kyodai sensu techs.

[addy-hime ♥]

KYODAI SENSU

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Tobitatsu! (Take Flight!)

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Rank: C
Type: Supplementary / Fuuton Ninjutsu
Range: Self
Chakra: Mid
Special: Requires at least C-rank Amakaze. Originally, the user may only glide for a total of five posts per thread. Each time this technique is relearned, however, that number raises by one.
Description: A technique created by the Kazekage, Etsuko Youka. The user combines a refined knowledge of the Fuuton release with the benefits of the Kyodai Sensu: namely, the ability to manipulate wind without the use of seals The fan is spread out to its fullest extent and gripped at each side. Focusing, they imbibe the weapon with their chakra. The user is then able to leap into the air, controlling the wind currents as they see fit, effectively giving them the ability to fly around for a short while. Other ninjutsu techniques may be combined with Tobitatsu to create a formidable foe. Unfortunately, if the user has not trained sufficiently with this technique they will find it hard to maintain. Once their time limit in the sky has expired they will plummet to the ground, making it a good idea to plan ahead.
Domain: Sunagakure no Sato. Must be used with the Kyodai Sensu.

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Rank: C
Type: Offensive / Fuuton Ninjutsu
Range: See special!
Chakra: Mid
Special: Requires Kaze Bakudan and at least C-rank Amakaze. User must have Tobitatsu activated. The explosion can reach a maximum of 10 meters; it is more powerful closer to the detonation point and weaker the further out it goes.
Description: A technique created by the Kazekage, Etsuko Youka. The user simply focuses their chakra, envisioning it condensing until it forms a rocket- or bomb-like explosive. Like a plane dropping a missile, they would then release it upon their opponent. The explosive's path cannot be controlled. The bomb can fall 9.6 meters per second, and how long it takes to get to the ground depends on how high up the user is in the air. Upon contact with any solid surface it will detonate, releasing a torrent of wind with the same power as an exploding pouch.
Domain: Sunagakure no Sato. Must be used with Kyodai Sensu.

Geki Tori (Fierce Bird)[/u]
Rank: B
Type: Offensive / Fuuton Ninjutsu
Range: 30 meters
Chakra: High
Special: Requires at least B-rank Amakaze. User must have Tobitatsu activated.
Description: A technique created by the Kazekage, Etsuko Youka. While the user is in flight via their Kyodai Sensu, they lose the ability to use their hands, but a certain amount of creativity can be devastating. When a target is spotted, the user taps into their Fuuton-based chakra. It begins to form a noticeable green aura around both the user and the weapon, and quickly takes the shape of a bird. By charging at the opponent and releasing their chakra, the bird's shape will tear apart from the user, remaining the same size as the aura was. It rushes the opponent in a linear path, unable to change direction. Upon contact it will explode in a mass of condensed wind, causing great damage. Primarily used for air-borne or large targets.
Domain: Sunagakure no Satu. Must be used with the Kyodai Sensu.[/ul][/justify]
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[addy-hime ♥]

A'ight, that's all I've got for now. Let the grading begin.

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[Sayomi]

Kaze no Bakuhatsu (Wind Explosive)Rank: C
Type: Offensive / Fuuton Ninjutsu
Range: See special!
Special: Requires Kaze Bakudan and at least C-rank Amakaze. User must have Tobitatsu activated. The explosion can reach a maximum of 10 meters; it is more powerful closer to the detonation point and weaker the further out it goes.
Description: A technique created by the Kazekage, Etsuko Youka. The user simply focuses their chakra, envisioning it condensing until it forms a rocket- or bomb-like explosive. Like a plane dropping a missile, they would then release it upon their opponent. The explosive's path cannot be controlled. Upon contact with any solid surface it will detonate, releasing a torrent of wind with the same power as an exploding pouch.
Domain: Sunagakure no Sato. Must be used with Kyodai Sensu.

Just needs a speed equivalent.

