Akusen (Reckless Strength)

[KID GAMBINO.]

Akusen, the art of the bodybuilder, a fighting style said be the rival of 'Medical Strength', the methods required to achieve such brawn undoubtedly attained differently. Through rigorous physical training, the practitioners of Akusen are known for their impeccable bodybuilding maneuvers, their frame becoming layered with muscles said to feel like titanium. The basis of the fighting style is to completely overwhelm their opponents with techniques that can easily debilitate a single foe with little effort, showcasing their manifestation of raw strength as something to be truly feared. The style has been promoted in several legendary events, whether it be shinobi wars, professional sports, or even world-wide martial arts tournaments. Unfortunately, the further that one wishes to advance their mass, the slower their movement and reaction time becomes, substituting speed with power. However, this is quite the price to pay for the incredible feats of the Akusen.

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RESTRICTIONS...

Taijutsu Primary only!

Cannot utilize Kekkei Genkai, Kekkei Touta, or Clan Jutsu!

Cannot utilize Medical Ninjutsu!

Due to one's dedication to their own body, fighting styles involving weaponry are completely prohibited from Akusen practitioners!

[KID GAMBINO.]

SUPPLEMENTARY JUTSU

Senkotsu no Kouseinou (Art of the Augmented Physique)
Rank: D, C, B, A, S
Type: Passive / Offensive / Taijutsu
Range: Self
Special: Improves the user's physical brawn, granting all Taijutsu performed enhanced strength, even basic physical attacks, heightening the power of the assault with bonus damage equal to the highest rank known of this technique. However, due to the layers of muscle stacked on the user's body, their agility suffers greatly after certain points of advancement, their movement decreased by one-fourth after obtaining the 'C' Rank version of this technique, and decreased even further, by one-half after obtaining the 'A' Rank version. Due to their great physical prowess, the user can also gain significant lifting capabilities, the weight determined by the highest rank known of this technique:

[/b] - Max Body Weight
C - 2x Max Body Weight
B - 3x Max Body Weight
A - 4x Max Body Weight
S - 5x Max Body Weight[/ul]Description: Through rigorous exercise and training methods, one is capable of advancing their physical capabilities to mighty heights, bringing fear to those who witness the brawn behind their newfound strength. This method is not simple as it seems, requiring the user to actually transform their body over time, muscle stacking several times over the further they advance into the art of reckless power. Those who obtain the higher levels of this art always appear to be extremely muscular and hulking in appearance, showcasing their hidden strength. However, due to the increase in physical mass, the user sustains significant disadvantages with the augmented strength, their speed and ability to react hindering the more they continue to build muscle. With this attribute in mind, it is wise of the practitioners of this style to understand patience, as well as the responsibilities that come with such power.
Domain: Akusen.


Muteki (Juggernaut)
Rank: D, C, B, A, S
Type: Supplementary / Defensive / Taijutsu
Range: Self
Stamina: Very Low - Massive
Special: Can successfully endure a blunt attack used against the user without slowing their momentum or sustaining any physical damage, but requires the user to sacrifice Stamina of equal rank to each technique used against them. Piercing/slashing techniques, those that exploit elemental weaknesses, or techniques of higher rank are unaffected by this technique. Cannot be used against Genjutsu.
Description: Those of the Akusen style have come to understand that their muscular mass has both offensive and defensive qualities, manipulating both to the best of their abilities. The initiation of this technique is quite simple, the user builds energy and stamina, preparing themselves for the incoming assault. Then, once the technique comes into contact with the user of this technique, their iron-clad muscle sustains the damage like a suit of armor, preventing the user from being affected in any way. The user must be careful when utilizing this ability, due to the equivalent drain of stamina, which can render them useless in battle, even if they survive the assault.
Domain: Akusen. Senkotsu no Kouseinou per rank.


Okaeshi (Revenge)
Rank: D, C, B, A, S
Type: Supplementary / Offensive / Taijutsu
Range: Self
Stamina: Low - Very High
Special: Amplifies the user's next Taijutsu technique after using 'Muteki', the bonus damage and stamina consumed equivalent to the combined amount of damage sustained. The user must successfully survive the opponent's techniques with 'Muteki' in order to increase their own strength. Does not affect multiple Taijutsu techniques after this technique's use. User must wait a single turn before utilizing 'Muteki' again, while 'Okaeshi' has a cooldown of three turns.
Description: The next step to increasing one's brawn within the art of augmented muscle, the user is able to transfer damage nullified by 'Muteki' into adrenaline, increasing the power of their next technique based on the strength of the techniques used against them. This technique requires patience, and if the user cannot successfully defend themselves against the opponent's techniques, the build of adrenaline disappears. The idea of this technique is based primarily on the scientific explanation of the transfer of energy: momentum inflicted upon the user does not simply become nonexistent, but is transformed into adrenaline, which is inflicted back upon the opponent through the user's own Taijutsu. However, this amplified strength does not come passively, and still requires the user to consume additional Stamina.
Domain: Akusen. Muteki per rank.

BASIC JUTSU

Kyoudai Sentou (Mighty Punch)
Rank: D
Type: Offensive / Taijutsu
Range: 0 - 25 meters
Stamina: Low - High
Special: Can be retrained three times, stacking 'D' ranked damage each time. Inflicts knockback if the target is struck, the highest rank known of 'Senkotsu no Kouseinou' determining the distance:

[/b] - 5 meters
C - 10 meters
B - 15 meters
A - 20 meters
S - 25 meters[/ul]Description: A simple maneuver of Akusen, and known as one of the very basic, Kyoudai Sentou is a strong punch thrown with the momentum of the user's thick muscles assisting the delivery of the blow. The direction from which the fist approaches is unimportant, making this quite useful in hand-to-hand combat.
Domain: Akusen. Senkotsu no Kouseinou 'D'.


Tenrai Handou (Divine Foot)
Rank: D
Type: Offensive / Taijutsu
Range: 0 - 25 meters
Stamina: Low - High
Special: Can be retrained three times, stacking 'D' ranked damage each time. Inflicts knockback if the target is struck, the highest rank known of 'Senkotsu no Kouseinou' determining the distance:

[/b] - 5 meters
C - 10 meters
B - 15 meters
A - 20 meters
S - 25 meters[/ul]Description: A simple maneuver of Akusen, and known as one of the very basic, Tenrai Handou is a powerful kick with the momentum of the user's thick muscles assisting the delivery of the blow. The direction from which the kick approaches is unimportant, making this quite useful in hand-to-hand combat.
Domain: Akusen. Senkotsu no Kouseinou 'D'.


