Youton Customs, Vol 1 - not too harsh please (:

[Gally G6]

Tokiniwa (Once in a while)

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Rank:[/u] D, C, B, A, S [25, 50, 100, 150, 300]
Type:[/u] Defensive / Youton Kekkai Touta
Range:[/u] 0 - 5 meters
Chakra:[/u] See special!
Special:[/u] Speed at which the shield is activated depens on depends on the user's highest Koumu rank. Size and chakra consumption of Koumu shield is directly proportionate to attack being blocked. Blocks attacks one rank lower than the highest version of the technique the user has learned in a 360 degree radius, as long as the user can see them coming. Requires no hand-seals to operate, however the user must stomp on the ground to activate the shield. Judge will determine whether fast enough attacks bypass the shield each time it’s used.
Description:[/u] While not the strongest of defenses in Youton, is is no less useful. The user beigns by first channeling a compact amount of Koumu around their pores. When threatened, the user will stomp on a hard surface, causing the pressurized Koumu within the user's pores to explode violently outward, stomping any assault within a close range of the user. This appears as a sudden dome of dense white mist surrounding the user. Fast or strong enough attacks will be able to bypass the shield, regardless of whether the user can see the assault or not.
Domain:[/u] Youton. Fushokuzai (Corrosion disolvance factor). Koumu (Skilled mist).

Mierumachi (Where you can see the ocean)[/u]
Rank:[/u] D, C, B, A, S [25, 50, 100, 150, 300]
Type:[/u] Supplementary / Youton Kekkai Touta
Range:[/u] See special!
Chakra:[/u] See special!
Special:[/u] Highest rank determines which Suiton techniques may be infused with Koumu. Level of acidity [corrosion] depends on the user's highest Fushokuzai rank, while the highest Koumu rank determines speed at which the corrosive effects start to take effect. The range and chakra requirement are that of the Suiton technique being infused (due to the intense chakra needed, no chakra masteries will apply to any Suiton techniques affected by Mierumach). In essence the only thing this technique is doing is adding the corrosive properties of Koumu to any Suiton technique the user may know. This technique requires the user hold the snake handseal after the headseals for the Suiton technique being performed to have the corrosive effects attached to it.
Description:[/u] While not the most powerful technique on its own, Youton users have been able to turn tide in battle against those who used to extinguished their jutsu with Suiton. By channeling one's own chakra before performing a Suiton jutsu, the user may infuse said technique with the corrosive abilities of Youton. This can often become a hazard to those in the area for only the user is immune to the corrosive effects. Before the technique is initiatated, the user will bite both thumbs before molding their chakra due to the fact that blood carries a higher concentration of one's physical component for chakra. Once the seals for the Suiton technique are finished, the user holds the snake hand-seal, attaching the corrosive powers of Youton. This can quickly change the field as well as harm any one within range of the technique, for only the user is immune to the effects. This downside makes using this with powerful Suiton techniques very dangerous.
Domain:[/u] Youton. Fushokuzai (Corrosion disolvance factor). Koumu (Skilled mist).

Majo (Witch)[/u]
Rank:[/u] C [50]
Type:[/u] Offensive / Youton Kekkai Touta
Range:[/u] 0 - 15 meters
Chakra:[/u] Mid (See special!)
Special:[/u] Strength and corrosiveness are equivalent to the user's rank of Fushokuzai. The user is able to spit a single 5 centimeter burst of compressed Koumu the first time learned. Each time relearned allows the user to spit one more burst. For every 5 bursts fired off, the chakra consumption increases by one tier. Spitting one burst of compressed Koumu takes roughly one second. If the user spits a burst at a target's face (i.e. a canine, a person, etc), they will clutch their face, being temporarily blinded from the pain for one IC post (this is not stackable).
Description:[/u] Said to have been a Youton user's taunt, as it can help the user out of many situations. By channeling chakra into their mouth, the user will create a compressed sphere of Koumu, which they can proceed to fire at a target within range. Upon hitting a solid target, the sphere will loose its stability, releasing a small cloud one meter in all dimensions. This is often used when bound, as the user can spit on the technique to cause it to slowly disintegrate. As well, this has been used many times to spit in the face of opponents, leaving them temporarily blinded from the acid.
Domain:[/u] Youton. Fushokuzai (Corrosion disolvance factor) C. Koumu (Skilled mist) C.

Bokunejin (Quiet unsociable person)[/u]
Rank:[/u] B [100]
Type:[/u] Offensive / Youton Kekkei Touta
Range:[/u] See special!
Chakra:[/u] High (See special!)
Special:[/u] Strength, corrosiveness and range are determined by the user's highest Fushokuzai rank. The user is able to create a single, 1 meter long and wide blob of lava the first time learned. Each time relearned allows the user to create one more blob. For every 5 blobs the user fires, the chakra consumption increases by one tier.
Description:[/u] The user will first perform the necessary handseals before channeling Earth and Fire chakra into their mouth, molding the two natures together. Upon firing the user will puff out their cheeks as far as possible, spitting a large blob of corrosive lava at the target(s). This technique can also be manipulated to block doors and narrow exists using the hardening process of lava to prevent a target from escaping. After one turn, any blobs used will hardened.
Domain:[/u] Youton. Fushokuzai (Corrosion Disolvance Factor) B. Majo (Witch).).

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Rank:[/u] B [100]
Type:[/u] Offensive / Youton Kekkai Touta
Range:[/u] See special!
Chakra:[/u] High (initial and to maintain per turn), bumps up one one tier for each additional 50 hailstones. Chakra Reduction masteries can never be applied to this technique at any time.
Special:[/u] The general size and penetrating strength of the hailstones is dependent on the user’s knowledge of Fushokuzai, 1/10th of the highest rank known.The size and corrosiveness depends on the user’s highest rank of Fushokuzai known.

• D: 1 meter diameter / penetrates D rank defenses
• C: 2 meter diameter / penetrates C rank defenses
• B: 3 meter diameter / penetrates B rank defenses
• A: 4 meter diameter / penetrates A rank defenses
• S: 5 meter diameter / penetrates S rank defenses

Initially When first learned, the user may create 10 hailstones. Each time relearned after the initial allows the user to be able to create 10 more hailstones at one time for a maximum of 150 at any given time (being able to train this technique a maximum of 15 times). The user is able to let the hailstones fall anywhere within their maximum Fushokuzai range. The user is able to send the hailstones in varying directions (nothing more than 90 degrees in any direction, meaning the hailstones cannot be launched upward or arched), however once released, the user’s chakra is no longer attached to the hailstone, preventing a path from changing mid-flight.
Description:[/u] The user will first string together a fair amount of seals before channeling their chakra into the earth. Drawing lava from deep underneath the ground's surface, the user will then gather a large amount of lava into large clumps in the shape of boulder-like formations and then drop them from the sky on to their opponents. It covers a large range, making it a challenge to evade the numerous hailstones. Unlike most typical Youton techniques, upon contact with flesh, stone or anything solid, the hailstones will simply act as hardened lava, shattering when a physical force is met (or in the case of skin, piercing it if chakra is charged into the stones before hand).
Domain:[/u] Youton. Fushokuzai (Corrosion disolvance factor) B. Ketatamashii Youton Dangan (Piercing corrosive bullets). Bokunenjin (Quiet unsociable person).

