Koh Hokkaido

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”Focus is the only way you will achieve anything in life”
KOH HOKKAIDO
”I’m capable of anything I put my mind to.”

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-- CHARACTERISTICS

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• Koh is the Japanese word for ice, it was giving to him because of his fathers strong belief in his new born son.

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SURNAME; Hokkaido

• Hokkaido was an surname that Koh's family picked up a long time ago, it was there attempt to separate them self from the majority of the clan. The name it self doesn't have an lot of meaning to it, they just like the ring it had to it.

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MONIKER; Ice fend

• Koh has not done enough in his life time to his name, it still something he wants people to call him by.

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AGE; 18
D.O.B; Twenty-Ninth of January.
BIRTH COUNTRY; Mizu no Kuni.
VILLAGE; Kumogakure no Sato.

RANK; Genin, 925 exp.
PROFESSION;Oinin (Hunter Corps) .
THEME; Headlines.

CLAN; Yukina (Demons of Ice)
KEKKEI TOUTA; Hyouton (Ice)
KEKKEI GENKAI; --
TIER; Normal /intermediate

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[/color] Six Feet, Two Inches.
WEIGHT; One-hundred, forty-five pounds.
BLOOD TYPE; O+
MARITAL STATUS; Single
CHAKRA;

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-- COGNITION[/size]

[/color] Kumogakure, Family, Friends.
ALLEGIANCE²; Kumogakure
ALIGNMENT; Chaotic Good
PSYCHE;

[/b] The main trait in Koh’s personality, when he sets his mind on something he usually gets it done. It leads him down a path of power in his mind, he sets goals and the only way to progress in life is to accomplish them. When he doesn’t accomplish goals that he set’s for his self, he starts to get a feeling of incompleteness in his heart. Which he will later try to fill with something or someone else, which most people don’t deme healthy.

⇢Silly:When Koh’s out on the town or accompanied by other people he tends to very silly. From making strange voices, to doing things that would just draw attention to himself being silly is just same something that he loves to do. He is also the type of person to make jokes of anything or anyone, He really doesn’t take other peoples feelings into consideration he always speaks his mind.

⇢Vain: Koh is what some people call vain, because the way he carry him self. He doesn’t feel like anyone is less then him, but he know’s that he is a good looker person and won’t let anyone tell him something different. His appearance and talents as an ninja are considerably good in his eye’s, so he spends a lot of time talking to him self about him self, which people consider to be weird.

⇢Friendly:The last but most essential part of Koh personality, his people skills. When around other people he manages to cooperate with people, while at the same time show them a good time. He is very outgoing person no matter who, the person he speaking to or of. also when it comes to the opposite sex he is ok, he doesn’t always pick the best things to say when around females. [/size][/blockquote][/blockquote][/ul][/ul]
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• Koh stands at about six feet two inches, he also weighs about one-hundred-forty-five pounds. He is more on the slender side of the scale, sporting that 145 pound weight class. He is more toned then actually filled out, so at first glance most people would think of him to be a skinny kid. There are two features on him that stand out the most to everyone that meets him. His natural hair color which is an dark silver color, he also has a set of golden eyes. When people look into his eye they usually get lost in the natural beauty of them.

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APPAREL;

• As a social Dresser, Koh apparel changes on a day to day basis. Capable of wearing the most basic of training attire, just as well as he would, or a clean two-piece suit, he dresses to satisfy the situation with no preferred taste.

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-- PLOT

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MISSIONS;

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VICTIMS;

• DEATH;

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STORYLINE;

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-- INVENTORY

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• PRIMARY WEAPONS;
  
  
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  Standard Katana
  Rank: C.
  Type: Primary | Melee
  Special: --
  Description: Commonly refereed to as a 'Samurai sword', the katana is characterized by its distinctive appearance: a curved, slender, single edged blade up to three feet in length, circular or squared guard, and long grip to accommodate two hands. As such, it has become renowned for its sharpness and cutting ability.
  Cost: 1'000 Ryo

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⇢Kunai (Throwing Knife)x2
Rank: D
Type: Secondary / Melee + Ranged
Special: 2 per Pack.
Description: This throwing knife is one of the common weapons of a ninja. It is often kept in a holster on the leg in a pouch attached to the belt. What makes it so versatile and universal is the fact the Kunai can be used in conjunction with explosive tags and other weapons to form deadly combos out of simple, easily accessible items.
Cost: 100 Ryo per Pack

⇢ Shuriken (Ninja Star)x2
Rank: D
Type: Secondary / Ranged
Special: 5 per Pack.
Description: A shuriken, like kunai, is one of the more basic weapons employed by ninja of all classes. They are sharpened, four-pronged metal stars, no more than a few inches long, and are extremely useful for throwing. Although small, they can be used to distract, or, if accurate enough, to kill. They have an open circle in the center, used for grabbing with a finger, to avoid cutting oneself, or to put thread through. The circle is also a benefit in aerodynamics, as it ensures more accurate trajectories.
Cost: 100 Ryo per Pack
⇢Smoke Grenade
Rank: C
Type: Tool / Area of Effect
Range: 0 - 10 meters
Special: 3 per pack
Description: This explodable comes in the form of a long, skinny cylinder, no more than a few inches long. At the top lies a pin which, when pulled, activates the grenade's internal components. Within seconds, thick, dark smoke begins to spew from the cylinder, covering a wide area and leaving all those nearby blinded and gagging.
Cost: 600 per Pack