Haneru Kire (Decapitating Chop)
Rank: D, C, B, A, S
Type: Offensive / Taijutsu
Range: Self
Stamina: Low - Very High
Special: Causes numbness and the inability to utilize the targeted limb for a specific amount of time, based on the highest rank known. Any strike to the head will render the target completely unconscious for the same specified duration:

[/b] - 1/4th of a turn
C - Half of a turn
B - One whole turn
A - Two whole turns
S - Three whole turns[/ul]Description: Haneru Kire, a powerful strike known for it's debilitating capabilities. The user positions their hand in a narrow formation, gathering strength before aiming the chop for a specific area on the opponent's body. If the hit succeeds, the opponent's affected limb will feel extremely numb, and will be rendered useless for a specific amount of time. However, if the opponent is struck on the head, they will become knocked unconscious, making this technique quite deadly in combat.
Domain: Akusen. Senkotsu no Kouseinou per rank.


Shindou Hirate (Impact Thrust)
Rank: D, C, B, A, S
Type: Offensive / Taijutsu
Range: 0 - 25 meters
Stamina: Low - Very High
Special: Causes hardened breathing and slowness in movement, which halves the opponent's speed, for a specific amount of time, the strength and knockback distance based on the highest rank known:

[/b] - 1/4th of a turn; 5 meters
C - Half of a turn; 10 meters
B - One whole turn; 15 meters
A - Two whole turns; 20 meters
S - Three whole turns; 25 meters[/ul]Description: Shindou Hirate, a deadly palm thrust known for determining the fate of battles. The user gathers strength in their hand, preparing the assault once close enough to the opponent. Once within a hand-reach distance, the user thrusts their palm into the chest if the opponent, the sudden strike causing abnormal functioning in their lungs, which forces the opponent to lack proper breathing and hinders their speed severely. The following knockback is just the after-effect of the user's incredible strength, and can cause other damaging effects to the target's body as well.
Domain: Akusen. Senkotsu no Kouseinou per rank.


Rousuru Jinrai (Deafening Thunderclap)
Rank: D, C, B, A, S
Type: Offensive / Taijutsu
Range: Self
Stamina: Low - Very High
Special: Causes lack of hearing and disorientation for a specific amount of time, based on the highest rank known:

[/b] - 1/4th of a turn
C - Half of a turn
B - One whole turn
A - Two whole turns
S - Three whole turns[/ul]Description: Rousuru Jinrai, a technique rivaling the effects of many Sound-based capabilities, which targets the opponent's auditory system through physical contact instead. The user gathers strength and both their hands, closing in on the opponent. Then, the user performs a 'clapping' motion toward the target's head, each hand striking the sides of their head. The powerful clap sends the momentum of the strike through the target's membrane, causing temporary damage, such as the sudden lack of hearing and disorientation in their sight and movement.
Domain: Akusen. Senkotsu no Kouseinou per rank.


Kongou Kensei (Adamantine Constraint)
Rank: C
Type: Offensive / Taijutsu
Range: Self
Stamina: Mid
Special: The target is incapable of escaping the fierce grip for a single turn, plus another turn for each new rank attained in 'Senkotsu no Kouseinou'. If the target is a Taijutsu Secondary, the specified duration is doubled, and if the target is a Taijutsu Tertiary, the specified duration is tripled.
Description: Kougou Kensei, a technique that undoubtedly displays the incredible brawn of the Akusen. The user simply gathers strength in an area of their body, then detains the target through some form of retaining method, whether it be a headlock, a nelson, an ankle-lock, a chokehold, or even a bearhug. The purpose of the technique is to be able to completely immobilize the target by utilizing the user's awe-inspiring brawn to overpower them. This does not mean the target is incapable of maneuvering themselves, this is only a mean for grasping the opponent, and being incapable of removing that constraint, unless the user is overwhelmed.
Domain: Akusen. Senkotsu no Kouseinou 'D'.

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Rank: B
Type: Offensive / Taijutsu
Range: Self
Stamina: High
Special: Once the user successfully performs 'Kougou Kensei', the user can then apply additional strength to not only restrain the target, but knock them unconscious through the severe application of force. The amount of time needed until unconsciousness is achieved and it's duration is based on the highest rank known of 'Senkotsu no Kouseinou':

[/b] - Five turns; One turn
C - Four turns; Two turns
B - Three turns; Three turns
A - Two turns; Four turns
S - One turn; Five turns[/ul]
Description: Kougou Sanketsu, the next step to overwhelming the opponent when locked within 'Kougou Kensei'. Once the target is constricted by this techniques predecessor, the user furthers the opponent's inability to achieve movement by applying more force, tightening their deadly grip around the opponent, forcing them into an unconscious state once the duration has passed. However, in order for this technique to succeed, the user must apply force to the target's chest, neck, or head, which causes the submission. The versatile capabilities of this techniques predecessor may be advantageous for it's own reason, but when converting to the use of this technique, the user has no choice but to limit the area of strangulation.
Domain: Akusen. Senkotsu no Kouseinou 'D'.[/ul]

Omotai Chakushu (Colossal Launch)
Rank: C
Type: Offensive / Taijutsu
Range: 0 - 50 meters
Stamina: Mid
Special: The damage and range of the toss is determined by the highest rank known of 'Senkotsu no Kouseinou':

[/b] - 10 meters
C - 20 meters
B - 30 meters
A - 40 meters
S - 50 meters[/ul]Description: Omotai Chakushu, another excellent display of the Akusen's incredible physical strength. The initiation of the technique is quite simple, once the user is within hand's reach of the opponent, the user grabs them, gathering strength in their hands and muscles, then with tremendous force, the user spins and throws the target in a specific distance. The range of this technique can be quite grand depending on the level of the user's brawn, and can cause devastating damage upon landing if the opponent cannot recover from the flight.
Domain: Akusen. Senkotsu no Kouseinou 'D'.


Gekiha Hiji (Crushing Elbow)
Rank: C
Type: Offensive / Taijutsu
Range: 0 - 25 meters
Stamina: Mid - Very High
Special: Can be retrained three times, stacking 'C' ranked damage each time. Inflicts knockback if the target is struck, the highest rank known of 'Senkotsu no Kouseinou' determining the distance:

[/b] - 5 meters
C - 10 meters
B - 15 meters
A - 20 meters
S - 25 meters[/ul]Description: Gekiha Hiji, a powerful elbow strike which can be performed from any direction. Although the technique is normally performed from a distance with the use of a single arm, in order to gain momentum, the user can choice a different method of completing the task. Without the need of a running head-start, while in extreme close-range, the user can simply place their opposite hand upon the fist of the 'charging elbow' arm that they plan to use as their weapon. Then, once the user forces the elbow into it's target, the force of applying pressure with their opposite hand onto the 'charging elbow' arm allows sufficient damage to take place, whereas a simple dash can inflict the same amount of damage, without the need to apply force with their opposite hand. However, the separate variations still grant the user unimaginable damage.
Domain: Akusen. Senkotsu no Kouseinou 'D'.