Ishindenshinfuon (Quiet understanding of disturbed conditions)[/u]
Rank:[/u] A [150]
Type:[/u] Offensive / Youton Kekkai Touta
Range:[/u] See special!
Chakra:[/u] Very High
Special:[/u] Range and corrosiveness depends on highest rank of Fushokuzai know. Learned the first time, the user is capable of spewing forth five locusts comprised of lava. Each time retrained, the user may spew an additional five locusts, for a maximum of 50 locusts (this technique may be learned a total of 10 times. Due to the intensity and chakra control required to keep the locusts' form, the user is unable to use any technique requiring handseals during the time this technique is active. Due to the nature of the lava creatures and the chakra required, this technique lasts one turn for each rank of Fushokuzai known (for a maximum of five turns). These locust-like creatures, once spawned from the user's mouth, do not fly at the target immediately persay. Upon command, the user can direct up to 10 locusts at a time to fly at the intended target at speeds of a thrown kunai. While the locusts are not attacking, they will randomly hop into the air and land five meters from the spawning point (this applies to all locusts the user chooses to create at one time). If one happens to be in the path of a wandering locust, they will take blunt force damage equal to the user's highest rank of Fushokuzai known.
Description:[/u] Over the years many users of Youton studied various scenarios to bring their prowess to fruition. One such observance was the eating habits of a swarm of locusts, being known to demolish anything in their path rather quickly while using very little energy. One such kunoichi who deftly wielded Youton quickly devised a way to mimic a swarm of locusts. By first flying through a string of handseals, the user will then proceed to channel the Earth and Fire elements to their mouth. Upon mixing the two the user will spew a number of kunai-sized blobs of lava which will quickly begin to take the shape of locusts. These larger-than-normal creatures will have a thin armor of hardened lava; upon contact the fragile shell will crush the insect causing a large dose of molten rock to explode forth. The locusts are unable to remain stationary otherwise become hardened before the user's use for them had occurred. Due to their hyperactive nature, anyone within the range of one of the buggers could easily be in danger, however anyone outside the highest range of the user's Fushokuzai is safe, as the locusts can not travel outside this distance. Upon detonation, the lava within the locust will travel five meters before hardeing, being able to eat away at most substances equal or lower to the user's highest Fushokuzai rank known. The user has no control over where the locusts travel (however they can no exceed the highest range of Fushokuzai known), as well they are equally vulnerable to any exploding insects. When the time limit for the creatures has expired, they will simply harden. Upon stepping on an insect one might find the soles of their footware (or feet) to be covered in a semi-solid orange slime, capable of holding them in place for one turn.
Domain:[/u] Youton. Fushokuzai (Corrosion disolvance factor) A. Bokunenjin (Quiet unsociable person). Youkai (Melting spectre).[/ul]Okubaguchi (Teeth-grinder)[/u]
Rank:[/u] B [100]
Type:[/u] Offensive / Youton Kekkei Touta
Range:[/u] See special!
Chakra:[/u] High
Special:[/u] Size and strength of fist depends on the user's Fushokuzai rank. Fist measures 1 meter all around, plus 1 more each time retrained.
Description:[/u] Simple yet effective, this Youton technique allows the user to effectively create a fist of lava resembling the user's. A thin layer of hard magma cover the user's arm to protect it while fresh magma oozes to create the enclosed appendage. At the user's behest, they can strike their opponent's with the furious power of Youton.
Domain:[/u] Youton. Fushokuzai (Corrosion Disolvance Factor) B.

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Rank:[/u] B [100]
Type:[/u] Supplementary / Offensive / Youton Kekkai Touta
Range:[/u] See special!
Chakra:[/u] Mid (upon creation), High (per turn after the initial)
Special:[/u] Height at which user can propel themselves depends on highest rank of Fushokuzai known. This technique may be held for one turn when first learned, plus one more each time retrained. To change direction, the user must briefly stop pumping chakra to their arms and rotate their body in the new direction they wish to travel. The burst of lava utilized to propel the user travels a maximum of five meters from the initiation point. Once achieved, the user again charges their arms to release the jets of lava.
Description:[/u] Despite its misleading name, this technique deals not so much with the corrosive properties of Youton so much as the lava one can create. Many believed long ago that due to their close bond to the aspects of Youton, users of this release would never find a way of quick travel. However, by coating their arms in a thick layer of rock, the user will cause lava to pour from the cracks. While inactive lava will simply drip from the cracked rocks, burning anything it touches for B rank corrosiveness. When a B rank worth of chakra is charged into the rock-covered arms, lava will suddenly burst forth from the cracks with an incredibly pressure. The user will punch downwards, forcing the lava out of the cracks in the hardened rock on their arms. This essentially allows the user to essentially gain a form a flight similar in nature to flying with jets. Through the duration of this technique, the user may not perform any techniques requiring handseals.
Domain:[/u] Youton. Fushokuzai (Corrosion disolvance factor) B. Kamitsuki (Snarling forest god baring its teeth).

Kamitsuki (Snarling forest god baring its teeth)[/u]
Rank:[/u] A [150]
Type:[/u] Supplementary / Offensive / Youton Kekkai Touta
Range:[/u] See special!
Chakra:[/u] Very High (intiation), High (to reform after initial use)
Special:[/u] Strength and corrosiveness are equivalent to the user's rank of Fushokuzai. Fist is able to leave Fushokuzai range, however once this occurs the user cannot disperse the fist (which will continue to fly until it impacts with an opposing force). Width of fist created is determined by how much one has invested in Ganshou Kobushi.
Description:[/u] Much like its parent technique, the user channels a thin layer of hard magma, covering one arm to protect while fresh magma oozes out. Upon creation, the user is able to fire the fist as a large projectile, capable of plowing through defenses equal to the base of Fushokuzai. By charging the arm with a Very High amount of chakra, the user may launch more than one fist. The user can only fire one fist per turn, having to wait one turn before firing another. After 3 turns the fist hardens and becomes merely a blugeoning object, able to deal damage equivalent to the user's highest Fushokuzai rank. Due to the nature of the technique, the lava fist can not change directin once launched, flying at speeds equivalent to twice the speed of a kunai.
Domain:[/u] Youton. Fushokuzai (Corrosion Disolvance Factor) A. Okubaguchi (Teeth-grinder).[/ul]Hanahada Shimetaoaki: Kirittoshitakishippo (Very fine in autumn: Tail of a pine tree)[/u]
Rank:[/u] B [100]
Type:[/u] Offensive / Youton Kekkai Touta
Range:[/u] 0 - 15 meters
Chakra:[/u] High (upon creation), Mid (per turn after the intial)
Special:[/u] Level of corrosion and damage dealt by the whips depends on the user's highest rank of Fushokuzai known. As well, this technique last for one turn when first learned, plus one more turn each time relearned for a maximum of five times total (30 seconds IC). This technique when first learned has a width of one meter, plus one more meter each time retrained for a maximum of five meters. After the technique ends, the user must wait two turns before initiating the technique again.
Description:[/u] The user will channel their chakra into the arms to coat them in a thick layer of hardened lava, which will constantly pour forth fresh lava. The user will then focus chakra into their arms, causing the lava to burst forth up to 15 meters in a thick whip-like structure. Due to the nature of the medium, the user will coat the lava structures in a thin layer of chakra to prolong the hardening process. After one turn of preperation two thick whips made of hard, flexible molten rock will be crafted. These can cause massive damage, capable of dealing one rank of blunt damage per strike equivalent to the user's highest knowledge of Fushokuzai, as well as being able to destroy A rank and below defenses, simply due to the sheer force used behind the whips. These whips may withstand up to a B rank worth of damage each, however by giving the whips a B ranked charge, the user may essentially rebuild the whips. Both of the two whips may measure up to 15 meters in length, while they both are about one meter in width. Upon a successful impact, the user may cause parts of the whips to explode, sending chunks of molten rock flying towards the opponent. The explosion of the magma will travel one meter for each time this technique is learned (for a maximum five meter radius). If lodged, the sharp pieces of hot lava will imbed themselves within the skin, causing irritation and mild bleeding if left untreated. Through the duration of this technique, the user may not perform any techniques requiring handseals. The user is able to control the whips as if they were simply extensions of a normal whip.
Domain:[/u] Youton. Fushokuzai (Corrosion disolvance factor) B. Okubaguchi (Teeth-grinder).