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Rank: C
Type: Accessory / Self
Special: Has a range up to 1000 yards.
Description: Similar to the communication's device in ease and effectiveness, the range finder can function both as binoculars and as a means to measure the distance to a target. snug and sleek, it fits across only one eye, and has a see-through lens that establishes visual information. With a durable carapace, it is designed to withstand water damage and even the pressure of extreme altitudes.
Cost: 3,000 Ryo per Tracker

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-- NINJUTSU

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• Yukina 525exp; exp
  
  
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  Chakra Reductions: I
  One-handed seals: I
  
  Yuki no Kami (Gods of Ice)
  Rank: D, C, B, A, S
  Type: Supplementary / Clan Kekkei Touta / Hyouton Ninjutsu
  Range: 0 - 50 meters
  Chakra: ---
  Special: Dominion extends 10 meters in every direction of the user, and goes up 10 more with each rank learned. Determines rank strength behind all CLAN Hyouton ninjutsu. If this is learned, the user automatically gains the effects of Hyouton Ryuuken (Ice Dominion), and as such does not need to learn it as this can be used as a substitute.
  Description: Able to manipulate Ice better than the rest, the Yukina Kekkei Genkai specializes in the accelerated recomposition of Hyouton chakra, able to create surdy, powerful creations within seconds. Serving as the basis to the Yukina's ability, their advanced Ice skills has earned them the nickname 'Gods of Ice'.
  Domain: Yukina.
  
  Tsubame Fubuki (Snow Storm Swallows)
  Rank: C-C
  Type: Offensive / Clan Kekkei Touta / Hyouton Ninjutsu
  Range: See special!
  Chakra: Mid
  Special: Strength and range of swallows depends on user's highest 'Yuki no Kami' rank. Up to 10 swallows may be formed when first learned, plus 10 more each time retrained. Swallows fly at speeds that of twice a well thrown kunai.
  Description: Hyouton • Tsubame Fubuki is a secret Yukina n Hyouton ninjutsu technique that, although basic, can be deadly with proper use. After a few brief seals, the clan member will create ice swallows which they can launch at their opponent at high speeds. As they fly through the air, these deadly birds can hone in on their target.
  Domain: Yukina. Yuki no Kami 'C'.
  
  Yuki Tessan (Ultra-Defense Ice Dome)
  Rank: B
  Type: Defensive / Clan Kekkei Touta / Hyouton Ninjutsu
  Range: See special!
  Chakra: High
  Special: Dome strength and range is determined by the user's highest 'Yuki no Kami' rank. Ice dome measures 10 meters in diameter. Each time retrained, defense is stacked.
  Description: Known as the Yukina's absolute defenses, this technique summons a sphere of solidified ice aimed to surround the user's body for protective purposes. This ice dome is made as a defensive measure against the outside world, or even for stealth purposes when used in conjunction with other techniques. Combined with the clan member's unique control over Hyouton, the ice dome is hailed as one of the strongest elemental defenses known to man.
  Domain: Yukina. Yuki no Kami 'B'.
  
  
  
  
  
  
• Hyouton 350 exP; exp
  
  
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  Chakra consumption: I
  
  Gentou-Hatsugoori (Bringer of Winter)
  Rank: C-C
  Type: Supplementary / Hyouton Kekkei Touta
  Range: See special!
  Chakra: Mid - High
  Special: Range of snowstorm and severity of ice depends on user's highest 'Ice Dominion' rank. Winter lasts for one turn, plus one more each time relearned.
  Description: One of the most fundamental Hyouton jutsu, the Bringer of Winter allows the shinobi to summon forth a snowstorm that provides them with enough snow and ice for the rest of the battle. After a set of handseals, the user conjures up a raging snow storm, sending their chakra overhead and forcing driving snow to fall within seconds. Ice and snow fly at rapid levels, and visibility is quickly lowered. The snow, though imbued with chakra, is still snow, meaning it is susceptible to the conditions of the temperature zone.
  Domain: Hyouton. Hyouton Ryuuken 'C'.
  
  Gengetsu Awasu (Roaring Ice Blade)
  Rank: B
  Type: Offensive / Hyouton Kekkei Touta
  Range: 0 - 5 meters
  Chakra: Mid - High
  Special: Rank of attack blade can cut through depends on user's highest 'Ice Dominion' rank. Blade can counter up to one strike before dissipating, plus one more each time retrained. Ice sword cannot surpass 6 feet.
  Description: As its name implies, the Roaring Ice Blade is a creation of pure ice, bladed to the sharpest realms, meant to resemble any blade the user thinks of. Best of all, the blade itself can withstand even the toughest of attacks with enough training, allowing the user to slice through danger without fear.
  Domain: Hyouton. Hyouton Ryuuken 'B'.
  