Nenshou Rariatto (Burning Lariat)
Rank: C
Type: Offensive / Taijutsu
Range: 0 - 25 meters
Stamina: Mid - Very High
Special: Can be retrained three times, stacking 'C' ranked damage each time. Inflicts knockback if the target is struck, the highest rank known of 'Senkotsu no Kouseinou' determining the distance:

[/b] - 5 meters
C - 10 meters
B - 15 meters
A - 20 meters
S - 25 meters[/ul]Description: Nenshou Rariatto, a deadly arm thrust known to end the lives of many who challenge the Akusen. From close-range or from a running distance, the user gathers strength in their biceps, prepared to plummet into the target. Then, with a single, swift motion, the user performs a clothesline-like maneuver, their arm plowing through the target's chest with incredible brawn, potentially breaking bone due to it's power. In addition to the physical damage, the user furthers the chance of injury, their arm launching the target into the distance with tremendous force. The straightforwardness of the attack can be extremely deadly in combat.
Domain: Akusen. Senkotsu no Kouseinou 'D'.


Satsujin Hiza (Titanic Knee)
Rank: C
Type: Offensive / Taijutsu
Range: 0 - 10 meters
Stamina: Mid - Very High
Special: Can be retrained three times, stacking 'C' ranked damage each time. The force of the strike can knock the target greatly into the air, the highest rank known of 'Senkotsu no Kouseinou' determining the distance:

[/b] - 2 meters
C - 4 meters
B - 6 meters
A - 8 meters
S - 10 meters[/ul]Description: Satsujin Hiza, a incredible knee strike that is quite unpredictable due to it's shallow position. Though normally performed while securing a tight grip on the target, the blow can truly be initiated from any position, as long as the momentum is sustained. The user gathers strength in their feet and legs, power building before pushing their kneecap into the opponent, the damage inflicted capable of being extremely effective if not defended against. As stated earlier, due to the rising knee being commonly initiated from the ground, the opponent's chances of recognizing the strike before it connects is quite slim if the user is close and agile enough.
Domain: Akusen. Senkotsu no Kouseinou 'D'.


Girochin Doroppu (Guillotine Drop)
Rank: C
Type: Offensive / Taijutsu
Range: 0 - 5 meters
Stamina: Mid - Very High
Special: Can be retrained three times, stacking 'C' ranked damage each time. Any strike to the head will render the target completely unconscious for a specific amount of time, based on the highest rank known of 'Senkotsu no Kouseinou:

[/b] - 1/4th of a turn
C - Half of a turn
B - One whole turn
A - Two whole turns
S - Three whole turns[/ul]Description: Girochin Doroppu, a descending footdrop that can force the opponent into unconsciousness if struck. The user must build momentum through two maneuvers, the first being gathering strength in their feet and legs. Then, the user ascends into the air through a powerful leap, reaching up to five meters into the air before performing a simple, quick front-flip technique, which increases the momentum of the next movement. Upon completing the spin, the user rapidly descends to the target with their assaulting foot still raised above their head. Upon reaching the target, the user thrusts the risen foot into the body of the target, the momentum built from the raise and fall granting significant damage against the vulnerable opponent.
Domain: Akusen. Senkotsu no Kouseinou 'D'.


Funsai Mubou (Battering Headbutt)
Rank: C
Type: Offensive / Taijutsu
Range: 0 - 25 meters
Stamina: Mid - Very High
Special: Can be retrained three times, stacking 'C' ranked damage each time. Inflicts knockback if the target is struck, the highest rank known of 'Senkotsu no Kouseinou' determining the distance:

[/b] - 5 meters
C - 10 meters
B - 15 meters
A - 20 meters
S - 25 meters[/ul]Description: Funsai Mubou, a straightforward technique which transfers energy built within the user's body into their opponent through a simple headbutt. The user builds momentum, stamina gathering as they set their eyes on the target like a raging bull. Then, either through close or medium range, the user charges their head into the target, the unorthodox assault being quite unexpected and brutal enough to inflict severe damage. The headbutt can be performed from up-close while already holding the opponent in a tight grip, or through a rampaging charge from a specific distance, meaning the variation and unconventional maneuver can be quite useful in combat.
Domain: Akusen. Senkotsu no Kouseinou 'D'.


Karada Himatsu (Crossbody Splash)
Rank: C
Type: Offensive / Taijutsu
Range: See special!
Stamina: Mid
Special: For each fifty pounds that the user weighs, this technique inflicts 'D' ranked damage, stacking the strength of the technique the heavier the user weighs. Causes the ground below the user and the target to become ruptured and unsettled due to the strike's concussive strength, the force inflicting knockback on those within the technique's range outside of it, the range equivalent to one meter for every fifty pounds that the user weighs.
Description: Karada Himatsu, a technique that does not require the advancement of the user's physical strength, but their own physical mass. The user builds momentum, stamina gathering in their legs and feet before being launched up to five meters in the air. Using gravity as the harbringer of the opponent's destruction, the user simply free-falls onto the target, the weight of their body plummeting into the opponent with devastating force, the severity increased based on the user's own weight. The body press is quite simple and easy to dodge, but if the user is heavy enough, and the target is not aware, the body splash can easily crush the opponent.
Domain: Akusen. Senkotsu no Kouseinou 'D'.


Noroshi Appakatto (Skyrocket Uppercut)
Rank: B
Type: Offensive / Taijutsu
Range: 0 - 50 meters
Stamina: High - Massive
Special: Can be retrained three times, stacking 'B' ranked damage each time. The force of the strike can knock the target greatly into the air, the highest rank known of 'Senkotsu no Kouseinou' determining the distance:

[/b] - 10 meters
C - 20 meters
B - 30 meters
A - 40 meters
S - 50 meters[/ul]Description: Noroshi Appakatto, a powerful rising punch often used by professional boxers, which can be deadly in the hands of an Akusen practitioner. The user gathers stamina in their leading arm, legs, and feet, several areas not common to most techniques within this fighting style. Then, the user lowers their body to the ground by bending their knees, the crouch position signifying the massive supply of strength, which is then followed by an extremely swift uppercut, the punch aimed for the target's jaw. Once the ascending strike connects, the transfer of momentum launches the opponent like a rocket into the air, the height being tremendous if the force allows it. Due to the incredible power behind the uppercut, this punch is quite feared as one of the Akusen's most threatening techniques, and can inflict damage upon impact into the ascension and from the descent.
Domain: Akusen. Senkotsu no Kouseinou 'D'.