Geki Tori (Fierce Bird)
Rank: B
Type: Offensive / Fuuton Ninjutsu
Range: 30 meters
Special: Requires at least B-rank Amakaze. User must have Tobitatsu activated.
Description: A technique created by the Kazekage, Etsuko Youka. While the user is in flight via their Kyodai Sensu, they lose the ability to use their hands, but a certain amount of creativity can be devastating. When a target is spotted, the user taps into their Fuuton-based chakra. It begins to form a noticeable green aura around both the user and the weapon, and quickly takes the shape of a large bird. By charging at the opponent and releasing their chakra, the bird's shape will tear apart from the user. It rushes the opponent in a linear path, unable to change direction. Upon contact it will explode in a mass of condensed wind, causing great damage. Primarily used for air-borne or large targets.
Domain: Sunagakure no Satu. Must be used with the Kyodai Sensu.

How large is this bird energy thingy when released? Speed equivalent as well.

Dai Yakushin (Great Leap)
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary / Fuuton Ninjutsu
Range: 10 meters
Special: Can only be used once per thread, but this number increases by one every time retrained.
Description: Fuuton has a variety of uses, primarily offensive in nature, but this technique is one of the exceptions. The user performs three handseals and focuses their chakra into their legs. When they jump, the wind itself will help them lengthen the height of their jump up to ten meters. By using more or less chakra they can adjust this number, but it does require a good judge of distance and fair chakra control to perform correctly.
Domain: Sunagakure no Sato. Fuuton.

Is the maximum height/distance for this 10 meters? Also the range cannot be increased? Excerpt-"By using more or less chakra they can adjust this number, but it does require a good judge of distance and fair chakra control to perform correctly. " If so that needs to be added to special as well as the distance being up'd as it is retrained.

Kakucho Sokudo (Speed Enhancement)
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary / Fuuton Ninjutsu
Range: Self
Special: At the basic level, this technique allows the user to increase their speed for one post. Every time retrained that limit goes up by one.
Description: Two handseals are performed by the shinobi, who concentrates their chakra and releases it into the air around them. This allows them to run swiftly by decreasing air resistance, and even sprint across or run up vertical surfaces by generating a wind current behind themselves to propel them forward. Kakucho Sokudo doubles the user's speed, making them hard to follow with an untrained eye. They are, however, slower than the average Shunshin. The advantage here is the ability to maneuver mid-run instead of having to continue in a linear path.
Domain: Sunagakure no Sato. Fuuton.

Doubling speed, this should be atleast C rank maybe B. Also. Excerpt-"They are, however, slower than the average Shunshin." Your maneuverability/ speed should be no where near a even below average shunshin.

Everything else is in order.

[addy-hime ♥]

Fixed everything that you notated, except for changing the rank of Kakucho. If you look, you'll see the basic Shunshin is D-rank. This is not much different, aside from the fact that they are much slower and able to change direction. If another mod thinks the rank should be raised to C or B I'm okay with that, but currently I think it evens out to have the same weight power-wise as Shunshin.

[Sayomi]

1.2

[Mamushi]

I'd rather the technique be "C" rank - Shunshin is "D" ranked because it is so limited - until you learn the subsequent "B" ranks, you can only move in one direction. This is comparable to the 1st gate, which also doubles the speed, and is C ranked.

[addy-hime ♥]

Changed to C rank.

[Mamushi]

2.2

[Comatose]

Most back to customs for re-acceptance.

[addy-hime ♥]

I added in the chakra consumption. Finished, and ready for re-approval.

[chiatsuki]

I dont understand why all of these are suna-exclusive though (excluding the top 3). They could be useful to universal fuuton users as well.

[addy-hime ♥]

Being that I'm putting these through customs, I do have the power to choose to make them either 'personal' or 'village exclusive' if I wanted. Anyway, at the time these were made there was a contest going on for village jutsu, and I prefer they remain that way.

[marvolous.]

1/2.

[chiatsuki]

2 / 2 - was just wondering, was all.