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Party in the Province [recreate] - NOT DONE! Jun 16, 2011 9:15:11 GMT -8

Post by Gally G6 on Jun 16, 2011 9:15:11 GMT -8

Kekkai Genkai - Kagehebi - 2175

Consumption - Chakra Reduction I, II, III, IV & V

Chakra mastery allows the user excellent control over the chakra they use, how it's molded, and ultimately, how much is used, so much so that they can lower the chakra consumption of all mastery jutsu. When first learned, the user can cast jutsu of the Mastery class for one chakra consumption tier less than normal. Each time re-acquired, cost continues to drop by one less tier each time.

Nan-Kaizou (Way of the Snake - Soften Modification) ^[325]
Rank: D, C, B, A[/u], S
Type: Supplementary / Special Bloodline Technique / Nintaijutsu
Range: Self
Chakra/Stamina: Low
Special: By default, this jutsu allows the user to move one appendages (legs or arms) to stretch. With each rank earned, one more appendage can be stretched at the same time, as well as for longer distances. The head and torso can only be stretched once the user learn the ‘S’ ranked version of this jutsu. Limbs move at the speed of one meter per second.

D: 1 limb @ 10 meters
C: 2 limbs @ 20 meters
B: 3 limbs @ 30 meters
A: 4 limbs @ 40 meters
S: 4 limbs + Neck/Head @ 50 meters

Description: Nan Kaizou is one the most essential Kagehebi Nintaijutsu technique, as it allows a ninja to make their body extremely malleable, much like a snake. It was originally developed for spying activities, but perfected in the hands of the Kagehebi and their natural snake-infused blood. When used the clan member can stretch and twist their body at any angle, allowing them to surprise their opponents, spy on situations normally out of reach, and react much like a snake would. The only drawback is that while malleable, their bodies are highly susceptible to damage in this form as their bone structure is no longer ‘normal’.
Domain: Kagehebi

Jatai no Daija (Body of the Snake - Limb Speed) ^[325]
Rank: D, C, B, A[/u], S
Type: Passive / Special Bloodline Technique / Nintaijutsu
Range: Self
Chakra/Stamina: --
Special: Determines the speed at which the clan member's limbs move, whether through regular stretching or through technique. Limb speed plus maximum stretching distance determines effectiveness of all clan techniques.

D: 2 meters per second
C: 4 meters per second
B: 6 meters per second
A: 8 meters per second
S: 10 meters per second

Description: Although the shooting speed of a clan member is somewhat set and basic at the start, as they begin to develop their powers and strength as Kagehebi, they are able to make their limb snapping speed quicker and stronger, until their snake-like essence makes them a blur, no longer recognizable by human eye.
Drawback: Kagehebi

Jatai no Sasori (Body of the Snake - Venom Fangs) ^[325]
Rank: D, C, B, A[/u], S
Type: Supplementary / Special Bloodline Technique / Nintaijutsu
Range: Self
Chakra/Stamina: High
Special: Adds a unique poison to all Kage Hebi related techniques and strikes. Highest rank known determines amount of time needed for bite to sustain before poisoning is successful. Poison comes from a unique snake venom, leaving struck victims to suffer a variety of effects based on its strength (highest rank known.) The only known antidote for this poison is literally the blood of a Kage Hebi being commingled with one's own - the blood of the one that inflicted the victim with the poison has a 90% chance of negating the effects of the poison; the blood of an immediate relative has a 50% chance; the blood of any Kage-Hebi has a 10% chance.

D: Dizziness; lack of focus [1 turn]
C: Nausea & diarrhea; uncontrollable twitching [3/4th's of turn]
B: Poor balance; minor hallucinations [Half of turn]
A: Intense vomiting; mini-seizures [1/4th of turn]
S: No balance; unresponsive limbs [Near-Instant]

Description: Snakes are one of the most venomous creatures of the animal kingdom, an important attribute for survival and dominance. In the case of the Kagehebi, this trait has not been overlooked. With intense training, the clan member can learn to produce a uniquely strong poison which can be added to their clan jutsu in order to leave their victims helpless.
Drawback: Kagehebi

Constriction (Shuushuku) ^[325]
Rank: D, C, B, A[/u], S
Type: Special Bloodline Supplementary Nintaijutsu
Range: Self
Chakra/Stamina: Low - Massive
Special: Strength of constriction/grip is equivalent to skill rank.
Description: Snakes like the anaconda and python do not rely on poison to take down their prey like many snakes. Instead, they rely on their large size, strong jaws, and superior constitution to constrict their preys to death. In a similar style, the Kage-Hebi user supplies an amount of Chakra to their hand or extended limb to increase its physical abilities; granting them a strong grip similar to an anacondas bite or giving their extended limb the ability to squeeze their opponent with enough force to make their head pop.
Domain: Kage-Hebi

Yuri Kabinshou (Hypersensitivity to Vibrations) ^[175]
Rank: D, C, B, A, S
Type: Special Bloodline Suppmentary Nintaijutsu
Range: 0 - 50 Meters
Chakra/Stamina: High
Special: Allows the user to feel the vibrations in the air and ground to detect any movement in their vicinity. Technique requires a cooldown period equal to amount of turns skill was active.
Description: Snakes, using their scales, are able to pick up the vibrations in the air and ground to allow them to detect creatures in the area. Using a special and complex system of inner resonances, they are able to differentiate between vibrations in the air and ground to allow them to anticipate the movement of prey or predator. The Kage-Hebi with their snake-like constitution are able to replicate this skill to eliminate the chance of being caught off-guard. It also effectively grants them a pseudo-360 degree view of what is going on around them.
Domain: Kage-Hebi

