juha techniques.

[addy-hime ♥]

Juha: Shou (Beast Wave: Palm)

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Rank: B, A, S
Type: Offensive / Fuuton Ninjutsu
Range: 10 meters
Chakra: B: High, A-S: Very High
Special: At the most basic stage two waves can be shot out in a rapid-fire, successive motion. With each rank up, the user is capable of firing two more per round. Only a maximum of two waves' movements can be manipulated by chakra at one time, however--the rest cannot be controlled until the number drops back down again.
Description: The user activates their wind chakra, summoning it to the dominant hand. By swiping the hand, a wave of condensed, slicing wind will shoot out toward the opponent. Its movement can be manipulated by the user's thoughts, along with its speed (which is not to exceed 10 meters per second), although this requires a minute expenditure of chakra.
Domain: Sunagakure no Sato, Fuuton.

Juha: Reppushou (Beast Wave: Gale Wind Palm)[/u]
Rank: B, A, S
Type: Offensive / Defensive / Fuuton Ninjutsu
Range: See special!
Chakra: B: High, A-S: Very High
Special: With each rank comes more control over the claw.

[/b] The claw can deflect a single B-rank jutsu (two C-ranks, three D-ranks) up to 5 meters and will stay cohesive for three posts.
A-rank: The claw can deflect a single A-rank jutsu (two B-ranks, three C-ranks, four D-ranks) up to 10 meters and will stay cohesive for four posts.
S-rank: The claw can deflect a single S-rank jutsu (two A-ranks, three B-ranks, four C-ranks, five D-ranks) up to 15 meters and will stay cohesive for five posts.[/ul]Description: The user amasses their chakra, condensing the very wind itself into a massive, demonic claw that extends from the dominant hand. It is larger than the average human's body, making it a deadly combat weapon. The claw carries tremendous force, able to devastate anything in its path without harming the user while also serving as an effective shield. With a swat, it has the ability to deflect weapons and jutsu with full effect. However, should it lose cohesiveness, the wind chakra will explode in a concussive blast, potentially harming both user and opponent.
Domain: Sunagakure no Sato, Fuuton.[/blockquote]
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[addy-hime ♥]

note: The Juha techniques belong to Sora from the Naruto anime, but I took some creative liberty by giving them several ranks and limitations.

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[.DEVIOUS]

I don't like the idea of changing the directions of the wind burst technique in mid-shot, but I'd allow you the ability to time your shots so that if an opponent were dodging you could fire later. Example: Fire a shot, wait a second, fire another shot, etc.

Reppushou looks fine though.

[addy-hime ♥]

Well, see, the thing about that is.. I didn't change that part of the technique. That's how Sora uses it. For example:

" A powerful jutsu of wind nature chakra that can cut and slash through any material. Sora activates it by summoning chakra in his right hand, and then swipes a slicing chakra wave which appears to be controlled by Sora's will and thoughts. He is also able to use the technique in a rapid-fire, succesive motion. "

I simply gave it restrictions as opposed to making it as OP as that sounds.

[addy-hime ♥]

Done for now - bump. Feel free to look over & grade.

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[.DEVIOUS]

I guess given the rank of the Shou I'm alright with the changing of the wind direction, but do you think you could give some sort of speed basis for the attack? Right now it's entirely up to interpretation is a bad idea when you consider we've already had our first major combat dispute.

Once that's done these are acceptable.

[addy-hime ♥]

Fixed, I suppose. It's kind of hard to give a speed to a technique whose speed could be changed by the user. It's wind; it's not unlike some of the other Fuuton techniques, and it is entirely dodge-able.

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[.DEVIOUS]

Eh, whatever. 1.2

[addy-hime ♥]

Added a limit to how many of the waves in Juha: Shou can be controlled at one time.

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[King]

2.2

[Comatose]

Moved back for re-acceptance.

[addy-hime ♥]

Once again, simply added in the chakra consumption. Ready for re-acceptance.

[marvolous.]

1/2.

[chiatsuki]

2 / 2 - nigga i got it.