tale of the raging demon!

[kamui]

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♔ PERSONOLOGY ♔
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NAME:[/b]: sekijun, kiri.
ALIAS:[/b]: shun goku satsu | 瞬獄殺 | raging demon.
CLAN:[/b]: ---.
AGE:[/b]: nineteen.
BORN ON:[/b]: december 21st.

BORN IN:[/b]: earth.
VILLAGE OF ALLEGIANCE:[/b] stone.
RANK:[/B]: genin.
PROFESSION:[/B]: shinobi.
DIFFICULTY SETTING:[/B]: advanced.

[/B]: genjutsu,
• SECONDARY: ninjutsu,
• TERTIARY: taijutsu.[/ul]

♔ PHYSICALITY

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HEIGHT:[/B]: 5'9"ft.
WEIGHT:[/B]: 125lbs.
PHYSICAL FORM:[/B]: athletic.
HAIR COLOUR:[/B]: two tones; ebony && ivory.
EYE COLOUR:[/B]: scarlet.
PHYSICAL APPEARANCE::[/B]:

kiri is tall and lean, though, he isn't the tallest of all, mostly just an average height male, but, his leanness would make him seem taller than he is. his hair is short and messy, with a sort of spiky-like fashion to it. he has scarlet red eyes. though his body is lean, it is fairly muscular in it's stature, not too big or to small, but, just enough to see; if his clothes were removed. no one could tell he has muscles or anything with his shirt on.

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♔ COGNITION ♔
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kiri is laid-back and dreadfully honest about things. he doesn't mind saying what ever is on his mind, no matter how the person might react to it. always caring a carefree attitude around, like he doesn't have a care in the world. but, usually always being mean to people when ever he gets the chance.

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LIKES:[/B]:
• sweets,
• kirigakure,
• smoking,
• large breasts,
• books,
• cooking.

DISLIKES:[/B]:
• drinkers,
• fat people,
• flat chest girls,
• writing,
• boredom.
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ALLEGIANCE:[/B]: iwagakure && large breasted women.

ALIGNMENT:[/B]: bhad 2 da bone.

QUIRKS:[/B]:

randomly walking off from people because something interests him more than their conversation. this has gotten kiri into many confrontations, unintentionally. he also loves telling people "no~ ♥"

♔ RELATIONSHIPS ♔
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[KONOHAGAKURE Shinobi]
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[KIRIGAKURE Shinobi]
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[SUNGAKURE Shinobi]
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[KUMOGAKURE Shinobi]
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[IWAGAKURE Shinobi]
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[OTOGAKURE Shinobi]
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[KUSAGAKURE Shinobi]
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[AMEGAKURE Shinobi]
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[TAKIGAKURE Shinobi]
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[NON-NINJA]
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[MISSING Shinobi]
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[kamui]

♔ ARMAMENTS ♔
{WEAPONRY}

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Rank: C
Type: Primary / Melee
Description: A broadsword is a sword with a blade that is heavy, straight, and usually double-edged. With a blade as long as four feet, it is used primarily for slashing and thrusting.
Cost: 1,000 Ryo[/ul][/spoiler]

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Rank: D, D, D, D, D
Type: Secondary / Melee + Ranged
Description: This throwing knife is one of the common weapons of a ninja. It is often kept in a holster on the leg in a pouch attached to the belt. What makes it so versatile and universal is the fact the Kunai can be used in conjunction with explosive tags and other weapons to form deadly combos out of simple, easily accessible items.
Cost: 100 Ryo per Pack
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Rank: C
Type: Accessory / Self
Description: Similar to the communication's device in ease and effectiveness, the range finder can function both as binoculars and as a means to measure the distance to a target. snug and sleek, it fits across only one eye, and has a see-through lens that establishes visual information. With a durable carapace, it is designed to withstand water damage and even the pressure of extreme altitudes.
Cost: 3,000 Ryo per Tracker[/size][/ul][/spoiler]

[kamui]

♔ ARMAMENTS ♔
{JUTSU}
{GENJUTSU}

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These sense of touch is spread out through the body within a series of nerve endings. Thus comes the sense of touch and feel. When an illusion effectively alters anything you touch, it has tact altering capabilities. Essentially, anything that makes you enter an illusion based on how you feel - being bound, feeling burns, feeling immobile - falls under this Illusionary Sense.

