Suiton V.1

[Susumu]

Suiton: Shio Korogaru [Water Release: Rolling Tide]
Rank: C-Rank
Type: Offensive / Suiton Ninjutsu
Range: 5 meters
Handseals: No
Chakra: Mid
Special: Requires no hand seals, starts off at being able to move forward five meters, plus five every time retrained, maxing out at 20 meters. To use the jutsu one must be on water, unless they have a portable water source or have a KG like the Hozuki. If not used with a water source the Chakra cost is upped to High.
Description: A basic Suiton jutsu, the user merely kicks their foot forward, using a small amount of chakra to create a meter high and two meter wide collected wave to roll forward, capable of knocking individuals over, which would cause them to plunge into the water, giving the user a quick advantage. Though if used out of water, it would merely send the target rolling, also allowing the user a quick advantage to capitalize on.
Domain: Suiton.



Suiton: Tōsui Jōshō [Water Release: Rising Water Tower]
Rank: C, B
Type: Supplementary / Suiton Ninjutsu
Range: See special!
Handseals: Yes.
Chakra/Stamina: Mid-High / Mid-High upkeep
Special: C-Rank version allows for water to rise up to the user's full height and blocks all C-Rank attacks and below, while the B-Rank rises up to three times the user's height and blocks all B-Ranks and below. C-Rank = 5 meters, B-Rank = 10 meters. Can block one attack/technique of equal rank, with an additional block each retraining. If used without a water source Chakra costs are upped by one tier.
Description: The user forms a string of hand seals, causing a ring of water to rise up around the user, defending them from out side attacks. The B-Rank version has been known to set up enemies for finishing attacks as well, being able to lift them up off the ground and suspend them for a few moments.
Domain: Suiton.



Suiton: Mizurappa [Water Release: Water Trumpet]
Rank: B-Rank
Type: Offensive, Supplementary / Suiton Ninjutsu
Range: 25 meters
Handseals: Yes
Chakra: High + Mid upkeep
Special: A more advanced version of Violent Water Wave[/u]. Each time retrained, blast extends 5 more meters. Knock-back equals 3/4th of the user's maximum Suiton domain. Can be continuously used if the user pays the required upkeep per post for as long as they wish.
Description: Branching from the original Mizurappa [Violent Water Wave], Water Trumpet is essential just a larger version of it's sibling. Forming the hand-seals the user will quickly launch the jet like mass of water from their gullet at their target, leaving it's sibling to look like the flow of a creek compared to a raging river. It's name comes from the fact that the user holds their hand in front of their mouth as if they were playing the [trumpet] instrument.
Domain: Suiton. Violent Water Wave.



Water Release: Hiding In Water Technique
Rank: B-Rank
Type: Defensive, Supplementary / Suiton Ninjutsu
Range: Self
Handseals: Yes
Chakra: Mid + upkeep
Special: Can only be spotted by chakra sensing abilities of equal rank. By default, this can be used once per thread, plus one more each time retrained. No other jutsu may be used while invisible, and chakra costs still apply per turn. Though new jutsu may be prepped while hiding.
Description: A Suiton Ninjutsu user's version of the Earth Release: Hiding in Rock Technique, leaves it initially the same. Taking to using their element on a whole new level, the user will merge with their water, even small puddles. Blending in perfectly it allows the user to set up traps, ambushes, and the like without the risk of detection of all, but Sensor shinobi, who even have a hard time telling the difference between the water and the user as the water shares the same chakra as the user in most cases [if the water is made from one of the user's own jutsu].
Domain: Suiton. Must have at least 2000exp in Suiton.