Sabisuji (Rust-tainted muscle)[/u]
Rank:[/u] B, A [100, 150]
Type:[/u] Offensive / Trapping / Youton Kekkai Touta
Range:[/u] See special!
Chakra:[/u] High (per use)
Special:[/u] Range and strength required to break free from the binding is equivalent to the user's highest Fushokuzai rank. The amount of times this technique may be used in a thread is determined by how many times the user has learned Bokunenjin. When the B rank is learned the first time, the user may user may bind a single target for half a turn. Relearning the B rank extends the binding duration by half a turn (for a maximum 10-turn binding), while the A rank allows the user to bind one more person each time learned. The user is able to fire more than one blast at a target, however once bound, the only thing that stacks is the strength required to break free (i.e. using this technique twice with Fushokuzai A rank, would require 2 A-ranks worth of damage to break free). The time in which the person is bound cannot be stacked; this means if this technique has only been trained to bind desired target(s) for 3 whole turns, multiple uses of the technique will only stack the amount of damage required to break free (meaning the technique woul still only last 3 whole turns). It takes roughly half a turn for the quicklime to trap a target, and a full turn for the paralysis to start taking effect.
Description:[/u] Despite the technique's name, it has nothing to do with the properties of rust, instead taking on the similar effect of what happens to the muscles when enough tetnis enters the body. The user expels a large quantity of quicklime from their mouth, which is capable of binding an opponent. Upon making contact, the quicklime will wrap itself around the target's torso. After a few seconds, it will begin to congeal and harden due to exposure to oxygen, after which the shell will contract tightly, injecting ten senbon-sized needles into vital areas of the skin. This will cause no damage besides that of being jabbed with multiple senbon at one time. Instead, the needles which jab into the trapped body contain a highly corrosive substance (similar to the method Psychological warfare enhancement uses, albeit much weaker) which temporarily paralyzes the body by causing the muscles to contract to the point where all movement (with the exeption of blinking, breathing, etc, which feels laboured due to the tightly-wrapped quicklime around the target's chest) becomes halted through the duration of the binding. The shell which wraps around the victim has a secondary feature, often unknown to those affected by it. Due to the quicklime being created with caustic-like qualities, contact with B-ranked or higher Suiton techniques will cause the shell to explode with a force equivalent to 5 exploding tags. While this could never outright kill the bound victim, it can incur severe breathing problems, as well make performing Taijutsu more challening than normal (user's discretion). Upon the time limit in which the user has achieved with the binding, the quicklime shell will loose its stability and crumble, at which point the bound target will no longer be paralysed.
Domain:[/u] Youton. Fushokuzai (Corrosion disolvance factor) B. Youkai (Melting spectre). Bokunenjin (Quiet unsociable person).

]Sukuu (Help out)[/u]
Rank:[/u] A [150]
Type:[/u] Defensive / Youton Kekkai Touta
Range:[/u] See special!
Chakra:[/u] Very High (upon creation), Mid (per turn after the inital to maintain the armor)
Special:[/u] Completely coats the user from head to toe in malleable lava armor which protects them from incoming damage. Defensive strength is equivalent to the user's rank of Fushokuzai. The user’s speed becomes that of one rank lower while wearing this armor (i.e. Primary=Secondary, Secondary=Tertiary). For the duration of this technique, the user is unable to perform any techniques requiring handseals. As a result of the armor’s weight and thickness, all taijutsu techniques will receive bonus damage equivalent to the user’s highest Fushokuzai rank.
Description:[/u] A thick and heavy armor-type ninjutsu, this technique covers the user from head to toe in what appears to molten lava. Unlike many armor jutsu, one can clearly tell when the user is under the effects of this technique due to the constant dripping of fresh lava from the cracks in the hardened rock. If the user is attacked, the lava armor will defend the attack equal to the highest Fushokuzai rank known. An attack of equal strength will crack the armor, requiring a quick charge to repair. An attack one rank higher than this technique will cause the armor to shatter, leaving the user open for a possible attack.
Domain:[/u] Youton. Fushokuzai (Corrosion disolvance factor) A.

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Rank:[/u] A [150]
Type:[/u] Defensive / Offensive / Youton Kekkai Touta
Range:[/u] See special!
Chakra:[/u] Very High (upon intiation), High (per turn after the initial to maintain)
Special:[/u] The size and corrosiveness depends on the user’s highest rank of Fushokuzai known.

• D: 1 meter width / dissolves D rank techniques
• C: 2 meter width / dissolves C rank techniques
• B: 3 meter width / dissolves B rank techniques
• A: 4 meter width / dissolves A rank techniques
• S: 5 meter width / dissolves S rank techniques

Initially, the mist arms can defend against one strike equal to the user’s highest rank of Fushokuzai known (this also determines the strength with which the arms can attack), as well as being able to strech 10 meters. Each time re-learned, the user's mist hands can defend against an additional blow as well as adding 10 meters of distance. When the hands are defeated, their defensive ability for one turn is negated. Being held by the hands can only be broken out of with large chakra influxes equal or greater than that of the user's highest Fushokuzai rank, or that of the Eight Chakra Gates or a Bijuu.
Description:[/u] No one truly knows why this technique was named such, however many believe the user created this branch to add offense to an already powerful defense. One of few techniques within Youton not to require handseals, the user sends a supple amount of chakra through the molten armor as a pulse. Even from far away one can observe the armor gaining in girth as if one had inflated it with air. This chakra is actually corrosive mist building up underneath the armor. Once again, the user will send another great surge of chakra through the armor (this two pulses being the initiation equating to a Very High amount of chakra) unto which a loud cracking sound followed by a terrible ripping will occur. These loud sounds are actually the armor cracking under the intense pressure of the contained chakra; within moments a great burst of what appears to be steam will burst forth from the numerous cracks. The steam, which is actually a large supply of Koumu, will begin to envelop the user, making them appear as if they were standing in a sauna room. The acidic mist will float around the user until an attack is launched by the opponent. Unlike conventional shielding techniques which are purely defensive, this technique takes a more direct approach, attempting to intercept the oncoming attack with full force. Upon seeing an attack launched, the user will send a surge of chakra into the mist, which will then form into two giant hands. These great hands will attempt to grasp the oncoming attack and smother it by dissolving. As the user is able to adjust the acidity of the mist, someone with this technique may also use the arms to hold an opponent in place (which would require a force equal to or higher than that of the user’s highest Fushokuzai rank) or launch corrosive punches. Due to the intense concentration needed, the only movement the user may perform is turning their head (or shifting their body slightly for a better angle is needed), however any form of walking, running, fighting, etc will automatically cause the arms to evaporate.
Domain:[/u] Youton. Fushokuzai (Corrosion disolvance factor) A. Sukuu (Help out). Koumu (Skilled mist)[/ul]Hikidoki (A good time to quit)[/u]
Rank:[/u] A [150]
Type:[/u] Offensive / Youton Kekkai Touta
Range:[/u] See special!
Chakra:[/u] High (per turn to maintain fangs), Very High (per turn to maintain stream)
Special:[/u] The corrosiveness of the stream depends on the user's highest rank of Koumu known. The width and distance the stream can travel as well as the durability of the fangs depends on the user’s highest Fushokuzai rank. Fangs measure five meters in length and half a meter in width. Due to the fangs being incredibly heavy and not normally part of a human’s mouth and skull structure, a High amount of chakra is required per turn to keep the user’s neck and spine from snapping (however, due to the intense chakra used, the user is capable of moving the fangs up and down much like a snake could). While the user is able to utilize the oversized fangs as battering or piercing weapons (assuming the target(s) are in range), they may also fire a stream of corrosive acid must like how a snake spits. For each turn the stream of corrosive acid is maintained, the chakra cost is bumped up to Very High. Through the duration of this technique, the user’s speed becomes that of one rank lower than normal (i.e. Primary=Secondary, Secondary=Tertiary)
Description:[/u] By performing the needed handseals the user will channel chakra into and around the entirety of their mouth, skull, neck and spine. Upon doing so, the user will emit two small blobs of lava in the corners of the mouth which will then extend outward quickly to the maximum of five meters. The spawning point where the lava formed will remain rather thin while the rest will almost immediately expand and harden into two oversized fangs. This at first glance appears to be outrageous, making ti seem as if the user was wearing two giant toy fangs. These two fangs of hardened lava may be used to deal blunt or stabbing force depending on the user’s knowledge of Fushokuzai, but they have a second feature. Much like a snake, the user is able to spit a concentrated stream of Koumu from the tips of the fangs. By sending a Very High amount of chakra through the tips of the fangs (which appear as 10 milimeter black dots), the user can channel the abilities of Koumu, pushing the acid out in a powerful. Upon release the two fangs will touch each other, creating one constant, thin stream no larger than 20 milimeters capable of slicing and penetrating through defenses equal to or lower than the user’s highest knowledge of Fushokuzai. As a last resort, the user can fire the fangs by charging them with a Very High amount of chakra. Due to their weight, the fangs can travel a range equal to half of Fushokuzai known.
Domain:[/u] Youton. Fushokuzai (Corrosion disolvance factor) A. Koumu (Skilled mist). Youton Shuriken (Corrosive shuriken).

