Chi no Bōsō (Rampage of Blood) (WIP)

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Chi no Bōsō is a fighting style rooted firmly in the use of berserker rages, impossibly strong slams and strikes as well as pure, unbridled rage. Although many men may tap into a darker place when fighting, those that stomp a path of blood and war embrace the aching heat in their stomach, the sensation of beating an opponent into submission. To relish in the chorus of gore is to truly embrace the Rampage of Blood. To become a beast, one must shatter their perception of humanity.

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Restrictions

1. Taijutsu Primaries only.
2. May only utilize styles that prioritize brute strength and aggression, anything involving finesse, dexterity or a clear mind cannot be known as a user of Chi no Bōsō. Goken and the Gates may not be used with this style.

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Mastery

• Tier 1 - The Berserker: Now a journeyman berserker, those that reach this level of mastery are capable of running off of fumes. When exhausted from lack of chakra or being brought to the brink of unconsciousness, the user is able to act for an additional three turns, giving them time to either execute a threat or to escape. If used to avoid unconsciousness, once the three turns are up the user will pass out.
  
  
• Tier 2 - The Beast: Feared for their voracity in battle, those titled "Beasts" are capable of channeling a surge of bloodlust into one technique per thread. In the case of combo attacks, the amount of hits associated with the technique are doubled. For single strikes or slams, they are given the ability to circumvent any "downtime" caused by the exertion, allowing them to instantly follow up with another attack.
  
  
• Tier 3 - The Terror: Considered no less than superhuman, The Terror represents those who are in touch with the flames of rage. Now idols of fury, those dubbed "The Terror" are able to undertake the quest for Chi no Bōsō (Rampage of Blood). Additionally, the upward limit of Netsu (Craze) stacks is extended to 10.

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Kuda (Break)
Rank: D
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Offensive
Handseals: -
Chakra Consumption: Low

[/b] For a Low increment of chakra, the user may imbue their next strike with excessive force, conferring additional damage. If a direct blow is achieved, enemies will be knocked back (airborne or sliding) up to 5 meters. If the strike lands enough of a blow on an opponents guard, they will instead be sent back up to 1 meter. Cannot be used in conjunction with other techniques.[/ul]

Nibu (Dull)
Rank: D
Range: -
Type: Defensive
Handseals: -
Chakra Consumption: Miniscule, Low

[/b] Completely dulls any sense of pain for one turn for Miniscule and up to 3 for Low, may be used before, after or during a pain inducing effect.[/ul]

Machiga (Confuse)
Rank: C
Range: -
Type: Offensive
Handseals: -
Chakra Consumption: Low

[/b] May be applied to any non-technique strike.[/ul]

Kakusu (Conceal)
Rank: C
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Supplementary
Handseals: -
Chakra Consumption: Low

[/b] Due to the haze not being filled with chakra, those with special sight aren't hindered whatsoever by the haze.[/ul]

Tansaku (Hunt)
Rank: C
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m) Mid (5m ~ 10m) Far (10m+)
Type: Supplementary
Handseals: -
Chakra Consumption: Miniscule per turn.

[/b] May be maintained with little to no concentration requirements. Enemies within 5 meters are able to be pinpointed exactly, while those beyond this range will only hint at their recent direction. One charge of Netsu may be expended to extend this pinpoint recognition to 15 meters.[/ul]

Tsubusu (Crush)
Rank: C
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Offensive
Handseals: -
Chakra Consumption: Low

[/b] If a limb is grabbed, a Low increment of chakra can be used to reinforce the grip and then promptly slam the opponent. May not throw the opponent and contact with a surface is required for damage to be achieved. If the part grabbed is not a part of the opponents body, the enemy may be able to escape by ripping or discarding the item being used to slam them.[/ul]

Tataku (Beat)
Rank: C
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Offensive
Handseals: -
Chakra Consumption: Mid

[/b]Providing the initial pull lands, all subsequent strikes are likely land as well. The second punch carries enough force to induce vomiting and the third punch is capable of potentially breaking bones, be it from the initial strike or the density of an object the human missile may come into contact with.[/ul]

Buchitoutaru (Slam)
Rank: B
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Offensive
Handseals: -
Chakra Consumption: Mid

[/b] This technique is a combo, providing the initial enhanced strike lands on the stomach, chest or back, the subsequent slam is likely to connect as well.[/ul]

Hoshokusha (Predator)
Rank: B
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m) Mid (5m ~ 10m)
Type: Offensive
Handseals: -
Chakra Consumption: Mid

[/b] The initial grab is slow and easily avoided, the users arms wide and open to attack during the motion. Providing it lands, all subsequent slams are likely to land. The travelling speed of the enemy is sufficient enough to have them crash through a stone wall or even break the bones of another body they may come into contact with.[/ul]

Netsu (Craze)
Rank: B
Range: -
Type: Passive
Handseals: -
Chakra Consumption: -

[/b] What is considered tangible damage is determined on a case by case basis. Stacks are still accrued if Nibu (Dull) is used after noting and feeling an instance of pain.
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Kyoukou (Panic)
Rank: B
Range: -
Type: Supplementary
Handseals: -
Chakra Consumption: Cost equal to the Genjutsu being dispelled + Mid.

