Iwagakure exclusive part 2

[nnja2]

Tsuchi deido no jutsu
Art of spitting Mud
Rank: D
Chakra consumption: Low
Type: Offensive/Ninjutsu
Range: 5-20m
Special: Retraining allows for an extra five meters of range, the maximum being 20m. Retraining also reduces time it takes to harden by five seconds for a maximum of five seconds to harden.
Description: Drawing chakra from the stomach the user turns it into mud before spewing it out with moderate force. The mud will harden on it's own twenty seconds after leaving the mouth. An excellent jutsu to use to slow or capture an opponent.
Domain: Doton.

Sōken Gūzou no Jutsu
Art of statue creation
Rank: C
Chakra Consumption: Mid
Type: Defensive/Ninjutsu
Range: 0-10m
Special: Statue maximum height is 6ft. Forms immediately from ground. Able to block attacks of up to B rank. Each retrain allows one more statue to be created.
Description: Forming the necessary four kata the user will slam their hands upon the floor causing the earth to rise upward swiftly, the earth will take on the shape and style of a statue. The details of which can be chosen by the user. The user picks where the statue appears in the ten meter range upon slamming their hands upon the ground, the user does not have to keep their hands upon the ground after forming the kata and slamming their hands down the jutsu is cast.
Domain: Doton.

Tsuchi etsudoku no jutsu
Art of earth reading
Rank:D, C, B, A, S
Chakra Consumption: Low to High
Type: Supplementary/Ninjutsu
Range: 0-100sqm
Special: Each rank of jutsu gives 20m range.
Description: Forming the needed kata the user will be able to sense any vibrations on the ground within the area. Each rank granting further expansion of this area. This allows shinobi whom lack a dojutsu such as the Sharingan to be given a sense of vision around them and is also an excellent way to combat jutsu such as Kirigakure and Mesaigakure.
Domain: Doton.

Tsuchi gorem no jutsu
Art of earth golem
Rank: B
Chakra consumption: Mid
Type: Supplementary/Ninjutsu
Range: 0-5m
Special: One more golem can be formed each time retrained.
Description: Upon forming a string of five kata a giant golem standing up to ten feet will emerge from the ground around the user. Formed from a series of giant rocks and boulders this impressive creation is a formidable foe. It's speed despite it's size is equal to the users and it's strength is formidable, able to smash wood and rock alike. Because of it's make up the Golem can take a heft amount of damage, one A rank strike would be required to destroy the Golem in one, then two B ranks and three C ranks.
Domain: Doton.

Tsuchi Hyōsei Satsujin
Earth binding murder
Rank: B
Chakra consumption: Mid
Type: Offensive/Ninjutsu
Range: 0-20m
Special: Three arms are formed. Retraining allows for one extra arm.
Description: A fearsome jutsu, after forming the necessary kata three arms of solid earth will rise from the ground around the opponent aiming to ensnare them, these arms are quite swift and have a maximum reach of 5m. A ranked effort would be required to break out of the grasp of the arms once ensnared and B ranked attacks will destroy them.
Domain: Doton.

[Icarus]

Ear To Sand
Rank: D,C,B,A,S
Type: Sensory - Ninjutsu
Range: 10 Meters plus 10 more per rank
Special/Description: A very useful technique employed by sensory ninjas who inhabit the country of wind. Because of the mirages and the great lengths of the desert tracking and recon is often difficult. This jutsu with a handseal and chakra allows the user to by closing their eyes and placing their ear to the sand experience a sort of sonar not unlike bats, they can tell if someone is walking on the sand within a certain range. At D rank they can tell if someone is within 15 meters. At C rank they can tell how many people are within 25 meters. At B rank They can tell the direction they are moving within 35 meters. At A rank they can tell experience all of the above in real time along with being able to distinguish between clones within 45 meters. At S rank within 75 meters they can "see" the person based solely on vibrations. Every rank carries the effects of the previous rank so the S rank can see everything D-A can including its own effect.
Domain: Sensory - Suna Exclusive

Sand Clotting Jutsu
Rank: D
Type: Medical Ninjutsu
Range: Hand
Special/Description: By grabbing a handful of sand and applying chakra to it, the user can then place it over superficial cuts. Once applied the sand converts itself into the same material as the users skin, this jutsu is only a makeshift healing technique as it remains as skin for only one turn plus one more each time retrained.
Domain: Medical Ninjutsu - Suna Exclusive

[nnja2]

All i can say is the art of earth reading differs in the following and honestly i haven't even looked at Suna's exclusive jutsu. I've only seen the former Iwa exclusives and Kiri ones.

: A very useful technique employed by sensory ninjas who inhabit the country of wind.

Earth reading can be used by any shinobi no just sensory types. This is sensing vibrations through the ground no chakra.

This jutsu with a handseal and chakra allows the user to by closing their eyes and placing their ear to the sand experience a sort of sonar not unlike bats

For earth reading one does not need to place their ear to the ground. Instead they can sense the vibrations by becoming tuned with the earth around them.

Healing of the earth in it's description is more potent and a higher rank. The only similarity really is between the use of sand and earth. And really i'd expect Kiri to have a healing water jutsu. These jutsu i made are in no way rips the fact they are similar in nature to some is mere coincidence. A few come from previous sites i have been of and worked on.

[nnja2]

Bump.

[Axcel]

The first jutsu needs to have handseals. For the rest, remove the bit where it specifies the amount of hand seals as each rank already has a certain amount so it's unnecessary (you can find the numbers here narutorplay.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=rules&action=display&thread=535 ).

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Art of Spitting Mud – gonna need handseals no matter their primary type. I’d also suggest that retraining allows for 5 more meters of spitting.

Art of Statue Creation – need to point out how strong its defense is. Note that five seconds is an entire round. Additionally, point out whether the user must keep their hands upon the ground for the entire process of the statues creation or just slam their hands on the ground, pick the location within’ a ten meter radius and the techniques starts?

Art of Earth Reading – Hmm, the “can be maintained whilst other jutsu are being used” seems a bit sketchy. Also remove the “The chakra cost is one rank lower for Ninjutsu primaries.” Just use the chakra mastery in Doton. Basically for this technique to work their concentration would be on this technique alone. Once the opponent moves and they record that said movement then they can snap outta it and use further techniques.

Art of Earth Golem – Remove “Capable of crushing a man to death with one blow.” Also state their defensive properties, their speed properties and etc. Basically get far more descriptive with this one.

Art of Great Artificial Earthquake – This pretty much already exist, read “Chuusijin no Jutsu” this ones just ten times more overhax.

Healing of the Earth – Can’t see it, medic is medic and doton is doton. Can’t really mix the two into one technique QQ. Gonna have to 1.2 deny this one, sorry mang. shit, not on my staff account QQ

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[nnja2]

Thank you for the pointers. Edited accordingly, healing earth and great earthquake removed one extra jutsu added.

[Kii!]

On the first one, I'd probably state the time it takes to harden in terms of turns rather than minutes. Just a suggestion, but five minutes is far longer than almost any combat situation will last (at ~5 seconds a post), so the hardening doesn't have as much use during combat as out of it.

On the art of earth reading, I'd lower the chakra consumption to low to high; massive is reserved for special jutsu, like suishouha, that take immense amounts of chakra.

[nnja2]

Edited accordingly.

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