[E]: 0
[D]: 1
[C]: 2
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Masteries:

TOTAL: 125 EXP

[E ranked techniques]:
None.

[D ranked techniques]:

Chishihou no Jutsu (Faux Wound Technique)

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Rank: D, C, B, A, S
Type: Supplementary / Offensive / Touch Genjutsu
Range: 0 - 5 meters
Special: Affects victims in a 5 meter radius of the user's strike. Severity of wounds depends on rank.
D: Flesh-wounds & scrapes
C: Deep cuts and stabs
B: Broken bones
A: Limb removal
S: Beheading

Description: With this simple Genjutsu of Touch, the illusionist creates the sensation of a wound onto anyone that they attack. After forming the needed seals, the user charges and strikes, and the illusion settles in. Although the victim(s) won't feel pain, they will feel the disadvantages of being injured, such as being able to walk less over a perceived broken for, or being unable to form handseals due to an imaginary chopped off hand.
Domain: Genjutsu - Illusion of Touch[/quote]

[C ranked techniques]:

Kitsunenomado (Spaghetti Fingers)
Rank: C, B
Type: Supplementary / Touch Genjutsu
Range: 0 - 10 meters
Special: Affects a single victim within 10 meters, plus 10 more each time the 'C' ranked version is retrained' 'B' rank adds an additional target each time retrained.
Description: A useful almost immediate affect that most ninja soon come to love. The user performs the needed seals to activate the technique, and the target chosen by the user is immediately affected. The victim of this technique feels theirs hands twitch straight away, then become sluggish after the initial twitch, leaving the hands to feel slow. Almost as though their hands were losing feeling and becoming numb. This has a very high potential to mess up handseals in progress, and may slow down future seals.
Domain: Genjutsu – illusion of Touch

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Nododitsumaru (Draining Oxygen Slip)

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Rank: C, B
Type: Supplementary / Touch Genjutsu
Range: 0 - 10 meters
Special: Lack of oxygen affects a single victim within a 10 meter radius from the user, plus 10 more each time retrained the 'C' ranked version is trained; 'B' raked version adds an additional vicitm each time retrained. If Genjutsu is not dispelled within 4 turns, targets fall unconscious.
Description: A simple yet affective Genjutsu used mainly as a distraction and to cause panic in the victim. After forming the needed seals, the user designates a target and the technique will start to take effect. The target of the technique will begin to feel as though they’re not taking in enough oxygen at first, with shallow and quick breaths. The next turn the target feels as though they’re taking in no oxygen at all, which is followed by the feeling of drowning. The victim's body believes it is literally taking no oxygen, and so the body doesn't search for it but instead wastes more energy trying to obtain more. This results in the target falling unconscious if the illusion goes unchecked.
Domain: Genjutsu – Illusion of Touch[/quote]

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[kamui]

♔ ARMAMENTS ♔
{JUTSU}
{ELEMENTAL NINJUTSU}

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Katon, or 'Fire Element', takes the form of fire based attacks, allowing the user to birth these flames out of thin air. Ranging from fireballs and other focused projectiles, to wide, extended flame throwing and overall area of attack jutsu, Katon is typically a specialized offensive element, and excellent for short to mid-range attacks.

[E]: 0
[D]: 1
[C]: 3
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TOTAL: 175 EXP

[E ranked techniques]:
None.

[D ranked techniques]:

Enkou Shinka (Essence of the Sacred Flames)
Rank: D, C, B, A, S
Type: Supplementary / Katon Ninjutsu
Range: 0 - 50 meters
Chakra: Mid
Special: Allows the user the ability to create, control and move Katon (Fire) chakra of their own for multiple purposes. Degree of heat and effect of flame depends on the highest rank known.