Korijon Niryuu (Collision Double Axe)
Rank: B
Type: Offensive / Taijutsu
Range: 0 - 15 meters
Stamina: High - Massive
Special: Can be retrained three times, stacking 'B' ranked damage each time. Causes the ground below the user and the target to become ruptured and unsettled due to the strike's concussive strength, the force inflicting knockback on those within the technique's range outside of it, the highest rank known of 'Senkotsu no Kouseinou' determining the distance:

[/b] - 3 meters
C - 6 meters
B - 9 meters
A - 12 meters
S - 15 meters[/ul]Description: Korijon Niryuu, a hammer-like assault that can render the target unconscious if struck, the aftereffect of the godly fists sending shockwaves into the ground below. The user gathers momentum into their arm and fists, each hand pressed tightly against the other, their fingers interlocked. Then, upon raising the fist over their head, the user abruptly drills the double fist into the head of the opponent like an axe, their body smashing into the ground afterward, the force being enough to break the opponent's skull and spine if unprepared. In addition to the divine strength of the technique, the environment is disturbed as well, intense energy flowing through the body of the target into the ground below, causing the earth to be cracked due to the power. However, this effect only occurs if the target is struck, or if the user continues the momentum of the double fist directly into the earth itself.
Domain: Akusen. Senkotsu no Kouseinou 'D'.


Bakuyaku Gachan (Explosive Slam)
Rank: B
Type: Offensive / Taijutsu
Range: 0 - 15 meters
Stamina: High - Massive
Special: Can be retrained three times, stacking 'B' ranked damage each time. Causes the ground below the user and the target to become ruptured and unsettled due to the strike's concussive strength, the force inflicting knockback on those within the technique's range outside of it, the highest rank known of 'Senkotsu no Kouseinou' determining the distance:

[/b] - 3 meters
C - 6 meters
B - 9 meters
A - 12 meters
S - 15 meters[/ul]Description: Bakuyaku Gachan, a forceful slam that requires incredible brawn to complete. The user gathers stamina in several areas of the body, such as their arms and legs, the target being within arm's reach. Then, by simply obtaining a secure grasp on the opponent, the user lifts the target into the air, rotating their body with the intent of flipping the opponent directly into a threatening slam. The spin drives the momentum of the technique, and with a single, swift motion, the user slams the target into the ground below, the force being enough to shatter bones throughout their body. In addition to the divine strength of the technique, the environment is disturbed as well, intense energy flowing through the body of the target into the ground below, turning the earth into cracked rubble, causing movement to be difficult. However, this effect only occurs if the target is successfully thrusted into the ground, meaning the user must be nimble when performing this technique.
Domain: Akusen. Senkotsu no Kouseinou 'D'.


Jaianto Habatobi (Hulking Jump)
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary / Taijutsu
Range: 0 - 50 meters
Stamina: High
Special: Grants the user the ability to jump dozens of meters into the air through the use of their own physical strength, the highest rank known of 'Senkotsu no Kouseinou' determining the distance:

[/b] - 10 meters
C - 20 meters
B - 30 meters
A - 40 meters
S - 50 meters[/ul]Description: Jaianto Habatobi, one of the Akusen's greatest variants, allowing the use of an astounding leap into the atmosphere, commonly used for a method of escape or for a follow-up technique. The user builds stamina in their legs and feet, their knees bending into a crouched position as the user determines the direction in which they plan to ascend. Then, appearing like a blur in the wind, the user forces their hulking strength into the ground below, acting as a launch pad as their body rockets through the air, reaching up to fifty meters if capable. Due to the power behind the leap, the ascension is quite vast and requires a few seconds at best, praising the technique as vital for most Akusen practitioners. Upon returning the ground, the user sustains no drawbacks at all, their muscular build cushioning the landing.
Domain: Akusen. Senkotsu no Kouseinou 'D'.


Nagareboshi Tobikomi (Meteor Dive)
Rank: B
Type: Offensive / Taijutsu
Range: 0 - 15 meters
Stamina: High - Massive
Special: Can be retrained three times, stacking 'B' ranked damage each time. Causes the ground below the user and the target to become ruptured and unsettled due to the strike's concussive strength, the force inflicting knockback on those within the technique's range outside of it, the highest rank known of 'Senkotsu no Kouseinou' determining the distance:

[/b] - 3 meters
C - 6 meters
B - 9 meters
A - 12 meters
S - 15 meters[/ul]Description: Nagareboshi Tobikomi, a special footdive that allows the user to descend upon the opponent like a sword with their feet, the assault capable of pummeling though even the greatest defenses. The user builds momentum, stamina gathering in their legs and feet as they lock their eyes on the target. Then, upon leaping nearly five meters in the air, the user completes an instant front-flip, the speed rivaled by none, before returning to the earth, their body aimed narrowly toward the opponent with their feet guiding them like a missile. The gravity forcing the user to the ground along with their own physical prowess creates a deadly footdive capable of piercing great barriers, and smashing those unwary of it's strength into the ground below. In addition to the divine strength of the technique, the environment is disturbed as well, intense energy flowing through the body of the target into the ground below, turning the earth into cracked rubble, causing movement to be difficult. However, this effect only occurs if their feet are successfully thrusted into the ground, meaning the user must be nimble when performing this technique.
Domain: Akusen. Senkotsu no Kouseinou 'D'.


Ranbou Kyanonboru (Violent Cannonball)
Rank: B
Type: Offensive / Taijutsu
Range: 0 - 15 meters
Stamina: High - Massive
Special: Can be retrained three times, stacking 'B' ranked damage each time. Causes the ground below the user and the target to become ruptured and unsettled due to the strike's concussive strength, the force inflicting knockback on those within the technique's range outside of it, the highest rank known of 'Senkotsu no Kouseinou' determining the distance:

[/b] - 3 meters
C - 6 meters
B - 9 meters
A - 12 meters
S - 15 meters[/ul]Description: Ranbou Kyanonboru, a mighty assault created by a former Akusen practitioner, but surely not one commonly used due to it's extremely unorthodox preparation. The user builds momentum, stamina gathering in their feet and legs before leaping nearly five meters into the air. Then, using the energy built from the jump, the user curls their body into a sphere, their knees planted against their chest and their head tucked securely between their crossed arms. This formation is completed in a matter of nanoseconds, their body spinning into a violent sphere simultaneously, momentum undoubtedly building from the rotation. Without further initiation, the user aims their rotating body toward the last known location of their target, descending rapidly with the intent of smashing them against the ground, the possibility of escape being minuscule for those who are unaware. In addition to the divine strength of the technique, the environment is disturbed as well, intense energy flowing through the body of the target into the ground below, turning the earth into cracked rubble, causing movement to be difficult. However, this effect only occurs if their body successfully connects with the ground, meaning the user must be nimble when performing this technique.
Domain: Akusen. Senkotsu no Kouseinou 'D'.


