Mission: The stranded couple

[Kinz]

name; the stranded couple
rank; b
description; Two teenagers wanted to 'get away from it all' and spend some time together. Somehow, they've ended up stuck between various boulders that randomly fell, with no way out. After many hours of calling for help, someone has finally heard them. After informing the Kage, so your squad was sent to go assist the stranded couple. It appears both of the teenagers are having panic attacks and might attempt to move the boulders themselves. They could easily hurt themselves with the large boulders and what not. Help them before they do something rash!
reward; 60 experience, 1,000 ryo
minimum shinobi; one
mission status; open, credit vegapunk

Asa feet carried him swiftly across the paved roads of the village towards the park where the teenagers were said to be. He moved with haste, but he was surprised to see his little friend keeping pace fairly well. Asashio's robes flowed with his every movement, and one look at him would make it difficult to tell where any particular part of his body was in that mass of fabric. The sun on the horizon was beginning to become shadowed. not only would night fall soon, but it seemed the storms that the country was known for were going to kick up anytime. Once that happened who could say what would happen to the hard packed dirt where he was told the people were stuck.

Addressing his companion, whose name he just remembered he hadn't gotten, Asa would speak in a jovial nature. "So kiddo, we are in a hurry. In five words or less, tell me what you know how to do."[/color] He would smile as his eyes would fade into scarlet. "This is about all i got."[/color]

[Chae]

Step after step a Ayumu's figure strolled upon the horizon, just outside of Kumogakure no sato, careening back and forth with low gaits of speed. At first glance one could easily have suggested that the boy was exhausted, sapped of strength and energy, yet, he was merely tired and jaded as the suns raging rays shone down upon his frame, an annoying heat it was. "ahhh its soo hot...nightfall needs to hurry up" Flashes of identity came to bear in the moments to pass as earths orbital pull alighted the suns rays to blast Ayu's forefront. The short, swaying black hair, purplish blue optics, the gray shirt sported by the Uchiha clan crest and even his black leg warmers, it all became apparent.

"So kiddo, we are in a hurry. In five words or less, tell me what you know how to do."

As Asa began to speak Ayumu speed up his pace of walk, juxtaposing himself next to him. A reflexive hand uplifted instinctively, shielding his eyes from the suns blinding heaven-like hues as he looked upwardly to catch sight of Asa's eyes. Wow...I didn't know you had the sharingan Asa-sempai! Me? Well I'm a taijutsu specialist!" A sense of joyfulness fell upon his face as his seemingly rudderless stroll pressed swiftly along the paved road."Sadly I don't have my sharingan yet, but I'm still pretty strong without it!"

[Kinz]

The boys voice reverberated on the air. So a sharingan was in his future? interesting was the only word Asa could think of to describe it. Looking at a vein in the back of his hand, he realized the the sanguine fluid within was the same as the boy he now accompanied. Yes, interesting fit the situation perfectly.

"Well you follow directions pretty well. It was five words."[/color] Asa chuckled to himself, the richness of his voice echoing as they reached the beginning of a canyon that would lead them to the teenagers. rigid rock lined the high walls of the cliffs. Their grey and brown colors masked in shadow cast by the sun. The lack of vegetation showed just how little light penetrated this area. Even in the harshest conditions, as long as there was light plants could grow. He saw nothing. The hill concerned him however. Below them was part of the village market. A bustling area even in these late evening hours. Apparently at the top of the hill they would find the troublesome location. If rocks were there they had to take care not to shift things to drastically. Two children were not important enough to endanger the entire market district.

Thoughtfully he considered the boy. "Listen kiddo. Even without the sharingan you need to learn to analyze situations fully. The sharingan, like any other technique, Is just a tool meant to make life easier. We do not rely on tools. We merely work with them as the need arises."[/color] He realized the serious tone his voice projected, and the stern look that had crossed his face and quickly wiped them away. He replaced the look with a wide, toothy grin. "But it's a pretty bad ass looking tool if i do say so myself."[/color]

Turning back to the task at hand he would begin heading up the hill towards their objective.

[Chae]

"Well you follow directions pretty well. It was five words."

Ayumu chuckled along with his superior, his Uchiha elder as their casual strolls carried on for quite some time, soon possibly reaching the half-way marker to their objective, Ayumu could feel it. With several rounds of steps and minutes of travel the suns liquid beams began to soften as it slowly sunk behind the sea of mountains that laid within the distance. As Ayumu strolled adjacent to Asa he too survey the desolate land which had been seemingly devoid of all plant life and vegetation, it was a sight that could easily break down ones morale.

"Listen kiddo. Even without the sharingan you need to learn to analyze situations fully. The sharingan, like any other technique, Is just a tool meant to make life easier. We do not rely on tools. We merely work with them as the need arises."

Ayumu's optics remained hard upon Asa's emplacement as he spoke words of wisdom, much of which Ayu made sure to imbibe within the recesses of his mind. "I never thought about it that way." Ayu never minded when people would momentarily get serious, despite him being slightly naive due to his somewhat childish mentality he knew that one couldn't play at all times, there were times where seriousness demanded respect.

"But it's a pretty bad ass looking tool if i do say so myself."

Quickly Ayumu responded, "Hehe yeah it really is, I'm definitely going to earn mines some day for sure!" Enjoying each word exchanged with Asa he continued onward as they neared their objective. This was such a high ranking mission for Ayumu, however, though he hadn't known him that long he felt pretty safe around Asa, perhaps it was because the two shared the same blood within their veins.