Zentai (Entire force of soldiers)[/u]
Rank:[/u] A [150]
Type:[/u] Offensive / Youton Kekkai Touta
Range:[/u] 0 – 50 meters
Chakra:[/u] Very High
Special:[/u] Clone move at speeds equivalent to that of the user. User may create one clone when first learned. Each time this technique is retrained the user can create one more clone, for a maximum of 10 total. Unlike normal clones, the clones created by this technique cannot extend further than 50 meters from the user, otherwise they would fall apart. The range and acidity depend on the user’s highest rank of Fushokuzai known.
Description:[/u] With this technique, the user is able to call upon aid from a perfect copy of them self. Unlike the Lava Clones who are birthed from molten lava, the clones created from this technique are essentially solidified Koumu. Similar to other Clone types, these clones will appear only as copies of the user. These clones retain the same movement speed and share a mental connection. The most deadly ability of the Zentai is directly related to their composition. Being comprised of compressed acidic mist, most weapons and assualts will go straight through the clones; however techniques with enough force (A rank or higher Taijutsu, Suiton or Futon) are capable of destroying the clones. Upon detonation, the clone will mimic the effects of Koumu, having a range of five meters. The corrosive damage dealt will be equal to the user’s highest rank of Koumu known.
Domain:[/u] Youton Mastery (2000exp or more). Fushokuzai (Corrosion disolvance factor) A. Youton Bunshin (Corrosive clone). Koumu (Skilled mist) A.

Mukashino Hanashiwo (Talk of the old days)[/u]
Rank:[/u] A [150]
Type:[/u] Offensive / Defensive / Youton Kekkai Touta
Range:[/u] Self (See special!)
Chakra:[/u] Very High (per turn)
Special:[/u] Corrosive damage depends on highest rank of Fushokuzai known. Area stabbed is unusable for one post, plus an additional post each time retrained (this technique may be retrained a maximum of 10 times, allowing an affected area to become unusable for 10 IC posts). If a target is stabbed in the chest, Taijutsu techniques increases in difficulty (some possible effects, i.e. harder to maintain, slower, weaker, etc) by one rank, due to the harmful decaying Seiton chakra existing temporarily around the area of the heart. If a target is stabbed in the head, Ninjutsu or Genjutsu (depending on the Primary, or if a Taijutsu user, the Secondary) techniques increases in difficulty. Ninjutsu and Genjutsu techniques used by the affected target will have the maximum capable range shortened by 10%, while Taijutsu techniques will have the maximum capable duration shortened by 10%. All jutsu will temporarily be reduced in natural strength by one rank due to the harmful decaying chakra existing temporarily around the area of the brain or heart. Due to this nature of this technique, the user only needs to stab an intended target once, however only one of the important areas (brain or heart) can be affected at one time. After the allotted time (depending on how deeply the user has trained the duration of this technique), the Youton chakra will fade away, due to it lacking a constant source, thereby returning any said areas to normal usage. This may only be used twice per thread.
Description:[/u] The user first begins by concentrating a very high amount of chakra into their hands upon performing the necessary handseals. Upon releasing the chakra, two 1-meter-long spikes of dense, corrosive Youton chakra will emerge from the user's palms (this will not cause the user pain; the spikes are simply being formed onto of the user's palms). The user has the capability of extending this two spikes up to 5 meters in length. Using the unique properties of Youton the user will attempt to stab an intended target, and if successful, will render the affected area useless for a certain amount of time.
Domain:[/u] Youton. Fushokuzai (Corrosion disolvance factor) A. Koumu (Skilled mist) A. Youton Kasui (Corrosive spike). Shinrinsenkoutyou (Psychological warfare enhancement).

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Rank:[/u] A [150]
Type:[/u] Offensive / Defensive / Youton Kekkai Touta
Range:[/u] Hand's reach
Chakra:[/u] High (initial), Very High (per turn)
Special:[/u] Corrosive damage depends on highest rank of Fushokuzai known. The duration of this technique when first trained is two turns. After the initial training, this technique can be retrained to last another turn, for a maximum of 20 turns total. The user must wait an equal amount of posts before recasting the jutsu, due to the nature of covering one's hand in corrosive gel.

• Anything the user touches (only once they have chosen to) corrodes away at 2 inches per IC post.
• If the user attacks using hand-based Taijutsu, the corrosion will only occur at half the normal rate, only effecting 1 inch per post due to the lack of constant contact.
• The user is able to effect buildings in the same way, which corrode at double the initial speed at 4 inches per post due to the vast amount of decomposable material

This technique is more effective when a target is restrained; while the user is capable of moving as normal while this technique is active, only Taijutsu may be used through the duration. This may only be used twice per thread.
Description:[/u] By using knowledge granted from the vast training within Youton, the user learns how to apply it to various situations. This is a prime example of this Kekkai Touta's adaptability, in which the user coat's their dominant hand in a aerogel-like substance comprised of Koumu, much like that which one uses to maintain hair. Anything the user touches, upon choosing to activate the gel's destructive nature, will begin to slowly corrode away, dealng severe second-degree burns, and with enough time cause organic material to decay and fall apart.
Domain:[/u] Youton. Mukashino Hanashiwo (Talk of the old days).[/ul]Soppohinin (To look the otherway when passing a pariah)[/u]
Rank:[/u] A [150]
Type:[/u] Offensive / Defensive / Youton Kekkai Touta
Range:[/u] See special!
Chakra:[/u] Very High (See special!)
Special:[/u]
Description:[/u]
Domain:[/u] Youton. Fushokuzai (Corrosion disolvance factor) A. Koumu (Skilled mist) A.