Monosugoi Hougeki (Earth-Shattering Powerbomb)
Rank: A
Type: Offensive / Taijutsu
Range: 0 - 25 meters
Stamina: Very High - Massive
Special: Can be retrained three times, stacking 'A' ranked damage each time. Causes the ground below the user and the target to become ruptured and unsettled due to the strike's concussive strength, the force inflicting knockback on those within the technique's range outside of it, the highest rank known of 'Senkotsu no Kouseinou' determining the distance:

[/b] - 5 meters
C - 10 meters
B - 15 meters
A - 20 meters
S - 25 meters[/ul]Description: Monosugoi Hougeki, one of the final stages determining the growth of a young Akusen practitioner, only taught to those worthy of it's command. The user builds momentum in their arms and hands, the target requires to be within arm's reach. Upon confining the specific amount of stamina needed, the user grasps the target, their incredible strength lifting the helpless body of the opponent into a sitting position on their shoulders, their legs dangling behind the user. With their hands gripping tightly onto the target's waist, the user suddenly throws the target forward onto the ground, vast amount of strength allowing momentum to plummet the opponent into the earth like a meteor, their back completely exposed. The technique, if done correctly, is capable of breaking several bones throughout the target's body, placing them within severe condition that only the finest Medical Ninjutsu could cure. In addition to the divine strength of the technique, the environment is disturbed as well, intense energy flowing through the body of the target into the ground below, turning the earth into cracked rubble, causing movement to be difficult. However, this effect only occurs if their body successfully connects with the ground, meaning the user must be nimble when performing this technique.
Domain: Akusen. Senkotsu no Kouseinou 'D'.

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Rank: S
Type: Offensive / Taijutsu
Range: 0 - 30 meters
Stamina: Massive
Special: Can only be used once per thread, plus once more each time retrained. Can be retrained three times, stacking 'S' ranked damage each time. Causes the ground below the user and the target to become ruptured and unsettled due to the strike's concussive strength, forcing those within thirty meters to be thrown back until a complete thirty meters is between the user and the thrown beings/objects.
Description: Finaru Raiga Bomu, the ultimate Taijutsu technique of the Akusen style without the need of the Eight Chakra Gates, allowing raw strength and utter devastation to unfold through the use of a deadly powerbomb. The user begins the opponent's demise by building strength into their arms and legs, stamina gaining rapidly. Then, once the target is within arm's reach, the user slams the head of the target between their user's legs, prepared to lift the target into a powerbomb. However, this does not occur just yet, the utilized stamina in their legs thrusting them several meters in the air, allowing even more momentum to build. Through the use of gravity and their own physical strength, upon reaching the climax, the user initiates the lifting maneuver, the target placed upon a sitting position on their shoulders as the user descends. Once the ground is mere feet from being met, the user completes the threatening technique, the weight of gravity and the user's own defines muscles colliding the target's head with the earth itself. The technique, if done correctly, is not only capable of shattering every bone in the target's body, but can easily kill them. In addition to the divine strength of the technique, the environment is disturbed as well, intense energy flowing through the body of the target into the ground below, turning the earth into cracked rubble, causing movement to be difficult. However, this effect only occurs if their body successfully connects with the ground, meaning the user must be nimble when performing this technique.
Domain: Akusen. Monosugoi Hougeki. Senkotsu no Kouseinou 'S'.[/ul]

CHAKRA GATES JUTSU

Kinmotsu no Akusen - Kamikobushi (Forbidden Technique - Hercules' Assault)
Rank: B
Type: Offensive / Taijutsu / Kinjutsu
Range: 0 - 25 meters
Stamina: High
Special: Can only be performed while the first Chakra Gate is open and active. Can only be performed once per thread, plus once more each time retrained. The strength of each strike is based on the user's 'Senkotsu no Kouseinou' rank.
Description: Kamikobushi, the initial technique of the three sacred 'Kinmotsu no Akusen', has granted many practitioners of the awe-inspiring fighting style victories, their physical brawn enhanced with great velocity. By opening the first of the Celestial Gates, the Initial Gate, the warrior is now capable of bypassing the slow movement cursed by their physical mass, chakra supplying their body with impeccable speed during the technique. While the opponent is within arm's reach, the user slams their foot onto the target's own foot, preventing recoil from their next attack. Acceleration advanced to superhuman heights, the user lashes forth with several fleeting fist strikes, potentially crashing into the opponent's body, but the knockback nonexistent due to their body being pinned to the location. Up to two strikes would land per second, the length of the assault dependent on the user, a simple release of their foot's grip allowing one final strike to launch the target into the distance. The technique is extremely brutal and can end many lives, but adheres a great strain on the user's body afterward.
Domain: Akusen. Hachimontonkou - Gate One. Senkotsu no Kouseinou 'D'.


Kinmotsu no Akusen - Kamisawagi (Forbidden Technique - Artemis' Roar)
Rank: A
Type: Offensive / Taijutsu / Kinjutsu
Range: 0 - 25 meters
Stamina: Very High
Special: Can only be performed while the third Chakra Gate is open and active. Can only be performed once per thread, plus once more each time retrained. The strength of the wave is based on the user's 'Senkotsu no Kouseinou' rank, the distance achievable starting at ten meters, plus ten more for each new rank attained in 'Senkotsu no Kouseinou'. Each wave travels at thrice the speed of a thrown kunai.
Description: Kamisawagi, the intermediate technique of the three sacred 'Kinmotsu no Akusen', has been donned as the Akusen's only projectile-based technique, granting it quite a special title, despite the vast drain of energy. By opening the third of the Celestial Gates, the Gate of Life, the shinobi's aura literally becomes a weapon itself, the user now capable of creating blasts that resemble waves of chakra, but are quite deceiving. By charging the mixture of chakra and stamina attained into a specific limb momentarily, the user suddenly thrusts the limb into a specific direction, the concussive force behind it being of such divine stature that the air struck condenses upon itself into a vortex following the path directed, pressurized air shooting toward the opponent in the form of a wave that can knock any affected dozens of meters away. Each wave is a mere meter x meter, but if the target is unaware, the wave can very well crush their bones due to such great momentum. The technique is quite fast and is extremely difficult to dodge from close range, but causes unbearable strain on the user's body afterward.
Domain: Akusen. Hachimontonkou - Gate Three. Senkotsu no Kouseinou 'D'.


