Oinin Jutsu

[tenshi]

Technique Name Raiton-Takase (Lightning Release-Shackle)
Rank: B
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Offensive
Handseals: 6
Chakra Consumption: Mid (low to sustain)

[/b]This technique is exclusive to the Oinin of Kumogakure.[/ul]

Technique Name Kingudenki (Static Tracking)
Rank: B
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m), Far (10m+)
Type: Supplementary
Handseals: 5
Chakra Consumption: Mid (low to sustain)

[/b]This technique is exclusive to the Oinin of Kumogakure.[/ul]

[Comatose]

Kingudenki (Static Tracking)

Kingurai (Lightning Tracking)

[tenshi]

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Added the need to hold the final seal, also removed the chakra signature aspect of the technique.

Kingurai (Lightning Tracking)

Removed entirely.
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[Exar Kun]

I don't have any issues with Lightning Shackle. In fact, I wouldn't cry foul if it's chakra cost was bumped down to mid, really. But that's your call really.

I'm not sure about Static Tracking though. While the effect itself is hardly unbalanced, it sounds basically like a Jiton technique, not a raiton technique, since you're essentially using magnet principles to sense people around you. As well, changing charges is a Jiton thing.

[tenshi]

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[Exar Kun]

Eh, to be honest, I don't know enough about the intricacies of the science to press the issue. As long as it's balanced, I suppose there isn't a whole lot to say about how exactly it works.

So, assuming that Coma and co. are okay with its workings, I'm okay with it too.

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[Arcadia]

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