Shikigami Zouheishou

[Katsumaru]

Shikigami Zouheishou (Paper Angel’s Armory) [/u]
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: See Special
Handseals: 5
Chakra: High, Mid to Maintain
Special: The maximum distance these projectiles may travel is determined by the user's highest known Sujimae Kami (Folding Paper) rank. Initially, the user can create one object. For each time the technique is retrained, the amount of objects created increases by three, for a maximum of 10. For every three times the technique is retrained, the chakra consumption increases by one. The user cannot perform any other techniques while Shikigami Zouheishou is active. Must hold the last seal to control. Objects created can be no larger than five meters. Due to its advanced nature, Shikigami Zouheishou requires a certain mastery over Shikigami techniques.The created objects move as fast as thrown projectiles. Cannot be used with Crafting Paper Explosive Addition.
Description: Shikigami Zouheishou is a technique designed to employ the full versatility of the Paper Angel’s ability to manipulate paper and is build upon the concept of Kami Arashi no Jutsu. The user forms the hand seals, and upon completion, morphs the shape of the paper into one or more inanimate object. The Shikigami can create a variety of objects, such as arrows, spears, and chains. These are as sharp and hard as steel. The user can manipulate these objects freely while holding the last seal, but these objects can no longer be controlled should they come in contact with a surface.
Domain: Shikigami, Hatoronshi no Kami (Crafting Paper Skill); B, Kami Arashi no Jutsu, Requires three masteries in the Shikigami tree.

[Hotaru]

Low x 2 = mid.

why is this selfish? x:

You should probably make the secondary ability another technique, since this retrains for more weapons.

[Katsumaru]

I have made changes. Further, it is no longer selfish, as we have discussed that you rather not see it as selfish due to the nature of the technique and I realized that it would be unfair to have such a technique as a selfish. I added the requirement for three masteries because I personally prefer that a character shows commitment to the Kekke Genkai, as Shikigami Zouheishou is quite versatile.

[Naitome]

I'm guessing these move just as fast as any normally thrown projectile? As well as that they can be used along with the Paper Explosive Addition technique? It seems focused around the creation of weapons, but 'things they desire' doesn't extend to say...creating the image of someone you know, or animals, etc. right?

[Katsumaru]

I have added the line that the created objects move as fast as thrown projectile. Further, I changed it so that they cannot create "any object they desire", but only inanimate objects.

Lastly, I added the restriction that the technique cannot be used with Crafting Paper Explosive Addition, as before the revamp, the Shikigami were too centric on explosions, and I rather not return to that concept.

[Comatose]

Looks good, better than good in fact. 1 / 3

[Trigga]

2³

[vegapunk]

Congrats.

3/3