Kinmotsu no Akusen - Kamizenkai (Forbidden Technique - Kratos' Destruction)
Rank: S
Type: Offensive / Taijutsu / Kinjutsu
Range: 0 - 50 meters
Stamina: Massive
Special: Can only be performed while the fifth Chakra Gate is open and active. Can only be performed once per thread, plus once more each time retrained. The area affected by the technique spans in a ten meter radius around the user, plus ten more for each new rank attained in 'Senkotsu no Kouseinou'.
Description: Kamizenkai, the final technique of the three sacred 'Kinmotsu no Akusen', is easily known as the most feared technique of the Akusen, and quite frankly, of most Taijutsu period. By opening the fifth of the Celestial Gates, the Gate of Limit, chakra surging around their frame transforms from a terrifying display of power into a murderous technique. By charging the mixture of chakra and stamina attained into a specific limb momentarily, the user suddenly thrusts the limb into the ground below, through a punch/stomp, and literally destroys the environment with massive, chaotic surges of energy. Pressurized air flows into the ground below, shattering the foundation as voluminous chunks of it's original form ascend into the air, anything placed upon them launched with great force as well. The astounding explosion is so powerful that those forced upwards ascend at twice the maximum distance that the technique spans, the mixture of potentially crashing into another airborne object and falling to their death being the harbringer of their own demise. The technique can plow through even the most durable defenses, but forces a debilitating strain on the user's body afterward.
Domain: Akusen. Hachimontonkou - Gate Five. Senkotsu no Kouseinou 'D'.
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[chiatsuki]

Okaeshi (Revenge)
Rank: D, C, B, A, S
Type: Supplementary / Offensive / Taijutsu
Range: Self
Stamina: Low - Very High
Special: Amplifies the user's next Taijutsu technique after using 'Muteki', the bonus damage and stamina consumed equivalent to the combined amount of damage sustained. The user must successfully survive the opponent's techniques with 'Muteki' in order to increase their own strength. Does not affect multiple Taijutsu techniques after this technique's use.
Description: The next step to increasing one's brawn within the art of augmented muscle, the user is able to transfer damage nullified by 'Muteki' into adrenaline, increasing the power of their next technique based on the strength of the techniques used against them. This technique requires patience, and if the user cannot successfully defend themselves against the opponent's techniques, the build of adrenaline disappears. The idea of this technique is based primarily on the scientific explanation of the transfer of energy: momentum inflicted upon the user does not simply become nonexistent, but is transformed into adrenaline, which is inflicted back upon the opponent through the user's own Taijutsu. However, this amplified strength does not come passively, and still requires the user to consume additional Stamina.
Domain: Akusen. Muteki per rank

Muteki virtually allows you the option of throwing a punch without slowing the users momentum. This would require a large amount of concentration and stamina to perform so I'm going to have to ask you make this jutsu undergo either a cool-down period or require some sort of pause before the initial attack. (just to make things fair. At least you have a choice).

Kyoudai Sentou (Mighty Punch)
Rank: D
Type: Offensive / Taijutsu
Range: 0 - 25 meters
Stamina: Low
Special: Can be retrained three times, stacking 'D' ranked damage each time. Inflicts knockback if the target is struck, the highest rank known of 'Senkotsu no Kouseinou' determining the distance:
D - 5 meters
C - 10 meters
B - 15 meters
A - 20 meters
S - 25 meters
Description: A simple maneuver of Akusen, and known as one of the very basic, Kyoudai Sentou is a strong punch thrown with the momentum of the user's thick muscles assisting the delivery of the blow. The direction from which the fist approaches is unimportant, making this quite useful in hand-to-hand combat.
Domain: Akusen. Senkotsu no Kouseinou 'D'.

Since the power of the technique can stack I'd like to have the stamina cost risen to a maximum of mid. Low - Mid.

Haneru Kire (Decapitating Chop)
Rank: C
Type: Offensive / Taijutsu
Range: Self
Stamina: Mid
Special: Causes numbness and the inability to utilize the targeted limb for a specific amount of time, based on the highest rank known of 'Senkotsu no Kouseinou'. Any strike to the head will render the target completely unconscious for the same specified duration:
D - 1/4th of a turn
C - Half of a turn
B - One whole turn
A - Two whole turns
S - Three whole turns
Description: Haneru Kire, a powerful strike known for it's debilitating capabilities. The user positions their hand in a narrow formation, gathering strength before aiming the chop for a specific area on the opponent's body. If the hit succeeds, the opponent's affected limb will feel extremely numb, and will be rendered useless for a specific amount of time. However, if the opponent is struck on the head, they will become knocked unconscious, making this technique quite deadly in combat.
Domain: Akusen. Senkotsu no Kouseinou 'D'.

I'm fine with allowing some of your jutsu not require a multi-ranked system (such as the first and second technique where the base jutsu determines speed) but this I can't let fly as just a C ranked technique because of its numbing abilities (the other techniques after this don't really effect the opponent in such a critical way, thats why I only pulled this one). Make it multi-ranked please? We're trying to step out of the loop of letting techniques like this (without a multi-ranked sys.) fly out.

Gekiha Hiji (Crushing Elbow)
Rank: C
Type: Offensive / Taijutsu
Range: 0 - 25 meters
Stamina: Mid
Special: Can be retrained three times, stacking 'C' ranked damage each time. Inflicts knockback if the target is struck, the highest rank known of 'Senkotsu no Kouseinou' determining the distance:
D - 5 meters
C - 10 meters
B - 15 meters
A - 20 meters
S - 25 meters
Description: Gekiha Hiji, a powerful elbow strike which can be performed from any direction. Although the technique is normally performed from a distance with the use of a single arm, in order to gain momentum, the user can choice a different method of completing the task. Without the need of a running head-start, while in extreme close-range, the user can simply place their opposite hand upon the fist of the 'charging elbow' arm that they plan to use as their weapon. Then, once the user forces the elbow into it's target, the force of applying pressure with their opposite hand onto the 'charging elbow' arm allows sufficient damage to take place, whereas a simple dash can inflict the same amount of damage, without the need to apply force with their opposite hand. However, the separate variations still grant the user unimaginable damage.
Domain: Akusen. Senkotsu no Kouseinou 'D'.