[/b]Chakra cost scales based on rank of Genjutsu being broken. One Netsu charge must be expended per rank, meaning to break a B-Rank Genjutsu, three Netsu charges must be expended. Requires Netsu (Craze).[/ul]

Kemono Hado (Beast Surge)
Rank: A
Range: -
Type: Supplementary
Handseals: -
Chakra Consumption: High activation, low per turn.

[/b] Allows the user to generate their bodies full strength without leverage, conferring the ability to lift full weights without a proper stance, throw full force punches from positions of awkwardness as well as other incredible feats of strength. When expired, requires a full turn to recoup during which time no other berserking or enhancement techniques may be used. Cooldown equal to 1/4th of the time spent in the state (rounded up) with a minimum of one turn, during which only C-Rank and below Taijutsu may be utilized.[/ul]

• Omocha (Plaything)
  Rank: B
  Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
  Type: Offensive
  Handseals: -
  Chakra Consumption: Mid initial cost, mid per swing.
  
  

[/b] These swings may be directed wherever the user chooses, be it at another opponent or into a surface such as a wall or floor. Requires Kemono Hado.[/ul][/li]
[li]Chouyaku (Leap)
Rank: B
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m) Mid (5m ~ 10m)
Type: Supplementary
Handseals: -
Chakra Consumption: Mid

[/i] in their grasp, hefting their weight with them as they soar through the air.

Note: May travel up to 10 meters total, this means that the user can jump up vertically 10 meters, diagonally 10 meters, straight ahead, backwards, etc. However the total length of distance traveled equals 10 meters. Requires Kemono Hado.[/ul][/li]
[li]Tenraku (Plunge)
Rank: A
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m) Mid (5m ~ 10m)
Type: Offensive
Handseals: -
Chakra Consumption: High

[/b]May be used at any point of one's jump, extending the potential range of Chouyaku to 20m. User is unable to act for half a turn upon landing and will travel another two meters due to the momentum of their prior movement. Only usable during Chouyaku.[/ul][/li]
[li]Hokaku (Capture)
Rank: A
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m)
Type: Offensive
Handseals: -
Chakra Consumption: High

[/b] Providing the initial grab is successful and not escaped by the time the berserker jumps, the subsequent slam cannot be avoided unless the opponent is capable of escaping both the strength of the user as well as the force of the ascension bearing down on them.[/ul][/li]
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Chi no Bōsō (Rampage of Blood)
Rank: SS
Range: -
Type: Supplementary
Handseals: -
Chakra Consumption: -

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[Anmida]

Buchitoutaru (Slam) - Just fix the typo to make sure it says 2 turns.

as well as daze them for 2 if the surface beneath them is hard enough.

Kyoukou (Panic) - The chakra cost is gonna have to be equal to the Genjutsu you are dispelling + mid amount due to the short immunity gained.

Kemono Hado (Beast Surge) - Make it a High chakra cost to activate and extend the cool down time to 1/4th (round up) the amount of time spent in the Berserker state with a minimum of one turn. I also believe that one should not be able to use any form of Taijutsu during the cool down period.

Chi no Bōsō (Rampage of Blood) - Make this SS rank so that if someone wants it, they really have to dedicate themselves to the style.

[EITO]

all edits made

[Anmida]

1/3 bruh. Go ragey.

[Ohta]

Hi there! I'll begin my review.

[/b]

Kuda (Break): Could you please write down what the interaction between the technique and something like armor would have? Would the armor cave in because of the strike? Would it break through a wooden barrier?

Please be aware, that any technique that lists multiple attacks OR an attack that "if one connects, all will connect" doesn't mean they all will connect.

I would like to see to a change, (unless you can give me adequate reason as to why) that since the offensive capabilities dramatically increase with rank and I'm seeing a lot of "break, daze, crack through concrete", that a user of the "Chi no Bōsō" can only use OFFENSIVE techniques equal to their own strength stat.

Aside from this, I love the theme and you've stayed true to it entirely. It's finally to make time for a real berserker.

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[EITO]

It already states "up to 5 meters". It's a mildly enhanced strike, what armor it'll cave in would depend on the fragility of the armor itself, which is listed in the protectorates.

As for combos, see Goken and Hitenryuu. There's no need to remove the wording as it's a valid and currently used effect.

The slams all require one to be grabbed and then pulled into a position of weakness prior. Having to get within not only arms reach but pulling reach, successfully yank somebody in and then slam them is, in my opinion, enough of a prerequisite for the effects. As for scaling with the Strength stat, why? No other style on the site operates off of this restriction.

[Ohta]

Hi there! I'll begin my review.

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Yes, the combos are there in Goken and Hitenryuu. I'm not asking you to remove the wording, I was just saying be aware that you cannot powergame ALL of your strikes hitting (regardless of how prevalent and unlikely it seems- unless there are obvious differences, like a Kage against an Academy students.)

Okay.

You have my 2/3.

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[addy-hime ♥]

I discussed changed to the combos in the cbox. They are not auto-hit, the hits must connect or be escaped from logically via RP and stat differences.

3/3 accepted.