Deaths defense

[nnja2]

Yoroi no Shinigami
[Armor of the death god]
Rank: B
Type: Defensive
Range: Self
Chakra/Stamina: Mid
Special: Speed of formation and strength of the Armour is based on the users Shikotsumyako rank. To obtain a rank for the armor the user must have that rank already in Shikotsumyako. Armour can be maintained for two posts. Requires a one post cool down. Retraining adds one post jutsu can be maintained for.

• D rank = Instantaneous = Blocks D rank attacks
  
• C rank = 2 seconds = Blocks C rank attacks
  
• B rank = 4 seconds = Blocks B rank attacks
  
• A rank = 6 seconds = Blocks A rank attacks
  
• S rank = 8 seconds = Blocks S rank attacks
  

Description: An extremely useful and powerful defensive technique of the Kaguya clan Yoroi no Shinigami can provide an almost unbeatable defense depending on the users skill in Shikotsumyako. The armor forms all over the body, it is a thin layer of bone. Special joints of bone grow with it around the users joints so movement is not reduced at all. Whilst the user may perform other Kaguya techs in conjunction along with Taijutsu, Ninjutsu and Genjutsu techs cannot be used.
Domain: Kaguya

[♠Solo♠]

I personally think this technique should just go through the ranks of D - S itself, instead of depending on another technique. Also, a grammatical error I see. Kind of confused me at first. Might wanna read over it again, for the sake of whom ever else looks at the technique.

The armor forms all over in a thin layer of centimeter or so.

[nnja2]

Since calcium compression already counts as how hard the bone Kaguy produce is i felt it silly to do a d to a ranking for the Armour. hence why they are linked

[永遠に]

Your ranks are backwards for the technique. The instantaneous formation should be for the D ranked version and so on because a stronger armor would require an extended formation period.

[nnja2]

I can understand that point. Edited accordingly

[.DEVIOUS]

You should probably list the domain.

[nnja2]

Added, is that all?

[♠Solo♠]

I think it's fine now. 1.2

[永遠に]

2.2 good job kiddo. ur still not gonna win