• D: 10 meters
  
• D: 20 meters
  
• D: 30 meters
  
• D: 40 meters
  
• D: 50 meters

Description: Katon, the birth of the flame itself. With but a mere thought, masters of the flame learn to birth their fire over large expanses. Intense training opens the door for other techniques, but they all rely on one simple core - the user's ability to birth a flame from a distance.
Domain: Katon.

[C ranked techniques]:
Katon Bunshin no Jutsu (Fire Clone Technique)

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Rank: C
Type: Supplementary / Katon Ninjutsu
Range: See special!
Chakra: Mid
Special: Up to one clone can be made at a time, plus one more each time retrained. When struck, the clone's fiery essence forces whatever was used to strike it to ignite and burn within, as if it had just struck the bowels of a fire breathing dragon. Clone cannot perform any jutsu, but when defeated, it explodes in a burst of flames, spreading its burning essence everywhere. Explosion range covers 5 meters all around the clone.
Description: With this technique, the Katon user is able to call upon aid from a perfect copy of themselves. Comprised purely of a most intense fire, this clone retains the user movement speed and can share linked mental judgement. Best of all, due to its flowing essence, many solid physical attacks pass through the clone, burning instead whatever was used to strike them. Finally, when defeated, the clone explodes into a blast of flame that aims to take over the nearest opponent available in the form of napalm.
Domain: Katon. Enkou Shinka.

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Goukakyuu no Jutsu (Great Fireball Technique)
Rank: C
Type: Offensive / Katon Ninjutsu
Range: See special!
Chakra: Mid
Special: Distance and size of flames depends on the user's highest 'Enkou Shinka' rank, halved. Because the flames are slightly more intense than other katon jutsu, each time this is retrained, the user can stack 'C' ranked burning damage. However, when using this jutsu, the user must be standing still in order to control the powerful stream of fire.
Description: Goukakyuu no Jutsu is a fundamental katon ninjutsu technique which allows the user to freely control fire itself as it leaves their body. The ninja does the necessary hand seals, draws chakra from their mouth into their chest and them immediately exhales it. During this point, they then blow a stream of fire which erupts into a large sphere of flames. To better manage the flames the ninja will bring their hand to their mouth to control it.
Domain: Katon. Enkou Shinka 'C'.[/quote]

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[kamui]

♔ ARMAMENTS ♔
{JUTSU}
{NINJUTSU}

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[E]: 0
[D]: 1
[C]: 1
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TOTAL: 75 EXP

[E ranked techniques]:
None.

[D ranked techniques]:

Genjutsu Kai (Release)

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Rank: D, C, B, A, S
Type: Supplementary / Ninjutsu
Range: Self
Chakra: See special!
Special: User can only release themselves from illusions of equal or lower rank. Chakra costs is equal to the Genjutsu being dispelled.
Description: Kai is a Ninjutsu technique which allows the ninja to avoid the effects of a Genjutsu illusion. After forming the needed handseals, the Genjutsu technique will not affect the ninja. The ninja can also use the technique on another individual who was unable to avoid the attack. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja touches the one affected to end the affect of the spell.
Domain: Universal Ninjutsu.[/quote]

[C ranked techniques]:
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[E]: 5
[D]: 0
[C]: 0
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TOTAL: 0 EXP

[E ranked techniques]:
freebies!

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[E]: 0
[D]: 1
[C]: 0
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TOTAL: 125 EXP

[E ranked techniques]:
None.

[D ranked techniques]:

Shunshin no Jutsu (Body Flicker Technique)

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Rank: D, D, D, D, D
Type: Supplementary / Ninjutsu / High-Speed Movement
Range: 0 - 10 meters
Chakra: Low
Special: Flickering is near-instantaneous forward movement, meaning the user will rush almost instantly to wherever they are facing as chakra pushes their legs to inhumane levels. The user can flicker once per thread, plus once more each time retrained. One cannot attack or perform techniques during Shunshin.
Description: Shunshin no Jutsu is a basic ninjutsu technique used across the shinobi world by all, ranging from the most basic shinobi to the legends of lore. Considered is a high-speed movement technique, it allows a ninja to move short to long distances at an almost untraceable speed - to an observer, it appears as if the user has teleported. Such a feat is accomplished by using chakra to temporarily vitalise the body and move at extreme speeds they would otherwise be unable to reproduce. In the end, the user will appear and disappear in an instant, allowing them to retreat or attack suddenly should they need it. To facilitate the movement the ninja will often use nearby elements such as mist, sand or leaves to mask their appearance or disappearance.
Domain: Shunshin - Universal Ninjutsu.[/quote]

