique was made legendary when its creator employed it to save themselves from sudden crystallization at the hands of a Shoton master.
Domain: Hyuuga.

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[/li][li]Raiken (Thunder Fist)
Rank: C
Type: Offensive / Taijutsu
Range: 0 - 5 meters
Stamina: Mid
Special: Each time retrained, the user spins once more, and as a result stacks on extra 'C' ranked damage.
Description: Yet another wild and unpredictable Goken technique, the user proceeds to rush at their opponent with all their might, jump and then spin to gain momentum, so that they may lay a powerful strike onto their target.
Domain: Goken.

[/li][li]Hakke Sanjuunishou (Eight Divination Signs, Thirty-Two Palms of the Hand)
Rank: C
Type: Offensive / Clan Taijutsu
Range: 0 - 5 meters
Consumption: Chakra: Low; Stamina: Mid
Special: Each successful set of strikes can seal off one particular type of chakra flow - be it a certain release, genjutsu, or ninjutsu - for up to three posts, plus one more each time retrained. Moves around the Hakke to strike at near-shunshin speeds.
Description: Once the Hyuuga is comfortable envisioning their Hakke domain and establishing it as their own personal striking grounds, they are taught the art of striking and sealing tenketsu. Moving their hands and arms and bullet like speeds, the Hyuuga extends their palm towards their enemy, and leads with both hands outstretched, so that their fingers land first - 2 strikes, then 4, 8, 16, and finally, 32 tenketsu. As the victim is caught in attack, they are temporarily paralyzed if they are touched even once. Although the result isn't as drastic as 64 or 128 strikes, it can nonetheless close off a specific type of chakra flow within the victim of the Hyuuga's choosing.
Domain: Hyuuga.


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[1] By releases and senses, we mean genjutsu senses and natural affinities. You're allowed to start off with one, and the byakugan shouldn't be in this section. For a list of our releases Here and our genjutsu senses are Here. This means that you can choose any one; Fire, water, wind or a genjutsu sense of you want, have a look at which ones we have and pick the one that suits your character most!

Types: Byakugan,?

[2] Our site runs on a system of types, I'll give you an example below of what we mean by types:

[/i] and taijutsu.
So, you have to arrange these three in the order which your character is strongest at. For example, my own character is Ninjutsu, tajutsu then genjutsu finally.

The first one you choose (In my case, ninjutsu) is called a primary.
The second one, a secondary.
And the third, a teritary.

You can swap these about however you like, for example if you want for example you can be genjutsu, taijutsu, ninjutsu or taijutsu, ninjutsu, genjutsu if you want, or any combinatioN!
But keep in mind, there are advantages and disadvantages to how you choose your types!

Primaries (1) can learn up to.. S-ranked technique.
Secondaries (2) can only learn up to.. B-ranked techniques.
Tertiaries (3) can learn up to.. D-ranked techniques.

So choose carefully![/ul]

Alignment: Hyuga

[3] For info on alignments click Here. You can choose to be any alignment you want! Like chaotic evil, or true neutral, have a look and see which one best fits your character!

Allegiance: Hyuga

[4] Where does your allegiance lie? If it's only with the Hyuuga then that's fine, but if you're a dedicated shinobi from Konohagakure then it's worth to put Konohagakure down here as well.

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YOUR WEAPONS

[/b][/color] You get 5 free packs. I've seen you've gotten sort of the jist of it, but keep in mind that two of the secondary weapons you've chosen (Senbon launcher and kunai spring) take up 2 packs each, so at the moment you've chosen 7 packs. So, remove a few things to make sure that you're at the 5 packs limit.
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YOUR TECHNIQUES

[/b][/color] As a character from a Kekkei Genkai (The Hyuuga) you start off with 300 EXP. Our site runs on a system of EXP, which is basically, the amount of points that each person has with all of their techniques combined, so you have 300 EXP to get techniques with, but keep in mind that each technique has a different rank, and with different ranks come different prices!