[Kinz]

Moving up the hill, Asa was met with a sight that concerned him greatly. At what appeared to be a camp ground, a small overhang seemingly had collapsed. Now throughout the grounds debris had settled. Two large boulders were the center piece, with other earthen chunks preventing them from rolling down the hill directly to the market district. There, amongst the rubble were two people. One was a young man whose left leg seemed to merge with the debris. The other was a young woman who wasn’t trapped, but was laying their motionless. The man seemed to be flailing wildly.

Asa quickly scanned the scene. He had to have the man stop or else he would dislodge his leg and make the tons of debris go careening down the pass. The women needed some attention too. Even from this distance he could see the purple color of a bruise flowering on her head. Thinking quickly he called to Ayumu, “Hey kiddo. See what you can do about restraining that guy. If he’s not careful that pile is gunna steam roll the village. I think I have an idea.”[/color]

Assuming Ayumu would do what he could, Asa reached in his pouch searching for the tool he needed. The boulders seemed to have rough grooves in them. Most caused by erosion, those grooves would make for good exploding tag application. It would allow more of the blast to be concentrated on the core of the larger chunks. Asa applied one tag to each of the larger boulders, as well as another tag on the hill leading to the village. Then he would see what he could to about getting the boulders off the man. Maybe he’d let Ayumu have a crack at it. They couldn’t very well explode the rock with the man still underneath.

“Hey kid, got any ideas on how to get that guy out?” [/color]

Asa would smile waiting for the genin to voice his opinion.

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3 exploding tags applied

[Chae]

Powerful weight confined legs drove Ayumu's body up the hill effortlessly. The boys legs bore the physical prowess of a taijutsu specialist and as such- no matter how big or steep the hill- it had stood no match when against Ayumu's powered legs. A piteous visage washed over Ayumu's face as he shared sight of the incident with Asa-sempai, it was distressful indeed. "How could something like this have happened!?" As his eyes crawled over the surrounding area he came to meet the 'stranded couple'. The male's leg was trammeled beneath the rocks, he screamed and flailed frantically as he would probably give anything to free himself from the crushing weight that he boulder boasted.

“Hey kiddo. See what you can do about restraining that guy. If he’s not careful that pile is gunna steam roll the village. I think I have an idea.”

Ayumu looked up at Asa and back towards the objectives area, "Alright, leave it to me" With haste Ayumu ran towards the flailing man and sunk to the earthen floor with one knee as he tried to calm him down, unfortunately, his efforts had been fruitless for the mans panic attack overwhelmed his sense of logic and rationality. With a deep, sorrow-filled sigh Ayumu spoke to the man, but given the circumstances it was unlikely that the male even heard what he said, "I'm sorry but I have to do this for your own safety." With the side of his palm he brought it across his neck at such an angle where it instantly placed the male into a state of unconsciousness...

With his body now relaxed and free from tension it will be easier to slip him away from the debris since his body had no long been fighting against the force.

“Hey kid, got any ideas on how to get that guy out?”

"Call me Ayu...and as for the debris I should be able to the weak points of the rocks and shatter them with Tenjou No shuunen. Looks like they have cracks, so its more then possible."

Taking a stance Ayu began unleashing a fusillade of punches and elbows along the cracks of the debris with enough precision and power to crack the debris without disturbing the boulders themselves. After a couple of rounds Ayu finally freed the unconscious male and pull him off to the side at a distance where physical harm from the rocks would be impossible. "That should do it sempai"

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Tenjou no Shuuren (Discipline of Heaven and Earth)
Rank: D, C {50}
Type: Supplementary / Taijutsu
Range: Self
Special: All Tenjouken techniques of equal or lesser rank take one rank less energy to perform.
Description: The most basic technique of Tenjouken, this lays the foundation for the entirety of the style. It is a training of the body and a utilization of it to its utmost potential. Though not on the levels of the chakra-enhanced strength utilized by medic-nin, practitioners of Tenjouken have amazing physical power and speed with which to back it up. They focus on hitting hard and fast using efficient maneuvers. However, their training does not only cover offense; their bodies are extremely enduring and efficient.
Domain: Tenjouken

Keibi no Kougeki (Strike Guard)
Rank: C
Type: Offensive / Defensive / Taijutsu
Range: Self
Special: ---
Description: When fighting against another Taijutsu user, Tenjouken users find that the best defense is in a good offense. That is, when they are put on the defense, they instead attack. When moving to guard an attack, instead of simply blocking or swatting the attack away, they strike at the body of the incoming attack in order to stop it (i.e. if a punch is coming, instead of swatting it away, the user will strike at the forearm or elbow of the incoming punch, thereby deflecting and attacking at the same time). If a weapon is used, they attempt to close in and strike at the body holding the weapon.
Domain: Tenjouken, Tenjou no Shuuren 'C'

[Kinz]

"Nice Work kid. That did it."

The young companion struck the large boulder on the mans leg, causing shards to disperse on the landscape. The man's leg was free, and only small debris was rolling down the incline. Forming a handseal as the earthen matter crossed the plane of his exploding tag, all three that were within range would activate. An earth rending KABOOM, would make a small indent in the earth to capture what material was left.

Quickly moving to the females side he would check her vitals. Alive, but the flow of life was weakening in her mortal coil. Gently scooping her limp flesh up, Asa would begin his mad dash for the Medical facility. " Ayu, grab the guy. We gotta move!"

With that Asa would charge into the village proper.

[exit to medical center for drop off]

[.DEVIOUS]

I feel like this mission was done really quick, and short. It was marked B rank and both of you had (Kinz 4, Sorrow 3) really short posts. You could have asked someone to come in and GM the scenario, or either of you guys could have showed more creativity in things that could potentially go wrong after trying to free the two trapped.

I'll say that the mission is complete, but I don't think you'll get full exp out of it. Talk to your Kage and ask him to review the thread and see what he says.

As for the exp for the posts themselves, +30 to Kinz and +25 to Sorrow.