[/url] (Carrying you)[/b][/u]
Rank:[/u] S [300]
Type:[/u] Offensive / Youton Kekkai Touta
Range:[/u] See special!
Chakra:[/u] 2x Massive
Special:[/u] Corrosive damage depends on highest rank of Fushokuzai known, while Koumu decides how . The turn this technique is initiated, the bomb has a range of 5 meters and a dimension of 5 meters. For each passing turn after the intial, the bomb increases its size by 1 meters and its maximum traveling distance by 5 meters. Therefore, the bomb can have a maximum size of 15 meters (in all dimensions), while having a possible range of up to 50 meters. This technique may only be used once per thread.
Description:[/u] This technique is said to be one of the most dangerous offensive techniques within Youton. The user first begins by performing a long string of 29 handseals, before discharging their chakra into a paw-print-shaped spherical bomb, roughly 5 meters in all dimensions. The user will then throw the bomb up into the air a maximum height of 25 meters, where it will remain stationary. After 10 posts (roughly 50 seconds IC) have passed, due to the bomb essentially decaying everything in the air until no more resources are available, the bomb will detonate (the user is capable of initiating the detonation earlier if they wish, however it will not travel as far. As well, a force equivalent to two S-ranks can cause the bomb to prematurely detonate as well). Upon detonation the bomb will explode outward to a maximum of 50 meters (the user being the point of origin, the center). Anyone caught within the point of detonation to 9 meters will suffer the effects of Koumu 3x the natural strength of Fushokuzai, as well as bumping the difficulty of forming handseals for Ninjutsu or Genjutsu by 2 ranks. Anyone caught within 10 to 24m will suffer the effects of Koumu 2x the natural strength of Fushokuzai, as well as bumping the difficulty of forming handseals for Ninjutsu or Genjutsu by 1 rank. Anyone caught within 25-40m will suffer the effects of Koumu the natural strength of Fushokuzai, while anyone passed 40m will merely feel an intense wave of dry-heated air.
Domain:[/u] Youton Mastery (3000exp or more). Fushokuzai (Corrosion disolvance factor) S. Soppohinin (To look the otherway when passing a pariah). Koumu (Skilled mist) S. Shinrinsenkoutyou (Psychological warfare enhancement).[/ul]Yubaba Nakiami (Bath crone stop your crying)
Rank:[/u] A [150]
Type:[/u] Offensive / Youton Kekkai Touta
Range:[/u] See special!
Chakra:[/u] Very High
Special:[/u] Level of acidity [corrosion] depends on highest rank of Fushokuzai known. Maximum height the technique can reach depends on the user's highest rank of Fushokuzai known (50 meter heighth max), while the diameter is half (25 meter diameter max.After two turns, clothes will begin to disintegrate. After three turns, armors begin to disintegrate. After four turns, skin will start to dissolve. After five turns of being under the acid rain, all within range of the technique will be in a dire situation, leaving any victims reaching this state in danger. If not treated by a Medic with knowledge of Healing Hands A rank or higher within 10 posts, any victims will have to be taken to the Hospital for at least one week IC. Due to the intense chakra drain limits this technique to one use per thread, plus one more each time retrained.
Description:[/u] Through intense training, the user will have mastered control over the corrosive nature of Youton. The user will make them self bleed by whatever means necessary, typically by biting one’s thumbs, proceeding to place the blood on their tongue. This is due to the high concentration of chakra within one’s blood. After doing so, the user will begin to expel corrosive mist from the mouth. As the mist mixes with the blood on the tongue, it will congeal into a small, yet compact ball of chakra-imbued acid. Many users of Youton consider this execution to be a beautiful way to die, which involves the user spitting the ball of chakra-compressed acid into the air. Upon reaching the maximum height the user’s highest Fushokuzai rank allows, the ball will explode. The explosion itself creates no harm, albeit anyone within range will feel a slight breeze, enough to catch someone standing slack off guard. After the explosion, the ball of acid will essentially release all of its contents, raining down burning globs of acidic lava upon anyone within a diameter equivalent to the user’s highest Fushokuzai rank.. Due to the sheer amount of acidic lava raining down, anyone caught within the technique after it’s initiation is truly put in a dire situation. After five turns, the technique will disperse. Unlike Koumu the user is unable to change the acidity of this technique once it has begin, thereby any allies or enemies are equally in danger. Much like Koumu the user is immune to the corrosive nature, however this is due to the blood imbued at the technique’s creation.
Domain:[/u] Youton Mastery (2000exp or more). Fushokuzai (Corrosion disolvance factor) A. Koumu (Skilled mist) A. Bokunenjin (Quiet unsociable person).

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Rank:[/u] S [300]
Type:[/u] Offensive / Youton Kekkai Touta
Range:[/u] 0 - 50 meters
Chakra:[/u] 2x Massive
Special:[/u] Level of acidity [corrosion] and range depends on highest rank of Fushokuzai known. This technique has a maximum range of 50 meters, with a height and diameter of 50 meters evenly in a semi circle dome-shape. For every turn after the intial victims are within the technique’s diameter, one rank worth equivalent to the user’s Fushokuzai is dealt. After two turns, clothes will begin to disintegrate. After three turns, armors begin to disintegrate. After four turns, skin will start to dissolve. After five turns of being under the acid rain, all within range of the technique will be in a dire situation, leaving any victims reaching this state in danger. If not treated by a Medic with knowledge of Healing Hand S rank within 10 posts, any victims will have to be taken to the Hospital for at least one week IC. Due to the intense chakra drain limits this technique to one use per thread.
Description:[/u] Unlike its partner, this execution is much more violent in terms of the result. After having formed the chakra-compressed ball of acid, the user will quickly expel it violently, launching it towards the opponent at twice the speed of a kunai. Upon exiting the mouth, the user will perform the Dragon handseal to enlarge the ball up to five meters in diameter. As the ball of acid travels, acidic mist will trail behind it, burning anything it touches with two ranks lower of Fushokuzai known. Upon reaching its maximum distance, the ball of acid will explode much more violently than its parent, expanding into a semi sphere dome of jet-black and swirling purple corrosive acid within half a post. Upon initiation, everything within the techniques diameter will be dealt with S rank corrosion and burns. After five turns, the technique will disperse. Unlike Koumu the user is unable to change the acidity of this technique once it has begin, thereby any allies or enemies are equally in danger. The user is not immune to the corrosive nature of this technique, putting them in danger as well.
Domain:[/u] Youton Mastery (3000exp or more). Fushokuzai (Corrosion disolvance factor) S. Koumu (Skilled mist) S. Yubaba Nakiami (Bath crone stop your crying).[/ul]Gureru (To stray from the right path)[/u]
Rank:[/u] S [300]
Type:[/u] Offensive / Youton Kekkai Touta
Range:[/u] See special!
Chakra:[/u] Massive (initial), Very High (per turn)
Special:[/u] Volcano's height is half of the user's highest Fushokuzai rank (25 meters tall max), while the width is determined by a fifth (10 meters wide max). Lava spewed can cover any area within the user's Fushokuzai dominion. Lasts for 1 turn, plus 1 more turn each time relearned.
Description:[/u] Said to be one of the most destructive techniques within Youton, the user will first perform a long string of handseals before channeling their chakra into the very ground beneath their feet. Upon doing so, the user will summon forth a mighty volcano, albeit small compared to the natural couterpart. Upon holding the final seal, the user will command the volcano to spew forth large amount of lava capable of covering any surface within the volcano's raduis.
Domain:[/u] Youton. Fushokuzai (Corrosion disolvance factor) S.

Shinrinsenkoutyou (Psychological warfare enhancement)[/u]
Rank:[/u] S [300]
Type:[/u] Offensive / Youton Kekkai Touta
Range:[/u] See special!
Chakra:[/u] Very High
Special:[/u] The range of this technique depends on the highest rank of Fushokuzai known. The first time this technique is learned, the user is able to infect one person, with the effects of being infected lasting for one turn to start. The number of people the user can infect or duration of this jutsu increases by one each time this technique is retrained. Through the duration of this technique, all Taijutsu used by the infected targets have one A rank worth of damage added to the base of the original attack, though damage will not stack. Due to the temporary state of rage the target is put in, only Taijutsu may be used for the duration of the technique.
Description:[/u] Believed to be one of the cruelest techniques within Youton; this technique was developed to create havoc on the battlefield in times of being outnumbered. First the user will focus on the Water aspect while forming handseals to mold the special chakra necessary. The user will then expel a great shroud of mist from their mouth, covering a distance equal to that of their highest knowledge of Fushokuzai. Unlike the Koumu technique, which concentrates the acidic properties to burn the targets, this technique uses the acid for a much different purpose. The corrosive acid which comprises this technique is much more potent, to the point where it instead attacks the inside of the target’s body. The acid created in this technique is much thinner than most within Youton, allowing it to get to areas normal acid could not. Instead of burning skin and bones, this acid works much deeper by getting absorbed through the numerous pours scattered on the body. Upon arrival within the body, the acid begins to attack the pain receptors with the body. During the time in which the acid is in the body the targets, referred to as the infected, will feel pain equivalent to an A rank Taijutsu. This immense pain will cause the pain receptors to temporarily short-circuit, so to speak, sending the infected into a rage. During this time, all Taijutsu used while in this angered state are given a temporary boost. After the effects wear off, the target(s) as well as the user will be unable to perform any techniques requiring more than Medium Stamina or Chakra due to the heavy internal damage dealt to the body. While not life threatening, a medic with knowledge of Healing Hands A rank or higher is capable of removing the negative effects as well as healing any infected targets. Unlike the Koumu technique, the user can be affected as well as any allies or enemies within range.
Domain:[/u] Youton Mastery (3000exp or more). Fushokuzai (Corrosion disolvance factor) S. Koumu (Skilled mist) S.

