Hinshi Amaguma

[Aiko Yukina]

Hinshi Amaguma[/u]
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary / Clan Kekkei Touta / Hyouton Ninjutsu
Range: Range is increases depending on user's 'Yami no Kami'.
Special: Cloud exists for one turn, and more one turn with each retrain. Chakra cost increases with the size of the cloud.
Description: When the Yukina clan focuses enough energy into the frozen depths of their body several things become possible. After channeling Chakra into the lungs, a released breath will become steam and then condense, transforming slowly into a fair sized storm cloud. After one post of gathering condensation from the area and the Yukina's chakra, the cloud will release the stored moisture, allowing any Yukina to use the water source.
Domain: Yukina. Yuki no Kami 'D'.

[☆ F ☆]

Make the range directly dependent strictly on the user's 'Yuki no Kami', plus extra with retraining, and we're good.

[Aiko Yukina]

Fixed it.

[☆ F ☆]

Retraining should increase the range further past the normal Yuki no Kami, not the chakra cost...

Although I am shifting my judgement away from that and towards length of existence. Essentially, let's leave the range for the Yuki no Kami, and let's add that the storm cloud can exist for a single turn, plus one more each time retrained. Add that in the special to replace the bit about chakra cost, and we're good. In the end, the chakra cost will be determined by the rank of Yuki no Kami used, so that size and chakra cost remain relevant with each other and intertwined.

[Aiko Yukina]

Like that?

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[Aiko Yukina]

Like that?

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[Anmida]

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