Katon: Kishou Hisuzaku no Jutsu

[Akikou]

Katon: Kishou Hisuzaku no Jutsu (Fire Style: Art of the Rising Flame Phoenix)
Rank: S
Type: Ninjutsu / Offensive / Explosive
Range: 30 meters
Handseals: Yes.
Chakra: Massive.
Special: Creates a massive explosion upon impact, covering an area of up to 15 meters in radius. After the explosion, the user can spend an additional Very High amount of chakra to recreate the phoenix at a third of its original size, which causes the second impact's explosion to be cut down to 10 meters but maintaining the deadly aspect of it. This process may only be repeated once per time the jutsu is cast, plus once more for each time the technique is retrained. Each time retrained, the size of the phoenix and the impacting explosion is reduced by 1/3, but it maintains the same damaging aspect and chakra cost.
Description: The user performs the handseals, gathering chakra while inhaling deeply. Then, with a powerful exhale, the user will release a stream of flame. Spatial manipulation rapidly shapes the flames into the form of a large phoenix with a wingspan of ten meters and a body length of four meters. Upon impact, the entirety of the phoenix will wrap itself up into a small ball, taking just under a half second to complete, before detonating and releasing a massive explosion, enveloping anyone, including the user, that is too close.
Domain: Katon. Requires at least 1 Katon Mastery to learn.

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[Akikou]

Questions? Comments? Concerns? Acceptances? Please feel free to leave them below!

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[~Kohana <3]

Honestly, despite the fact that the phoenixes/blast radius are getting smaller, I think that this can be majorly OP...though I do suppose that Massive chakra for each phoenix/explosion does balance it out...

I'll give it 1/2.....


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FOR NOW

[.DEVIOUS]

The secondary explosions aren't massive cost, they are Very High. It does have the potential for power but not anymore than other S ranks I believe nor for the stacking cost.

[~Kohana <3]

I meant Very High....>.>

Even still I suppose that it evens out...>.>

[Not Masakuni]

S Ranked Techniques with Massive+ consumption are gonna be scary. They're balanced by their acquisition difficulty and chakra cost. Seems alright to me.

1|3

[vegapunk]

For a while I wasn't sure where the secondary explosion could come from (i.e anywhere the next phoenix goes, or the original explosion area). But, everything seems kosher.

2/3

[suzaku]

3/3