Shitasaki (Tip of Tongue) ^[175]
Rank: D, C, B, A, S
Type: Special Bloodline Passive
Range: 0 - 50 Meters
Chakra/Stamina: ---
Special: Allows the user to detect the presence of prey or predator within the immediate vicinity. Range is determined by users skill in this jutsu. Starting at 10 meters and increasing by 10 meters every rank.
Description: Snakes are able to user their elongated forked tongue to both taste and smell. By using this tongue, they are able to sample particles in the air, water, or ground to determine the presence of prey or predator within the area. This allows them to react to danger or seek out their prey with greater efficiency. The Kage-hebi duplicate this skill using their own elongated tongues to detect any creatures in the vicinity; whether through their smell or taste.
Domain: Kage-Hebi

Senei Jashu (Hidden Shadow Snake Hands) ^[25]
Rank: Dx1
Type: Offensive / Special Bloodline Technique / Nintaijutsu
Range: See special!
Chakra/Stamina: Low
Special: Distance and strength of extending snakes depends on the user's understanding of the 'Way of the Snake'. Speed of snakes depends on the user's highest known rank of 'Jatai no Daija'. Initially 1 snake comes forth, with 1 more added for a maximum of 10 each time retrained.
Description: Senei Jashu is a signature Kagehebi Nintaijutsu technique which allows the clan member to manifest a bundle of quick-striking snakes that extend from the user’s sleeves. The Kagehebi extends his palm and shoots out snakes to attack a target, having them move at impressive speeds and strike with their fangs. Though basic, this variation has been known to subdue even the strongest of foes with a single snake bite.
Domain: Kagehebi. Nan-Kaizou 'D

Senei Ta-Jashu (Multiple Hidden Shadow Snake Hands) ^[50]
Rank: Cx1
Type: Offensive / Special Bloodline Technique / Nintaijutsu
Range: 0 - 50 meters
Chakra/Stamina: Mid
Special: Distance and strength of extending snakes depends on the user's understanding of the 'Way of the Snake'. Speed of snakes depends on the user's highest known rank of 'Jatai no Daija'. Initially 5 snakes come forth, with 1 more added for a maximum of 20 each time retrained.
Description: An advaced version of Senei Jashu, the Kagehebi now controls a massive amount of snakes at once in order to subdue their opponent. As before, once the user's hand is extended in the direction of their target, a torrent of snakes erupt from the sleeve and manifest onto the chosen target. Once extended the snakes can wrap around and bite into the target to hold and bind them.
Domain: Kagehebi. Nan-Kaizou 'C'. Must know Senei Jashu

Gen'ei-Hebi (Snake Vision) ^[50]
Rank: C
Type: Special Bloodline Supplementary Jutsu
Range: Self
Chakra/Stamina: Low
Special: Allows the user to see and track heat signatures. Is able to see through walls but heat signatures are blurry when hidden by non-transparent objects.
Description: Pit vipers, pythons, and some species of boa possess the ability to "see" the radiated heat from warm-blooded animals through special sensors located between the nostril and eyes. Like many Kage-Hebi techniques, this ability is based off these snakes abilities to see heat and allowing the user to see in infrared. This helps in tracking targets in the dark or when they are hidden by non-transparent objects.
Domain: Kage-Hebi

Kokoro-Hebi (Snake's Mind) ^[50]
Rank: C
Type: Special Bloodline Supplementary Jutsu
Range: Self
Chakra/Stamina: Mid
Special: Only applies to the five basic senses; touch, sight, taste, smell, and hearing.
Description: This technique was created to allow Kage-Hebi's to receive the information their snakes acquire. As the Snakes summoned from the Kage-Hebi's body are an extension of themselves, this technique allows the Kage-Hebi to know what each snake it seeing, tasting, smelling, touching, and hearing without the negative side-effects like wounds.
Domain: Kage-Hebi

Jagei Jubaku (Snake Authority Spell) ^[100]
Rank: Bx1
Type: Offensive / Special Bloodline Technique / Nintaijutsu
Range: 0 - 50 meters
Chakra/Stamina: High
Special: Distance and strength of extending snakes depends on the user's understanding of the 'Way of the Snake'. Speed of snakes depends on the user's highest known rank of 'Jatai no Daija'. Initially 10 snakes come forth, with 1 more added for a maximum of 30 each time retrained.
Description: The final evolution within the Senei Jisha tree. Using their snake charming abilities, the Kagehebi can extend large snakes from their sleeves by way of the Senei Jashu, enveloping the target in a flurry of snakes which will coil around the them and bind of impact instantly. The further addition of the user's murderous intent can weaken their target's resolve, and only a giant burst of chakra such as the Gates may break free of the snake's hold, which constricts onto the victim's skin as if the reptiles were comprised of pure iron; digging into the skin and biting, a most horrendous way to expire...
Domain: Kagehebi. Nan-Kaizou 'B'. Must know Senei Ta-Jashu

Slithering Snake Mode ^[100]
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: None
Special: Hand-seal free. Stemming from the "Way of the Snake" technique, this Kage-Hebi technique was created for increased speed and agility furthering their snake llike traits. Though during this technique user looses their legs until they end the technique as well as cannot perform hand seal related techniques. But, with this comes a doubling in their speed and agility.
Description: Wrapping their legs together the Kage-Hebi by applying chakra to their now wrapped up legs can can form their lower body into something similar to a snake's tail, giving them a boost in speed and agility. Able to cover ground much quicker they become deadly swift, like a viper.
Domain: Kagehebi. Nan-Kaizou 'B

Gathering of the Snakes ^[150]
Rank: Ax1
Type: Supplementary
Range: Self
Special: Hand-seal free. Stemming from the "Way of the Snake" technique, this Kage-Hebi technique was created to suprise an attacker long enough to counter attack allowing the Kage-Hebi to become the victor. Only able to use once per thread, plus once more each time relearned. