A Failure at Role Playing.

[enzan]

Name:Fang,Yoshi,Enkon

Age:Eighteen

Lesson:Grammar,Sentence Structure, ( Everything to do with writing. )

Sample:I'm surprised, my role playing skills are less then zero even on a good day. I would like to become better, through having someone teach me how to fix well everything. I haven't really gotten use to grammar because of the horrible way it was taught to me. I tend to create short posts because of my minimal mental abilities to accurately describe a scene through my character. ( I'm a story teller so that is double embarrassing for me. )I'm incredibly embarrassed to be at my age and a truly horrid writer. I need help in literally every single aspect of my writing.

Is anyone willing to help?

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[Trigga]

While I won’t try to educate you on everything Grammar and structure, what I feel I’m good at is articulation. It’s an aspect of writing that makes it amusing and thorough; I feel it’s just as important as proper syntax is. So if you want help with that, I can try to assist ya.

[Q]

You requested my help. Here's what you need to give me.

• Link to a long thread or a couple short ones.
  
• What you feel is your strongest aspect in your RPing.
  
• What you feel is your weakest aspect in your RPing.
  
• A link to a post that shows both qualities.

[enzan]

I can use the help of you both.

My Strongest Posts

Least Favorable Posts

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[Q]

What exactly do you think is strong and weak about these posts?

[enzan]

To be really honest I'm putting them as in strong and weak but still terrible posts. I have zero ability to tell if my posts are good enough but I honestly think there all bad. I read everyone's posts mostly Kii's posts to get and idea what 10 posts and the techniques to being a better writer.

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