Custom Cloud village Tech

[Kinz]

The Nimbus[/u]
Rank: C (multiple trainings available)
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: 0-10 meters
Special: Using handseals, the user will condense water into a low flying cloud. The cloud will be able to support the weight of the user and potentially one other person.
Description: The Nimbus is a water based technique developed in the cloud village. It was created as a mode of transportation for navigating the twisting peaks of the cloud country. It moves at similar speed as a taijutsu secondary running. Not the fastest method, but extremely accessible. When first learned one can stay airborn for two turns. For everytime learned the user is able to fly for one aditional round at a D rank cost of chakra without having to recast it for its full C rank amount.
Domain: Water Release, Cloud Exclusive.

[Kii!]

I think this just needs a little more detail as far as its speed goes. You say "not the fastest," but how fast is it? Mostly in case it's used in combat. After that, I think this looks good.

[Kinz]

Edited

[Axcel]

What's "two secondary running". . .?

[Kinz]

That was my phones auto correct being a troll. Fixed now.

[Kii!]

1.2

[chiatsuki]

I think the speed description is still off. Maybe make it taijutsu master speed for Nin Primaries but no other jutsu can be used while in this form and takes an extra C rank chakra every post. For Nin secondaries it'd travel as fast as a tai secondary, so on. After this, you have my approval.

[Kinz]

i kept the speed universal because i personally didnt anticipate it being used as a way for nin primaries to match tai primaries speed. plus i think augmenting speed based on your primary with this one technique makes it more complicated then it really needs to be. I did add additional trainings for amount of posts before recasting, as well as how much chakra it costs to maintain during those additional posts.

[DAVID BOWE]

Looks good to me, 1 . 2 accepted.

[Kii!]

Just one thing--how many turns does it last when you first train it, without retraining it at all?

Then you'll have my acceptancee

[Kinz]

edited

[Kii!]

1.2

[DAVID BOWE]

2 . 2