Kikai Metamorph Branch

[Messatsu!]

Kikaichuu Body Formation
Rank: C, B
Type: Supplementary / Clan Ninjutsu
Range: Self
Chakra: High - Mid Upkeep per turn
Special:Speed and range depends on users 'Highest Kikaichuu No jutsu' rank. Limbs are the size of 1 meter in diameter and length, plus one more each time retrained for a maximum of 5. Each time B rank is retrained it adds one extra limb for a total of four (two hands & two feet). As long as Mid upkeep is held each turn, limbs can exist anywhere within users 'Kikaichuu no jutsu' range.

Description: As both user and kikaichuu benefit from one another they share a strong bond, both spiritual and physical. Coupled with the fact that the Kikaichuu are Sentient and malleable, they can gather and form a great many shapes of many sizes. In this particular case they form appendages, hands, feet, etc etc. Due to the property shift from the Kikaichuu's metamorphosis and the Razor Kikaichuu, the limbs become solid and hardened, wielding near bone shattering force behind its attack along with the kikaichuu's newly gained ability to pierce and cut from the metamorphosis. Razor Kikaichuu must be activated beforehand for Kikaichuu body Formation to be achieved.
Domain: Aburame | Kikaichuu metamorphosis 'C' | Must know Razor Kikaichuu C.

[Comatose]

I don't think "carrying explosive force behind its blows" is a good way to describe what you mean despite me understanding fully what you're saying. Others will likely take this the completely wrong way, and it will cause some confusion.

Also, this technique should not gain an innate benefit from Razo Kikaichuu in such a way you describe, unless it is a direct branch of it. I see you have listed it pretty much as such, but I wanted to be clear. You should be a bit more succinct as it is wordy in places. There should also be a note that you will have to use Razor Kikaichuu, and then this. You cannot simply use this without having paid the required chakra for the Razor Kikaichuu beforehand.

[Messatsu!]

Edited Accordingly.

[Kii!]

For organizational purposes, could you add that mid upkeep is required in the chakra section? Secondly, the technique should require metamorphosis and razor kikaichuu of equal rank, rather than just C rank, as is listed now.

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Edited.

[Comatose]

Can't see anything else wrong. 1 / 2

[Kii!]

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