Suiton: Hōmatsu Rappa [Water Release: Wild Bubble Wave]
Rank: B, A
Type: Defensive, Supplementary, Offensive / Suiton Ninjutsu
Range: 20 - 40 meters
Handseals: Yes
Chakra: High - Very High
Special: Each time retrained, bubble wave extends 5 more meters. Knock-back equals half of the user's maximum range. If both B-Rank and A-Rank are relearned at least once a piece, the technique gains a smokescreen like effect that takes place within the stream's range which lasts until the technique is blasted away by an equally ranked technique [as long as it is able to blast things away/meant to].
Description: A Suiton Ninjutsu forged through war, Wild Bubble Wave is a must in any aspiring Suiton Master's arsenal of jutsu. After forming the needed hand seals the user will expel a large and violent wave of bubbles. The bubbles themselves are capable of knocking back Fire and Oil based techniques with ease. It also acts as a proper smokescreen, rivaling even the Hidden Mist Technique as some say.
Domain: Suiton.



Water Lord's Raging Attack; Sanbi's Trident
Rank: A
Type: Defensive, Supplementary, Offensive / Suiton Ninjutsu
Range: Self [Can be thrown]
Handseals: Yes
Chakra: High
Special: Each time retrained, trident gains an "A-rank" amount of damage out put and able to withstand another "A-rank" amount of damage. Is also capable of putting a target in a "A-Rank+" binding depending on retrains, though one is not able to bind and strike their foe with the trident at the same time. If bound, target must release a higher amount of chakra, such as a burst of chakra via the Celestial Gates or of a Jinchuuriki. If used without a water source cost goes up by one tier.
Description: A fabled technique said to have been created by the Three Tailed Demon Turtle's first host. By manipulating a mass of water the user is able to forge a trident composed of chakra and water, the chakra keeping the trident encased in a "shell" to hold the water together. And while it's piercing qualities are no more than your average trident, it being composed of water and chakra it can do many different things. Such as contort and bind an enemy should the user wish so.
Domain: Suiton. Sanbi Jinchuuriki. Former Sanbi Jinchuuriki.




Water Release; Air Bubble
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary / Suiton Ninjutsu
Range: Self [Can be thrown]
Handseals: Yes
Chakra: High
Special: First rank allows the user to stay submerged with enough oxygen to supply underwater voyage for one post. Each time retrained air bubble allows the user to stay breath underwater for another turn. Does not require a water source.
Description: A Suiton technique created for the lack of ability to breathe underwater in which the user forms hand seals to expel a large bubble, smaller bubbles around it at times, in which covers the lower portion of their face own to their chest. In doing this the user has a stored amount of air to allow free roaming of the waters around the world. Though they'd be careful to avoid the bubble being popped.
Domain: Suiton.



Water Release; Drowning Bubbles
Rank: C
Type: Offensive / Suiton Ninjutsu
Range: 10 meters
Handseals: Yes
Chakra: Mid
Special: Initially the user can create 5 bubbles, but with each retraining they can create 5 more up to a max of 30 bubbles. Each time retrained bubbles can spread over an area by 5 extra meters up to a max of 30 meters. Bubbles can be popped by a C-rank weapon or jutsu, as well as a higher burst of chakra [i.e; gates, jinchuuriki].
Description: A Suiton technique that was created shortly after the "Water Release; Air Bubble" technique. After forming the required hand seals the user will expel several bubbles larger than a basket ball which will encompass a certain amount of area as they float about. Yet, the trick is once they come in contact with anything living they aim to wrap themselves around their head and once that is done they forcefully begin to flood water into the user's mouth and then into their lungs aiming to drown them.
Domain: Sution. Water Release: Air Bubble.



Water Release; Bubble Dome Defense
Rank: D, C, B, A, S
Type: Offensive / Suiton Ninjutsu
Range: 0-3 meters
Handseals: Yes
Chakra: See special!
Special: Bubble dome blocks attacks of equal rank. Does not require a water source. Chakra consumption is based on the technique being blocked
Description: For those who do not have the use of a water source, this technique is used for defending ones self and any other within the technique's radius. After forming the required hand seals the user will create a large bubble and expel it from their gullet to which will instantly grow larger and surround the user by three meters all around.
Domain: Sution. Water Release: Air Bubble.