Nenshou Rariatto (Burning Lariat)
Rank: C
Type: Offensive / Taijutsu
Range: 0 - 25 meters
Stamina: Mid
Special: Can be retrained three times, stacking 'C' ranked damage each time. Inflicts knockback if the target is struck, the highest rank known of 'Senkotsu no Kouseinou' determining the distance:
D - 5 meters
C - 10 meters
B - 15 meters
A - 20 meters
S - 25 meters
Description: Nenshou Rariatto, a deadly arm thrust known to end the lives of many who challenge the Akusen. From close-range or from a running distance, the user gathers strength in their biceps, prepared to plummet into the target. Then, with a single, swift motion, the user performs a clothesline-like maneuver, their arm plowing through the target's chest with incredible brawn, potentially breaking bone due to it's power. In addition to the physical damage, the user furthers the chance of injury, their arm launching the target into the distance with tremendous force. The straightforwardness of the attack can be extremely deadly in combat.
Domain: Akusen. Senkotsu no Kouseinou 'D'.


Satsujin Hiza (Titanic Knee)
Rank: C
Type: Offensive / Taijutsu
Range: 0 - 10 meters
Stamina: Mid
Special: Can be retrained three times, stacking 'C' ranked damage each time. The force of the strike can knock the target greatly into the air, the highest rank known of 'Senkotsu no Kouseinou' determining the distance:
D - 2 meters
C - 4 meters
B - 6 meters
A - 8 meters
S - 10 meters
Description: Satsujin Hiza, a incredible knee strike that is quite unpredictable due to it's shallow position. Though normally performed while securing a tight grip on the target, the blow can truly be initiated from any position, as long as the momentum is sustained. The user gathers strength in their feet and legs, power building before pushing their kneecap into the opponent, the damage inflicted capable of being extremely effective if not defended against. As stated earlier, due to the rising knee being commonly initiated from the ground, the opponent's chances of recognizing the strike before it connects is quite slim if the user is close and agile enough.
Domain: Akusen. Senkotsu no Kouseinou 'D'.


Girochin Doroppu (Guillotine Drop)
Rank: C
Type: Offensive / Taijutsu
Range: 0 - 5 meters
Stamina: Mid
Special: Can be retrained three times, stacking 'C' ranked damage each time. Any strike to the head will render the target completely unconscious for a specific amount of time, based on the highest rank known of 'Senkotsu no Kouseinou:
D - 1/4th of a turn
C - Half of a turn
B - One whole turn
A - Two whole turns
S - Three whole turns
Description: Girochin Doroppu, a descending footdrop that can force the opponent into unconsciousness if struck. The user must build momentum through two maneuvers, the first being gathering strength in their feet and legs. Then, the user ascends into the air through a powerful leap, reaching up to five meters into the air before performing a simple, quick front-flip technique, which increases the momentum of the next movement. Upon completing the spin, the user rapidly descends to the target with their assaulting foot still raised above their head. Upon reaching the target, the user thrusts the risen foot into the body of the target, the momentum built from the raise and fall granting significant damage against the vulnerable opponent.
Domain: Akusen. Senkotsu no Kouseinou 'D'.


Funsai Mubou (Battering Headbutt)
Rank: C
Type: Offensive / Taijutsu
Range: 0 - 25 meters
Stamina: Mid
Special: Can be retrained three times, stacking 'C' ranked damage each time. Inflicts knockback if the target is struck, the highest rank known of 'Senkotsu no Kouseinou' determining the distance:
D - 5 meters
C - 10 meters
B - 15 meters
A - 20 meters
S - 25 meters
Description: Funsai Mubou, a straightforward technique which transfers energy built within the user's body into their opponent through a simple headbutt. The user builds momentum, stamina gathering as they set their eyes on the target like a raging bull. Then, either through close or medium range, the user charges their head into the target, the unorthodox assault being quite unexpected and brutal enough to inflict severe damage. The headbutt can be performed from up-close while already holding the opponent in a tight grip, or through a rampaging charge from a specific distance, meaning the variation and unconventional maneuver can be quite useful in combat.
Domain: Akusen. Senkotsu no Kouseinou 'D'.

Mid - High stamina consumption for all of these please; since the damage stacks so should the strength it requires.

Noroshi Appakatto (Skyrocket Uppercut)
Rank: B
Type: Offensive / Taijutsu
Range: 0 - 50 meters
Stamina: High
Special: Can be retrained three times, stacking 'B' ranked damage each time. The force of the strike can knock the target greatly into the air, the highest rank known of 'Senkotsu no Kouseinou' determining the distance:
D - 10 meters
C - 20 meters
B - 30 meters
A - 40 meters
S - 50 meters
Description: Noroshi Appakatto, a powerful rising punch often used by professional boxers, which can be deadly in the hands of an Akusen practitioner. The user gathers stamina in their leading arm, legs, and feet, several areas not common to most techniques within this fighting style. Then, the user lowers their body to the ground by bending their knees, the crouch position signifying the massive supply of strength, which is then followed by an extremely swift uppercut, the punch aimed for the target's jaw. Once the ascending strike connects, the transfer of momentum launches the opponent like a rocket into the air, the height being tremendous if the force allows it. Due to the incredible power behind the uppercut, this punch is quite feared as one of the Akusen's most threatening techniques, and can inflict damage upon impact into the ascension and from the descent.
Domain: Akusen. Senkotsu no Kouseinou 'D'.


Korijon Niryuu (Collision Double Axe)
Rank: B
Type: Offensive / Taijutsu
Range: 0 - 15 meters
Stamina: High
Special: Can be retrained three times, stacking 'B' ranked damage each time. Causes the ground below the user and the target to become ruptured and unsettled due to the strike's concussive strength, the force inflicting knockback on those within the technique's range outside of it, the highest rank known of 'Senkotsu no Kouseinou' determining the distance:
D - 3 meters
C - 6 meters
B - 9 meters
A - 12 meters
S - 15 meters
Description: Korijon Niryuu, a hammer-like assault that can render the target unconscious if struck, the aftereffect of the godly fists sending shockwaves into the ground below. The user gathers momentum into their arm and fists, each hand pressed tightly against the other, their fingers interlocked. Then, upon raising the fist over their head, the user abruptly drills the double fist into the head of the opponent like an axe, their body smashing into the ground afterward, the force being enough to break the opponent's skull and spine if unprepared. In addition to the divine strength of the technique, the environment is disturbed as well, intense energy flowing through the body of the target into the ground below, causing the earth to be cracked due to the power. However, this effect only occurs if the target is struck, or if the user continues the momentum of the double fist directly into the earth itself.
Domain: Akusen. Senkotsu no Kouseinou 'D'.