[C ranked techniques]:
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♔ ARMAMENTS ♔
{JUTSU}
{TAIUTSU}

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[E]: 0
[D]: 0
[C]: 0
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TOTAL: 0 EXP

[E ranked techniques]:
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[D ranked techniques]:
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[C ranked techniques]:
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[kamui]

♔ ARMAMENTS ♔
{EXP CALCULATING}
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Genjutsu • Sight:[/b] 125 EXP
Release: Katon:[/b] 175 EXP
Ninjutsu:[/b] 200 EXP
Taijutsu:[/b] 0 EXP

Total amount of EXP: 500 EXP

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[Apple]

[/b][/color] Axcel's comment looks lovely >( Obstructing the profile and everything, quit complaining! Lol jk

[2] You've currently got three packs, feel free to choose two more so that your total is five!

[3] You've chosen Uchiha, but your profile was made before the update to the ban list that banned Uchihas from being created, so I do believe that you're saved and you're allowed the BL! CONGRATS! I'm not quite 100% sure on how to grade Uchiha, but Coma told me that you need to PM a lead moderator (The guys in green) to determine whether you get the first tomoe or not.

[4] I'd like to see a little bit written about the appearance of your guy, like a paragraph or so explaining what he looks like as most bio's tend to have that in their profile, but that's just me nitpicking.

[5] Your counting for genjutsu is incorrect. You've highlighted the C rank for the false wound technique, but you haven't counted the EXP for buying the D rank (The techniques are in a teardrop form, meaning that you have to purchase the level below before buying the next, etc) so you need to add an extra 25 to your count, and remember to move it to the C ranked section of your bio. ALSO: All new characters can have techniques B rank and under, so please remove the darth vader technique.

[E]: 0
[D]: 0
[C]: 3
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Masteries:

TOTAL: 300 EXP

[6] Once more, with your fire release the count is incorrect. You've again highlighted a technique to bold at C rank, yet you've placed it in the D-Rank section and haven't counted the EXP that the B-Rank needs, so your total would be 225, assuring that you meant to bold the C-Ranked version and not the D-Ranked.

[E]: 0
[D]: 0
[C]: 4
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TOTAL: 200 EXP

[7] Ohmaigawd it happened again! (But it's no problem!) In universal ninjutsu you've highlighted Genjutsu kat at rank B, but you haven't counted the EXP Needed for ranks "D" and "C", so your total for universal ninjutsu would be 175, counting the 100 for the B-rank, the 25 for the D-Rank, and the 50 for the C-Rank. Remember; If you choose multi-ranked techniques, you HAVE to start from the bottom up, adding EXP as you go along.

[E]: 0
[D]: 0
[C]: 0
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TOTAL: 100 EXP

[8] Just saw your total count- Unless you're a revamp or something, or you've gotten your EXP from some bonus (State these!) as a character with a blood limit, you start off with 300 EXP, so please re-arrange your EXP accordingly to fit with these, remembering what I've said about multi-ranked technique.
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[kamui]

did everything you asked. xP

[Axcel]

The ban on Uchihas was never lifted, so I'm sorry to say you'll have to choose another Kekkei Genkai D:

[kamui]

do i get more EXP for dropping the KG?

[chiatsuki]

yes, you do. You get 500 exp for being a normal character but there is something I noticed that was off that no one had caught yet.

Look in your bio towards your katon index, you have enkou shinka 'D' ranking. Your C ranked katon jutsu requires you have the 'C' ranking of enkou shinka. Please update your jutsu purchase or increase the rank in your enkou shinka.