Mononoke-onna (Monster woman)[/u]
Rank:[/u] S [300]
Type:[/u] Supplementary / Youton Kekkai Touta
Range:[/u] See special!
Chakra:[/u] High (per turn to maintain slug-like form), Very High (upon reformation)
Special:[/u] Defense while in this state depends on highest rank of Fushokuzai known. This technique may be learned a total of 10 times, each training increasing the time in this form by one turn. This allows the user to sustain this technique for a total of 10 turns (about 50 seconds IC). Note that the user is not changing into another creature, but simply covering their body in a thick layer of magma-oozing rock similar to that of a slug made of magma. While in this form, the user is unable to use any techniques requiring handseals.
Description:[/u] Believed to have been stolen from members of the Hozuki, wielders of Youton learned how to channel their chakra around their entire body. First the user will perform a string of handseals, then proceed to coat their body in a thick film of protective Water chakra. After doing so, the Earth and Fire aspects will be channeled from the mouth. Much like Youkai the user will expel a viscous stream of lave from their mouth, however its purpose is not for trapping. Upon spewing, the lava will instead slide the user’s body, sticking to the film of chakra. After one post, the user will be completely covered in a coat of magma. While underneath the layer of magma, the user is severely reduced in terms of speed, equivalent to a TaiJutsu Tertiary. However, while in this form the user may travel over substances, with the exception of water, which will cause the constant fresh supply of magma to harden. This also includes but is not limited to scaling walls that would normally be unclimbable by normal standards. In this form the user is unable to see, however they are able to hear anything within half the range of Fushokuzai by creating four funnel-like stalks (appearing as the eyes) which work roughly like ears. Some might describe the user in this state as a slug-like creature made of magma, partially due to its appearance and the way the user travels. Unlike the Hozuki who can turn completely into water, this technique simply allows the user to take the shape of a molten slug-like form. The user is also able to control the corrosiveness of the magma spewing from their rock-like body by coating themselves in a thin layer of Water chakra. By doing so, they could be ridden by others of an equivalent size. The user is not physically changing their structure (chemical, molecular, whatever) to that of lava! They are simply coating their body in a blob of lava which takes on the shape and movement of a slug. If the user happens to take a physical hit equal to one rank lower than the highest Fushokuzai rank known, the blob will essentially splatter in a five meter radius. During this time the user may be in a situation where they are in danger; to limit this problem to a degree, the user may reform the glob of lava back around their body by coating it in chakra. However, due to the amount of chakra being consumed to reform the glob, the reformation process takes away a charge from the technique's total duration. The reformation process may only be utilized when this technique has been trained at least three times. This technique may be used once per thread due to the intense chakra required; any more than the suggested would leave the user exhausted and endangered.
Domain:[/u] Youton Mastery (2000exp or more). Fushokuzai (Corrosion disolvance factor) S. Youkai (Melting spectre).

Sougan'omonzukyo (Empyrean vangaurd's idling curiosity of the Gods' sepulcher)[/u][/url]
Rank:[/u] S [300]
Type:[/u] Defensve / Youton Kekkai Touta
Range:[/u] Self (See special!)
Chakra:[/u] Massive (per turn)
Special:[/u] Initial defensive capabilities are dependent on the user's highest rank of Fushokuzai known. When first learned, this technique can defend against one blow equivalent to the user's highest rank of Fushokuzai known. Each time retrained the dome can withstand one more additional blow. This techique's duration cannot extend more than five turns (roughly 25 seconds IC), after which the dome will automatically dispell itself. Dome measures 10 meters in diameter all around. Upon the sheild's defensive ability being overwhelmed, the user can super charge the mist dome, causing an explosion that can severely corrode anything within a 20 meter radius. Does not require handseals, however time is equivalent to casting an S rank jutsu. No other jutsu may be used while this technique is in effect.
Description:[/u] Said to have been created by a Kirigakure kunoichi in an attempt to imitate a super-soldier's unpassale sand shield. This technique is ineed a display of a user's ability in Youton. Rare to this branch of specialized Ninjutsu, the user does not perform any handseals. Instead a Massive amount of chaka is sent into any available condensation in a 25 meter diameter (this is not just limited to the mist created by Koumu, also including rain, fog, normal mist, etc). This Massive burst of chakra is essentally what allows the technique to occur, overflowing any available condensation with Youton chakra, changing its phyical properties to the corrosive nature of Koumu. Initially apearing as a floating curtain or a singular section of a wall, the large quantity of corrosive condensation will quickly form into a large semi-circle, appearings to be a very clear blue similar to that of water reflecting sunlight, around the user composed of hundreds of little hexagon-shaped structures. It is not the numerous amout of hexagons which make the dome such a powerful defense; between each hexagon is a chianmail-like sheet comprised of Youton chakra. By channeling the naturally adhesive nature of lava the chailmail-like chakra is able to hold the dome togethr. This chakra, besides being sticky, acts as a buffer of sorts. The hexagons are all seperated by a mere five centimeters of unprotected space, which is occupied with the adhesive chakra that holds the dome together. While the space is incredibly small, a skilled enough shinobi could fit a kunai or other such tool in the crack, assuming the sticky chakra does not stop the weapon first. Coming in contact with the chakra creates no ill effects to anone touching the chakra. The user is able to counter assaults on the small ares of space by smashing an area of hexagons togetehr to form a less vulnerable defense, however the user must first be able to see the attack the are countering. The most unique featrue of the dome is what many have coined the "Eye of Hell," which allows the user to open the dome by folding sections of the hexagons over each other. This allows any allys or clones present the chance to attack, however the opening of the dome may only be done once every other turn (a total of two chances), due to the great disruption to the dome's stability.
Domain:[/u] Youton Mastery (3000exp or more). Fushokuai (Corrosion disolvance factor) S. Koumu (Skilled mist). Sukuu (Help out). Chubishounenjunshi (Young handsome man dying a martyr).

Muusui (Invisibled acid)[/u][/url]
Rank:[/u] S [300]
Type:[/u] Offensive / Defensive / Youton Kekkai Touta
Range:[/u] See special!
Chakra:[/u] Massive
Special:[/u] Level of acidity [corrosion] and range depends on highest rank of Fushokuzai known. Can dissolve up to one attack per use. This technique requires no hand seals. This technique is capable of dissolving S rank and below NinJutsu equivalent to the user’s knowledge of Fushokuzai. However, due to their physical nature, or lack there of, Fuuton, Raiton & Katon are immune to corrosion. Due to the sheer force TaiJutsu Primaries exert with their bodies, this technique is only capable of blocking up to A rank and lower TaiJutsu. GenJutsu are unaffected. Each use of this technique uses up one charge of Shojoukazan. Due to the incredible chakra and control required, this technique must always be performed by forming handseals with both hands regardless of any masteries the user may posses. For each use of this technique, the user must wait one turn (not using any other Youton techniques) before this technique can be used again.
Description:[/u] Despite its name, this technique does not use acid in what many would perceive as a liquid or mist. Instead, the acid is actually referring to the corrosive nature of the lava a user of Youton can spawn from their mouth. After having gained the knowledge of expelling corrosive lava, the user will learn how to channel the deadliness of Youton even further. The user will first perform the needed handseals before channeling a large amount of chakra around their mouth, leaving a thick coating of what appears to be fogged-up glass. By then channeling the Fire and Earth aspects, the user fill fire a concentrated glob of lava, much like they would when utilizing Shojoukazan. As soon as the lava make contact with the film of chakra coating the mouth, its form changes slightly to what one might call semi-solid vomit. Cooled from the affects of the chakra film, the lava becomes a pale egg-yellow, slimy pus-like paste. Once the substance is created, the user can choose to expel the paste in a jet or net-like fashion, both able to travel twice the speed of a kunai. The jet stream will be able to travel the full distance of one’s Fushokuzai while having a width 1/10th (50 meters max for jet stream, 5 meters max for width of jet stream), while the net-like fashion may only travel half (25 metes max for net, 50 meters max for width), but will be able to cover a width equivalent to the highest rank of ‘Fushokuzai’. Upon reaching a target (if within range), the paste will cling to whatever substance it is trying to dissolve. After the initial contact the corrosive nature of the paste will eat away at the attack, rendering it useless (assuming the user has the rank of Fushokuzai to stop it). If trying to stop a TaiJutsu attack, the paste does not simply dissolve the assailant. Instead, it essentially absorbs the physical force and spreads it throughout the substance, acting much like a shock system.
Domain:[/u] Youton Mastery (2000exp or more). Fushokuzai (Corrosion disolvance factor) S. Bokunenjin (Quiet unsociable person).[/font][/quote]

[Gally G6]

I realize that some of these techniques may be similar to others. I kinda ask that ONLY Staff members[/u] post any comments within this thread please. I apologize if I sound rude, I simply want this to be as neat and clean as possible.