Bakuyaku Gachan (Explosive Slam)
Rank: B
Type: Offensive / Taijutsu
Range: 0 - 15 meters
Stamina: High
Special: Can be retrained three times, stacking 'B' ranked damage each time. Causes the ground below the user and the target to become ruptured and unsettled due to the strike's concussive strength, the force inflicting knockback on those within the technique's range outside of it, the highest rank known of 'Senkotsu no Kouseinou' determining the distance:
D - 3 meters
C - 6 meters
B - 9 meters
A - 12 meters
S - 15 meters
Description: Bakuyaku Gachan, a forceful slam that requires incredible brawn to complete. The user gathers stamina in several areas of the body, such as their arms and legs, the target being within arm's reach. Then, by simply obtaining a secure grasp on the opponent, the user lifts the target into the air, rotating their body with the intent of flipping the opponent directly into a threatening slam. The spin drives the momentum of the technique, and with a single, swift motion, the user slams the target into the ground below, the force being enough to shatter bones throughout their body. In addition to the divine strength of the technique, the environment is disturbed as well, intense energy flowing through the body of the target into the ground below, turning the earth into cracked rubble, causing movement to be difficult. However, this effect only occurs if the target is successfully thrusted into the ground, meaning the user must be nimble when performing this technique.
Domain: Akusen. Senkotsu no Kouseinou 'D'.

Same thing for these techniques, change the cost to high - very high. I notice along the line that there are more jutsu you have that need this change as well. You know how I want it. After you've edited the costs I'll give this a second look lazle.

[KID GAMBINO.]

Modified.

[Gally G6]

Shindou Hirate (Impact Thrust)
Rank: C
Type: Offensive / Taijutsu
Range: 0 - 25 meters
Stamina: Mid
Special: Causes hardened breathing and slowness in movement, which halves the opponent's speed, for a specific amount of time, the strength and knockback distance based on the highest rank known of 'Senkotsu no Kouseinou':

Description: Shindou Hirate, a deadly palm thrust known for determining the fate of battles. The user gathers strength in their hand, preparing the assault once close enough to the opponent. Once within a hand-reach distance, the user thrusts their palm into the chest if the opponent, the sudden strike causing abnormal functioning in their lungs, which forces the opponent to lack proper breathing and hinders their speed severely. The following knockback is just the after-effect of the user's incredible strength, and can cause other damaging effects to the target's body as well.
Domain: Akusen. Senkotsu no Kouseinou 'D'.

Rousuru Jinrai (Deafening Thunderclap)
Rank: C
Type: Offensive / Taijutsu
Range: Self
Stamina: Mid
Special: Causes lack of hearing and disorientation for a specific amount of time, based on the highest rank known of 'Senkotsu no Kouseinou':

Description: Rousuru Jinrai, a technique rivaling the effects of many Sound-based capabilities, which targets the opponent's auditory system through physical contact instead. The user gathers strength and both their hands, closing in on the opponent. Then, the user performs a 'clapping' motion toward the target's head, each hand striking the sides of their head. The powerful clap sends the momentum of the strike through the target's membrane, causing temporary damage, such as the sudden lack of hearing and disorientation in their sight and movement.
Domain: Akusen. Senkotsu no Kouseinou 'D'.

I'm fine with allowing some of your jutsu not require a multi-ranked system (such as the first and second technique where the base jutsu determines speed) but this I can't let fly as just a C ranked technique because of its numbing abilities (the other techniques after this don't really effect the opponent in such a critical way, thats why I only pulled this one). Make it multi-ranked please? We're trying to step out of the loop of letting techniques like this (without a multi-ranked sys.) fly out.

I am going to say, for conformatity's sake, make the two techs above multi-ranked, for the same reason.

After you fix that, I don't mind a 1² :]

[KID GAMBINO.]

Modified.

[Gally G6]

1^2!

[Jae]

Add The Restrictions
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• No clans or BLs.
  
• No Kekkei Toutai.
  
• No Medic-nin.
  
• Due to one's dedication to their own body, fighting styles involving weaponry are barred from Akusen practitioners.

[KID GAMBINO.]

Nov 25, 2011 20:00:32 GMT -8 KID GAMBINO. said:

Modified.

EDIT: Actually, I do have to disagree with the last restriction. While the first two make sense, I can't understand how being physically muscular has anything to do with weaponry... for example, it makes more sense to see Ju Kenshi + Akusen combinations than anything, or other future "powerhouse" weaponry styles. Long story short, I don't believe just because they are bodybuilding tanks that they won't be able to successfully use a weapon.

[Gally G6]

it is fine as is without the forbidding of other Taijutsu styles. 1²

[Shinryu]

I really don't see the need to restrict Clans and Bloodlines.

Hell, I had to have those limits REMOVED from my own FS.

Would it be kinda over-powered? Maybe, but having an uchiha with this would't make it any more unkillable than one with Hiraishin.

[King]

The major difference between an Uchiha having this fighting style and Hiraishin is obvious: the latter isn't freely obtainable. Even so, it takes a great deal to obtain that kinjutsu (and will only get harder as more people become available to quest for it), which requires the user to put their character's life on the line.

Akusen, on the other hand, has one major drawback: you sacrifice speed for power, which is fair. However, when you combine it with something like the Uchiha clan - which can eliminate the need for speed via predicting your opponent's movement, allowing you to one-shot them no matter what they do with your inhuman brute strength - or the Hyuuga clan - which, while not giving the user the ability to predict, but rather offers them an uncontest battle clarity which allows them to assess and evade easier than most if not all other shinobi - it becomes incredibly overpowered.

The only drawback that this fighting style really has is that you move slow. However, as I've said, when you pair it with clan and kekkei genkais that eliminate this one major limitation, there isn't a point in having it in the first place.

This isn't going to be accepted unless KGs and Clans are prohibited from learning it. As for the weapon fighting styles, I agree as well. You can use a weapon in combination with this, or just bash someone with a mace, but someone using this retarded strength with a battoujutsu technique is just silly. The limitations that Jae suggested will be required for this to be fully approved.

[KID GAMBINO.]

I still don't understand how those combinations with fighting styles will make this as OP as you both make it seem, seeing as Hoshigake completely have that freedom, but I won't debate about it. Modified.

[Jae]

Nov 30, 2011 4:33:49 GMT -8 KID GAMBINO. said:

I still don't understand how those combinations with fighting styles will make this as OP as you both make it seem, seeing as Hoshigake completely have that freedom, but I won't debate about it. Modified.

You have a point with that and, in the interest of fairness, Hoshigake is likely going to get reworked as a result of your work. Thanks for bring it to our attention.

[King]

Considering the limitations have been properly set, and it's received 1/² multiple times, I'm going to just 2/² this.