Vocal Technique [Revamp]

[KID GAMBINO.]

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Alright, deciding to revamp some of my old submitted techniques. Before Ototon had been worked on (and only had two techniques), I submitted these techniques. However, with the new chakra system and introduction of new Ototon techs, I have no choice but to remove Vocal Paralysis (since Kiai does the exact same thing). In addition, I also made Isseppaku multi-ranked, added knock-back distance and status ailment duration, as well as removed the necessity to perform handseals, since Kiai doesn't require them at all. Also added Sound Dominion 'B' to the Dominion.

Isseppaku [Vocal Pressure]
Rank: D, C, B, A, S
Type: Offensive / Ototon Ninjutsu
Range: See special!
Chakra: Low - Very High
Special: Pressure range depends on the user's highest Sound Dominion range. Causes both physical and neurological pain, inducing nausea, temporary dizziness, and difficulty with balance. While screaming, the user must remain in place. Highest rank known determines knock-back range and how long the effects of the user's scream last upon it's victims.

[/b] 1 meter; 1/8th of a turn
C: 3 meters; 1/4th of a turn
B: 5 meters; Half a turn
A: 7 meters; 3/4th's of a turn
S: 10 meters; Whole turn[/ul]Description: Isseppaku is quite a powerful technique created by the masters of the Sound Element, allowing advanced control over their vocal distribution. Upon completing the necessary handseals, the user collects chakra within their vocal cords, allowing the pressure to build. Once enough chakra is sustained, the user screams forth in a specific direction, releasing pressurized sound waves to blast into the distance, knocking any unfortunate beings within the technique's range off their feet and thrown meters behind. The size of the sound wave is a mere meter-by-meter diameter.
Domain: Ototon. Ototon Ryouuken 'B'.[/blockquote][/blockquote][/justify]

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[addy-hime ♥]

Although the 'Kiai' technique does not mention performing handseals, it still requires them. That's the same with all jutsu: unless they specifically say the user doesn't have to perform handseals, they must be done.

That being said—and kept in mind for this technique—the only thing I see incorrect here is your chakra. The 'D' rank version is usually 'Low,' but you can have it 'Mid' if you want.. but the 'S' rank of this needs to be AT LEAST 'Very High.'

[KID GAMBINO.]

Huh, that's strange, I thought it was the other way around with handseals. Modified it to where it states the user must perform handseals.

Also, I made the chakra consumption like that because this is basically a variation of Kiai, which had the same chakra consumption of "Mid - High". However, I don't mind making it "Low - Very High", so that has been modified as well.

[addy-hime ♥]

A lot of the releases are going through revamp right now by staff.. so they're not completely accurate themselves. x3

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