[/b][/color] 25 EXP
C-RANKS ARE 50 EXP
B-RANKS ARE 100 EXP
A-RANKS ARE 150 EXP
S-RANKS ARE 300 EXP[/ul]

As a new character, you're not allowed to start off with any techniques of higher rank than "B", so remember that!

So, how it works is basically, you spend your EXP on techniques. For instance with 300 EXP, you could buy 3 B-Ranks, 6 C-Ranks or 12 D-Ranks, or any combination, for instance one B-Ranked technique and four C-Ranks, if that makes sense?

When you're putting techniques on your bio, please copy and paste them on like this:

Chuusijin no Jutsu (Stomping Monkey’s Quake Technique)
Rank: C [50 EXP]
Type: Supplementary / Doton Ninjutsu
Range: See special!
Chakra: Mid
Special: Range of earthquake depends on the user’s level of Earth Dominion. As long as anyone except the user is within range of the quake and standing atop the ground, they will automatically suffer serious balance and orientation disruption, resulting in a 50% loss of speed - effects aren't auto however, and can be evaded with clever RP. Quake lasts the entire turn, and can be used once per thread, plus one more each time retrained.
Description: As its name implies, this basic yet efficient technique results in the wielder forming a few simple handseals and then stomping and pounding the ground wildly, their limbs coated in a special chakra. As they pound away, the earthquake consumes the area, disrupting balance and speed. Very good for when faced with waves of opponents, or for taking down weakened edifices.
Domain: Doton. Earth Dominion 'C'.

And, you might find techniques with ranks ranging from D, C, B, A, S on them, like this one below. In this case: UNDERLINE the rank that you know, and keep in mind that if you want the B-Ranked version or the C-Ranked version, you'll have to pay for all the ranks underneath it. For instance, if you want the B-Ranked one, you'll also have to pay for the C-Rank and the D-Rank version, which totals to 175 EXP spent.

Doton Ryouuken (Earth Dominion)
Rank: D, C, B, A, S [175 EXP]
Type: Supplementary / Doton Ninjutsu
Range: 0 - 50 meters
Chakra: Mid
Special: Establishes the area of earth a user can control for their techniques. Dominion extends 10 meters in every direction of the user, and goes up 10 more with each rank learned.
Description: The basis behind the majority of Doton techniques lie in the user's ability to control the very earth around them. 'Earth Dominion' is just as its name implies, a fundamental supplementary jutsu of Doton nature that allows the user to intermingle their chakra with that of nature, harmonizing the two in order to create complete control over the earth around them. Once this link is achieved, the door is opened for greater creations to be made.
Domain: Doton.

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So yeah, that's basically it from what I can see! If you need any more help or anything explained a bit better, just post here or send a staff member (Dark blue + green names) a PM!
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[eurin8]

Thank you, i will edit Meow!

[Trigga]

Hola! and welcome to NRP!

Fist off, could you please edit your latest post, and copy all that into your initial? Its neater that way and there's really no need to have to application posts in one application thread.

Secondly, I count 325 exp used. Starting off with a Kekkei Genkai only warrants 300; please edit your jutsu accordingly to fit.

[eurin8]

How about this?

[Trigga]

You have a few broken codes, namely the list tags. Once those are corrected, you have my 1²

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SEEAAK! AWESOME!

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If you want to be in main house, I'm going to need to see a lot more writing on both personality and appearance. For some examples of main-house Hyuuga profiles which have been accepted:

[/b][/color] Shoumetsu Hyuuga
> Ichijin Hyuuga
> Kaeor Hyuuga

A technique or so in your bio requires to be main house to learn, so if you want to be main house; Try and be very thorough with your writing when it comes to description (:
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[eurin8]

..1 more approval and i can do mission and posts.

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[Messatsu!]

Jutsu could look a bit neater but 2/2

[eurin8]

how would you like me to edit my jutsu.