Dear Staff,
I realize that some of these techniques may be crazy and unorthodox, and I don't expect them to be accepted. I am experimenenting to see what I can help with.

However, I would greatly[/u] appreciate it if you would not simply deny one of the techniques above simply because you do not like it or it is to similar to something else. I put a great deal of effort into these techniques and I would appreciate the same respect back.

If you find something wrong with these, and I'm sure you will find many things that can make these jutsu more sutible and les haxx if they appear so, I would kindly wish you give me suggestions on how to change the jutsu.

Again, please don't just 1/2 any techs above simply becaause it's too similar. I will make changes, and remove it that's what its truely requested if the jutsu can not be changed to please anyone. I will take in suggestions, and hope these can maybe used at some point.

Thank you for your time.

Sincerely,
Frispråkarn[/i]

[.DEVIOUS]

First and foremost: Yoton has been modified to remove the Water aspect of the technique; the technique list has yet to be updated to feature these changes but the techniques that involve the use of the Water Release aren't acceptable. D:

Gekiyaku (Strong Poison): I'm not sure how I feel about this. In order to be flying in the air, it would take a lot of pressure in order to keep you moving. There are numerous ways that you could use this offensively that would be difficult to dodge. I'm not exactly sure what could be done to this to appease me. =( Let me spend some time thinking on it.

Irinami (Incoming Wave): I know that first and foremost this ability will need to be modified. In the Restrictions area, Suiton is not required for the use of Yoton, and the Corrosive base technique has been modified. I'm okay with a wave of rolling lava. If you're going to be controlling the wave after creation, then I'll have to ask that the rank of the technique be increased and that you spend additional chakra controlling it.

Hanahada Shimeta o Aki: Shippo no Kirittoshita Ki (Very Fine in Autumn: Tail of a Pine Tree)
Rank: An interesting technique. I'm okay with you creating the whips from your arms, but you'll need to modify the amount of damage that they can do. Make it limited by the corrosive level of your acid.

Shinrinsenkōtyō (Psychological Warfare Enhancement): See the first note. D:

Zentai (Entire Force of Soldiers): See the first note. D:

Sukū (Help Out): Eh, okay.

Mūsui (Invisibled Acd): See the first note. D:

Yubaba: Nakiami (Bath Crone: Stop Your Crying): See the first note. D:

Mononoke-onna (Monster Woman): This is fine except for the ability to use jutsu while it's active. Please remove that portion of the technique and simply let yourself be a lava slug that can cover any dangerous terrain.

Bokunenjin (Quiet Unsociable Person): If you're actually splitting yourself into the slugs, I'm not sure how this is going to work. Considering the first technique you simply cover yourself in a blob of lava, how does this now let you split your body? If you want to split the lava slug into a bunch of tiny ones, I would say yes.

Kujo: Shikaku (Destruction: Dead Space): I suppose I'm alright with this.

Overall: I would save the techniques that are about the Water Release because there's likely to be some kind of Vapor Style, since it's Canon. When Fina first made this, he mixed Vapor and Lava together because they seemed similar inside of the manga - it wasn't until later that things became clear.

[Gally G6]

I have remoevd the vapor techniques and placed them in a file (hopefully to be submitted later)

Irinami (Incoming Wave):[/u] Bumped from B to A, removed water/vapor stuff

Due to the wave of corrosive lava being imbued with the user’s chakra the user may guide the technique with a simple handseal pointed in the direction the user wishes it to travel. However, each turn after the initial casting, this technique requires a 'B' rank worth of chakra each turn to continue controlling the wave's direction.

[/u][/quote] I hope that's better (:

Hanahada Shimeta o Aki: Shippo no Kirittoshita Ki (Very Fine in Autumn: Tail of a Pine Tree):[/u] ->

Level of corrosion and damage dealt by the whips depends on the user's highest rank of Fushokuzai known

Shinrinsenkōtyō (Psychological Warfare Enhancement):[/u] Stored for Later (Hopefully!)
Zentai (Entire Force of Soldiers):[/u] Stored for Later (Hopefully!)
Mūsui (Invisibled Acd):[/u] Stored for Later (Hopefully!)
Yubaba: Nakiami (Bath Crone: Stop Your Crying):[/u] Stored for Later (Hopefully!)
Yubaba: Bokujingi (Bath Crone: Dustproof Cloth in the Cleanroom):[/u] Stored for Later (Hopefully!)

Mononoke-onna (Monster Woman):[/u]

While in this form, the user may only use Yōton techniques, specifically only those which are expelled from the mouth.

[/u] Due to the fact that the user has no arms while in this form, handseals are replaced by bumping all jutsu (with the exception of this technique) up by one rank while in this form.[/quote] I'm assuming you're referring to the section quoted? Also, I just thought about this, due to being a "lava slug" temporarily, do you think it would be passable to allow the user to climb walls (albeit at the speed of a taijtusu tertiary, or slower if necessary) or other obstacles? Or do you think passing dangerous obstacles to be limited to...stuff physically flat on the ground? (apologies if this is mixed up. xD Some of my ideas made more sense in my head xD)

Bokunenjin (Quiet Unsociable Person):[/u] Not quite sure if I'm understanding you correctly, but here's my proposal. If this is not what you intended, please correct me (: When a controlled explosion is discharged from the user (I'm not sure how to explain without creating confusion, but im thinking more like...combustion? Or earth exploding upward due to force...something like that, as opposed to Gari/Deidara's Explosion release), the send the lava slugs seperating. Due to the massive amount of slugs being created, the technique will require a lot of chakra. Perhaps with retraining the user can allow the mini lava-slugs to last longer before having to come back to the user? Also, while not using techniques while in the Monster Woman form, could the slugs themselves (when split up) still use Youton techniques (limited to a certain rank and below) while in the seperated form?

On a side note, I want to say thank you for the way you looked at my submisisons. I'm sure that sounds a bit silly, but it's nice to now that the staff here are indeed friendly (and being afraid is not necessary xD).[/font]

[.DEVIOUS]

I think it's fair to say that the lava slug could climb over obstacles.

About the Woman jutsu: I don't like the idea of the technique actually transforming you into lava. When I first read it, I thought that you simply covered yourself in the lava, which I find acceptable. I don't find the ability to literally transform into the lava as something that should be incorporated into the style, perhaps with the exception of a kekkai genkai. Because I thought you were just covered in the lava, I was confused as to how you would 'split' your body into numerous smaller slugs with the other technique.

Also, no problem with grading. Sorry it's taken me so long to get back to you, I've been having a really hectic time lately (going out of town a lot with friends ;p) leaving my time on the forums to be highly limited.

[Gally G6]

Alright. Just wanted to clarify. - Slug

For Monster Woman: I had planned for it to just be the user coating themselves in lava. if it doesn't come across that way when read, do you think you might be able to help me reword it to do so?

I completley understand your position. I just graduated, so hopefully i'll be more free as well

[DAVID BOWE]

Strong Poison -- The B ranked Taijutsu part needs to be removed. It’d mean anyone who doesn’t have themselves as a Taijutsu Primary or Secondary can’t learn this technique. Lower the 3 turns when first learned to one, with an additional turn after each retraining. When you point out “To change direction, the user must briefly stop pumping chakra to their arms and rotate their body in the new direction they wish to travel.” That would mean if they’re in flight, they’d fall. In order to remain in flight by having lava seep from the area, chakra must be used. To stop said chakra would mean they’re stopping said lava, stop said lava means stopping said flight. Such a daunting task to change direction, so much so that the “30 meters per post” statement should be removed (it should also be removed because you state how fast they move in their flying state already. There isn’t any need for the “30 meters per post” part.) Last part, how far does the lava ‘burst’ when it does? Meaning if the user aims their arm towards the opponent how far would the lava ‘burst’ outward. Keep in mind also, that when you do something like that the momentum of aiming the arm towards the opponent would result in you, the user, losing control (for the obvious reason that this lava is enough to lift your entire body. Which means it’s enough to push your entire body backwards if you’re aiming the lava forwards.)