  Haryuu Mouko (Destruction Tiger Fierce Dragon)
  Rank: A
  Type: Offensive / Hyouton Kekkei Touta
  Range: See special!
  Chakra: Very High
  Special: Range, defensive strength and severity of ice tiger attack depends on the user's highest 'Ice Dominion' rank. Tiger may maneuvered and guided anywhere within the user's 'Ice Dominion', and moves at the speed of a kunai. Up to one tiger can be made, plus one more each time retrained.
  Description: After forming the needed handseals, a creature in the form of a tiger will rise from the surrounding ice to strike out against its target. Its cold nature can freeze any nearby water, and its large mass can cause a large amount of damage when it impacts. The body of the tiger is made of ice and moves on all fours, but for boosted speed, an ice ‘tail’ leads them back to the source of their icy existence, keeping the connection and allowing the user to spin and maneuver their creation in the air at high speeds.
  Domain: Hyouton. Hyouton Ryuuken 'A'.
  
  
  
  
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-- TAIJUTSU

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-- GENJUTSU

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-- UNIVERSAL

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• MISCELLANEOUS; 0 exp
  
  
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• ACADEMY; 0 exp
  
  
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  Rank: Rank: E [Free]
  Type: Supplementary / Ninjutsu
  Range: 0 - 5 meters
  Special: Switch is near-instantaneous. When first learned, Kawarimi can only be used once per thread, plus one more each time retrained. Can only be used once per turn, regardless of retraining.. Requires the user to switch with objects equal or smaller in size; cannot switch with other living people or animals.
  Description: This jutsu lets the user quickly switch places with another nearby object, such as a plant (normally a section of a log), an animal, or even another person within reach, the moment an attack hits. This creates an optical illusion, making the enemy think the attack was successful. The user can then use this confusion to escape or launch a counter-attack - i.e. exploding tags can be attached to the replacement for an added surprise.
  Domain: Academy Student Ninjutsu.
  
  
  Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Technique)
  Rank: E [Free]
  Type: Supplementary / Ninjutsu
  Range: Self
  Special: Allows the user to transform into any person, object or animal of normal/small/miniature size. Transformation can be held for one turn, plus one more each time retrained.
  Description: Henge no Jutsu is a very basic ninjutsu technique which every ninja learns at their respective village's Shinobi Academy. Henge allows the user to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.
  Domain:Academy Student Ninjutsu.
  
  Kakuremino no Jutsu (Magic Cloak of Invisibility Technique)
  Rank: E [Free]
  Type: Supplementary / Ninjutsu
  Range: Self
  Special: No other technique may be used while creeping.
  Description: Kakuremino no Jutsu is a very basic Ninjutsu technique. The ninja uses a camouflage cloth to cloak themselves in the background.
  Domain: Academy Student Ninjutsu.
  
  
  Nawanuke no Jutsu (Escaping Skill)
  Rank: E [Free]
  Type: Supplementary / Ninjutsu
  Range: Self.
  Special: Ineffective against complex, electronic, or unique binds.
  Description: Nawanuke no Jutsu is a very basic Ninjutsu technique that allows a ninja to escape from rope binds.
  Domain: Academy Students Ninjutsu.

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Previous Character:PROFILE
Death Thread:Fall
Total EXP:925
EXP Used:875
EXP Lost:48

[Estilo]

Christ. You obviously rushed this out. Here's what I see wrong:

• Should go without saying, but I'd appreciate it if you gave me my credit for the construction of this template.
  
• It's hard to determine whether you're a ninja of Kirigakure or Kumogakure, based on the "village", "marked location" and "allegiance" sections. Make it clear for us mods, correct your typos. Take your time.
  

• ⇢ Pack 1 Smoke Grenades [ 3 ]
  ⇢ Pack 2 Shuriken [ 5 ]
  ⇢ Pack 2 Kunai [ 2 ]

  
  I don't think I have to explain myself here. You get 5 packs in total, 3 smoke grenades count as one pack, 5 shuriken as another, and 2 kunai as the third. You still got two packs. And please, copy and paste the entire item description- so that next time I don't have to go searching for them just to be sure.
  
• Your Hyouton techniques. Read the restrictions for each:
  

  Hyouton Ryuuken 'A'.

  
  You need that technique.
  
• Your Shunshin and Miscellaneous slots claim you have exp in both. Get rid of the typo to prevent any further confusion.

In conclusion, I'd advise you review this profile a bit more- fix these typos. As someone trying to obtain status as a Yukina and KT user, try putting just a bit more effort into this.

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First I apologise for not crediting to you on you awesome template, second I fixed all my typo's I thought had change them on my word doc but I guess not, third i don't need "Hyoutoon Ryuuken" when I have "Yuki no Kami (Gods of Ice)"

"If this is learned, the user automatically gains the effects of Hyouton Ryuuken (Ice Dominion), and as such does not need to learn it as this can be used as a substitute."

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