Water Release; Bubble Flight Technique
Rank: D-rank
Type: Supplementary / Suiton Ninjutsu
Range: Self
Handseals: Yes
Chakra: Low + Low upkeep for flight [upkeep is optional]
Special: Size, strength of bubbles, as well as distance the user can cover, depends on user's highest Water Dominion rank. Cannot perform any other chakra related jutsu while in the bubble save for ones that would take place outside of the bubble. Though the bubble allows for an off version of flying they may only be held for up to only one turn; however, one more turn of flight is gained each time retrained. Also the user can create 1 extra bubble per retraining. Also to fly properly and not just follow a wind current, user must pay additional chakra. Does not require a water source.
Description: A Suiton technique that was created shortly after the "Water Release; Air Bubble" technique. After forming the required hand seals the user will expel a bubble or bubbles to consume them and or others. In doing this they are able to seemingly fly. Though through feeding the bubble they are able to fly correctly and efficiently rather than "floating".
Domain: Sution. Water Release: Air Bubble.

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Some are new, some are revamps.

[BLKND]

Mizurappa seems absolutely pointless. You should make it do something other than the exact same thing as Violent Water Wave. Maybe you could make it faster/piercing/crushing/more powerful knock back or something?

[Susumu]

It is already stronger via being a higher rank.

[~Kohana <3]

Only one I really have a problem with is Violent Bubble Wave. I could be wrong but the percentages seem a tad high. But regardless of that (since I'm not sure) I think the stipulation of the retrained version only being blown away by Wind or Water should be taken out.

Honestly, any big blast (water, wind, chakra, gates, etc) would blast that mist away. Even say a Heavenly Spin would as well. So generalize that at least.

[Susumu]

Done.

[~Kohana <3]

Looks fine to me then.

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[Sharkk]

bump

[Not Masakuni]

Hiding In Water Technique - They shouldn't be undetectable, even if using their own technique-created water. I mean, whether you're using natural water or your own water, its a water source with a human's chakra merged with it. To a sensor, that is detectable.

Homatsu Rappa - Reducing friction makes things faster. If you're saying that the slipperiness demands caution, which reduces speed, just put that it causes slipperiness. It would be logical that if I wanted to run right into this stuff, I could increase my speed at the expense of fine control over my motions.

Sanbi's Trident - Shouldn't be able to deal A-rank damage a target and bind them in an A-ranked capture at the same time; that's two A-rank techniques for the price of one.

Drowning Bubbles - C-ranked technique should be breakable by other C-ranked things, not B-rank.

Bubble Flight Technique - I can't see it sucking the oxygen out of the bubble. That would be the domain of Fuuton techniques, if I had to put a finger on it; controlling air.

[Susumu]

Fixed all, but the water hiding one. As how would a sensor be able to tell the user's chakra created suiton apart from the creator's while they are hiding within it?

[Not Masakuni]

A sensor can detect chakra outside of their own body. Water does not normally possess chakra. When you merge with a body of water, be it of your own creation or not, you must necessarily merge your chakra with that water as well.

When a sensor comes along, they will see a body of water, and, upon using their abilities, detect that the water is full of your chakra. I suppose they might not be exactly certain whether or not you are inside the water, or if its merely a Suiton technique in action, but there's no way they'd be fooled into thinking it was regular water, is my point. They'd know something was up, if not the exact nature of it.

[Susumu]

That's what I'm saying. A sensor could spot them easily if they were in a NORMAL body of water. But, if they were merged with a body of water THEY CREATED WITH THEIR CHAKRA, I don't see it possible for them to pick out the user, albeit a Hyuuga more than likely would be able to.

[Not Masakuni]

They wouldn't be able to differentiate between the user's chakra-created water and the user's merged chakra-form. That's a far cry from undetectable. They're perfectly detectable, just disguised by the fact that there's other water with chakra in it in the area.

I get what you're saying, but undetectable implies that they're completely imperceptible. Their location is not inherently concealed; only confused by the other chakra-water around.

[Susumu]

Edited, just to get these moved along.

[Not Masakuni]

Mhm.

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[.DEVIOUS]

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