I'll add more later, gotta shower and shit.

[Gally G6]

I would say the lava couldn't extend more than 5 meters max. If it went farthur than that, the user would not really be able to control it, as you said. Therefore, the lava could not really be used to attack someone who is out of the limited short range. Not sure if this would work, but assuming the user has to expell a constant amount of chakra, the lava would constantly push against the air, propelling the user until chakra flow is stopped.

Also, I would think that despite the short range the lava would burst, the user would be flung back at the same rate as if flying, due to the sheer momentum of the lava being expelled.

Not sure if that helped (or made it worse X.x), but if necessary the rank could be bumped due to a intense level of chakra control.

[◤ velocissimo ⊿]

Strong Poison -- 5 Meters is exactly the distance I wanted you to say. The fact the user has to pause and reinstate the lava in order to turn makes the technique all that more acceptable. Put the burst of lava travels 5 meters (incase someone does attempt to use the technique offensively.) One last nitpick with the technique. This is a ninjutsu that performs the same for everyone, meaning the speed would be the same. So they’d all be traveling at a Taijutsu Primaries speed or Taijutsu Secondary. Change those two things and it’ll have my 1 . 2.

Incoming Wave -- Meh, I honestly don’t like the fact that you’re controlling the wave of lava into another direction. If you just made it a wave of lava with the dimensions you pointed out and the damage you pointed out it’d have my 1 . 2 accepted. But the changing the waves direction after it’s already started? Nah, don’t like it. I mean it’s a wave, for it to change direction it’d have to crash down onto the ground and rebuild itself towards the new direction. Might as well just use the technique over again. I mean… that’s how I see it as logically changing direction anyway.

Tail Pine Tree -- You can lower the whole “plus and extra B rank each turn this technique is held.” The fact that it takes a turn to prepare the technique makes up for the fact that it doesn’t need handseals. I’ll ask you point out the range of the explosion from the whip but other than that, looks good.

Help Out – Considering lava is pouring down the entire body of the user and they’re covered in rock as well, handseals couldn’t possibly be able to happen, could they?

Monster Woman – Just nitpicking but it’d be 50 seconds IC. Again, can’t perform handseals or any other jutsu for that matter. Honestly, I’m not that much of a fan for this technique but I’ll let others approve it if they consider it fine.

Quiet Unsociable Person – Yea, don’t like this one either. I’m gaining the same understanding as Lash. It sounds like you’re saying that the user can break down into several smaller slugs made of lava. Which isn’t possible and is easily considered deniable. Didn’t really understand what you were explaining in your previous post about the technique either. So I mean I don’t wanna outright deny it without you trying to explain yourself; but if you’re saying the user can break himself down into several small slugs of lava, that won’t fly.

Dead Space – Don’t know what happened to your ending there but all I see is “The user is capable of…”

[Gally G6]

Strong Poison[/u] - All the stuff mentioned had been edited

Incoming Wave[/u] - Removed ability to guide the wave

Tail of a Pine Tree[/u] - Edited

Help Out[/u] - Edited. Unable to use any techniques requiring handseals for the duration of the technique. (Basically DoJutsu are the only thing able to function, unless they require seals as well. In that case, no techniques can be used. Whichever fits your fansy)

Monster Woman[/u] - Edited. Had an idea to add to Monster Woman. To make it fair, if the user was covered in this blob of lava and took a hit from an S rank tai, they woulndt just leave unscathed. So, what if after the attack the lava glob is dipersed (basically it explodes outward much like when a paintball shatters), taking a turn. If the user wishes to bring the glob of lava back to their body, the must use an S rank charge to reform it (the one turn of the lava glob would take away from the initial total the user can hold Monster Woman for).[/u] Sorry if that doesn't make sense. I'll try to explain more in depth if I can. (:

Quiet Unsociable Person[/u] - (i apologize if any of this comes across as rude) First off, you need to understand the technique is comes from. Monster Woman does not change the user's physical/chemical/whatever structure like that of the Hozuki; INSTEAD[/u] it simply coats the user in a constant lava-like blob, which to others may appear as a slug-like creature composed of lava. IN NO WAY[/u] is the user turning into a slug, they are simply covering themselves in a blob that slightly resembles a slug.

Here's how I inteneded Quiet Unsociable Person to work: I'm sure at this point you understand the user is covered in the blob of lava. With QUP, upon receiving a powerful blow equal to the users Fushokuzai rank, the coating of lava itself (NOT THE USER)[/u] will separate into numerous tiny "slugs" made of lava. The coating of lava explodes into the little slugs much like a paintball shatters into the splatter shapes. The user has no control over the little slugs while they are in this tiny form, as well as becoming a possible target (they are unable to use the slugs while they are divided in any way). I think to make it fare, while the coating of lava is in the "little slug" form, it should take time away from the total duration of Monster Woman (i.e the user activated the technique for 2 turns, the user is attacked so the slugs divide for three turns. This means if the user has only learned the technique 5 times, then the user can't cover themself in another coat of lava without recasting the jutsu again). After reading Quiet Unsociable Person, I notice it is confusing. If this explanation suffices at all, then please tell me. If this again does not make any clarity, I want to try to make a way in which it does.[/u][/b]

If that doesn't work, then maybe the technique can simply allow the user to separate the coating of lava into a small army of slugs (again, the user will not physically split their body, just the coating of lava around them. Perhaps it can be retrained for more slugs to be spawned from the coating at one time. i.e. first training allows 20 slugs or somethings, plus 10 more each time retrained, or something like that. *shrug*)[/s]

EDIT: I had an idea for Quiet Unsociable Person that will be competely unrelated to Monster Woman. In essence, i'm changing what the tehcnique dods completely.[/u]

Dead Space[/u] - That little part edited. I think I had a thought that was never finished...[/font]

[◤ velocissimo ⊿]

Monster Woman -- State how much of this explosion covers and it should be fine.

Everything else but the unsocialable shit seems good. So either change it like you planned or whatever. Everything else (after the change with the one technique) seems good.

[Gally G6]

Monster Woman- edited in. should be good now.

Quiet Unsociable Person is now called "Ishindenshinfuon [Quiet Understanding of Disturbed Conditions]" (just for clarification). I changed this completley from befroe. If it doens't work, I can change it to something you think would work better (ill take any suggestions you have ). Otherwise I think everything else is ready.

[Kii!]

Can you add in chakra consumption rates on all of these, please? Sorry xD

[Gally G6]

Edited. Sorry about that. I was unsure on some of them, so if you think some need to have the chakra drain bumped lowered, please let me know.

[Kii!]

Gekiyaku (Strong Poison)

you'll need to change the part about b rank chakra per turn, and add in, under consumption, the amount drained per turn (since its not based on ranks anymore).

Hanahada Shimeta o Aki: Shippo no Kirittoshita Ki (Very Fine in Autumn: Tail of a Pine Tree):

Just a few little things. This contradicts itself twice: first, it says it has a turn limit, then it says it has no time limit. Secondly, it says it drains an A rank amount of chakra (again, outdated chakra system, but generally A ranks are "high" chakra) and it drains a mid amount, which is relatively low, from what I think you're trying to do with this.

Sukū (Help Out):

Same as before, this technique says it requires a 'C' rank amounto f chakra each turn. Please translate this to low/mid/high.

Ishindenshinfuon [Quiet Understanding of Disturbed Conditions]:

Could you give an idea of how fast these fly? The best way, due to being the most universal, is to compare their speed to a thrown kunai.

Mūsui (Invisibled Acd):

The description here cuts off, but otherwise it seems fine. Might wanna remove the bit about 'S' rank chakra, since you have the chakra consumption rates in already.

Mononoke-onna (Monster Woman):

Again, might want to take out the part about 'S' rank chakra in the description, and just write "Very High upon reformation" or something in consumption, alongside the normal value.