Hyouton V.1

[Krethean]

Technique Name Tsurara no Danmaku (Icicle Barrage)
Rank: C
Type: Offensive / Hyouton Kekkei Touta
Range: See Special!
Handseals: Yes
Chakra: Mid
Special: Range is equal to the user’s “Ice Dominion” skill. Starts with 1 shards but every retraining of this jutsu increases the shard count by 1. Every fourth retraining raises the chakra consumption to the next stage. Speed is equivalent to thrown Kunai. Flies in a straight line and its direction cannot be altered when fired.
Description: A simple offensive attack, this jutsu generates shards of pure ice and propels them towards their intended target. After performing the necessary hand seals, the user lets their chakra flow into the air around them and draws the moisture to them. As the moisture grows and becomes visible water, it freezes and continues to grow by adding more moisture then freezing it when it comes into contact with the shard. When ready, the user thrusts out their palm at the target and propels the shards with a combination of wind from the thrust and their chakra. These shards are sharp and can cut flesh and cloth, but because of their size, they can’t do significant damage against armour and metal. Despite this, they can be lethal if the user aims well at vital points that are exposed.
Domain: Hyouton. Hyouton Ryuuken ‘C’

Technique Name Hyōga o Shōjun (Ascending Glacier)
Rank: B
Type: Offensive, Defensive/ Hyouton Kekkei Touta
Range: See Special!
Handseals: Yes
Chakra: High
Special: Speed of glacier’s growth and the range the user can create the icicle is based on “Ice Dominion” Skill. Can defend against jutsu B Rank and lower, however if it is used against a B Rank Jutsu or higher, it will shatter (It will still neutralise B Ranked Jutsu). Icicle height is a fifth of the “Ice Dominion” range, and the width is one tenth of the "Ice Dominion" skill. One icicle can be made, plus one more each time retrained. Every third retraining raises the chakra consumption to the next stage.
Description: A powerful jutsu that showcases the unique ability a Hyouton user possesses with a quick attack that is capable of delivering brutal, impact damage or can provide protection. By performing the needed handseals, then pressing their palm to the ground, the user can transmit their chakra anywhere along the ground and focus the moisture in any area within their control range, then freeze it. A mist will begin to appear where the user wishes to launch the jutsu, and depending on their skill at creating ice, the icicle will grow from the ground either in a moment, or rapidly burst from below.
Domain: Hyouton. Hyouton Ryuuken ‘B’

Technique Name Kyōretsuna Kori (Shattering Ice)
Rank: D, C, B, A, S
Type: Supplementary, Offensive/ Hyouton Kekkei Touta
Range: See Special!
Handseals: Yes
Chakra: On Ice formations: Very Low - Very High. On Hyouton Jutsu created by another person: One tier higher than the chakra used to create the jutsu.
Special: Chakra consumption is based on the range of ice being destroyed. Small ice constructs consume little chakra, but the larger the object the user wishes to destroy, the greater the cost. Ice shrapnel radius is one quarter the range of the user’s “Ice Dominion”. Damage rank is equal to the rank of the jutsu being destroyed . Can shatter jutsu up to the rank trained. Can only shatter ice related jutsu, and cannot affect snow and cold related Jutsu. May only destroy one Ice object at a time.
Description: A Shinobi fortunate enough to have the ability to harness Hyouton can learn to not only create objects made of ice, but also to destroy it. This opens a window of possibilities for the user as they can use any object made of ice as a makeshift bomb, sending fragments in every which direction with a burst of chakra. For their own creations, or ice formations that occur naturally, it’s a simple matter of performing the needed handseals and sending a sufficient burst of chakra into their own creations, rupturing the construct and unleashing ice shards in every direction. The more complex and larger the construct, the more powerful it is and the more exhausting it is to shatter. For ice creations that belonged to another person that uses Hyouton, the user may destroy those too but as the chakra used to create the object was not theirs, they would need sufficient reserves to overwhelm the amount of chakra that made the object, in order to detonate it. Those close to the blast will suffer the worst of the attack, and the larger the object, the more damage the victim would sustain.
Domain: Hyouton. Hyouton Ryuuken ‘D’

Technique Name Kyūsoku Tōketsu (Quick Freeze)
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary / Hyouton Kekkei Touta
Range: See Special!
Handseals: Yes
Chakra: Mid
Special: Range of the path is based on the user’s “Ice Dominion” Skill. Speed of the jutsu is the same as a Shinobi’s “Action” movement speed. Freezes the ground and anything on it in a straight line, reducing traction considerably, allowing for movement speeds of up to twice the normal movement rate, but carries a risk of slipping unless the user knows Ice Sliding, or can move on ice well Can freeze the water, forming a bridge but any force equivalent to a C rank Jutsu will break the bridge. A victim caught in the freezing effect can break out using a Mid level Chakra burst, or by using the Gates or Bijuu. Lasts for one turn, but can be retrained to increase the path’s longevity by one turn per retrain.
Description: With enough skill, a Hyouton user can manipulate the wind and water chakra with speed and precision, to instantly freeze anything along a straight line. This has many uses, such as altering the ground and making it harder for aggressors and/or pursuers to travel on, giving the user and those who can traverse the ice effectively the ability to move faster on it by sliding, creating a path on water and other liquid substances and even restraining targets. There are a myriad of uses for this jutsu, that give the practitioner more avenues of completing their goals.
Domain: Hyouton. Hyouton Ryuuken ‘C’, Yukisuberidai

[KID GAMBINO.]

Icicle Barrage - This should start with one shard when first created, plus one each time retrained, and after every fourth retraining the consumption will increase one tier.

Ascending Glacier - Put in that after every third retraining, the consumption will increase one tier. Also, what is the width of the glacier? Keep it concise, people shouldn't be capable of launching 50-meter glaciers.

Shattering Ice - I'd be more comfortable with the chakra consumption if it only affected really small ice creations, but when you take into account that you'd be capable of exploding massive creations with little chakra use... it becomes a problem. Firstly, basic consumption should be "Very Low - Very High". Then, I'd say make the chakra cost equivalent to a certain range of ice being affected, so the consumption will work for both created and natural ice. Lastly, for ice created by someone else, the consumption could be one tier higher than the rank affected... I think it'll work out just fine, then.

[Krethean]

And edited. I think I adjusted Shattering Ice how you wanted it, but please let me know if I slipped up somewhere.

[♚ aurora]

Looks pretty good to me. 1/3

[Not Masakuni]

[1] Hyōga o Shōjun: Durability needs to be changed. If this comes up against a B-ranked technique, it will shatter. The B-rank technique will be neutralized as well, of course; two techniques of the same rank cancel each other out. This one wouldn't survive the conflict.

[2] Kyūsoku Tōketsu: Same point about durability as the one above; it should be equivalent to its own rank.

[Krethean]

Fixed! I'll admit that was newbishness showing there. Didn't really know how ranks of jutsu would play out, whether it'd simply block up to a rank, then shatter/get destroyed on a stronger attack, or if the defence breaks but can still neutralise an attack of similar strength. Thanks for the heads up. ^^;

[Exar Kun]

1/3

[Not Masakuni]

[2|3]

[KEITH]

3/3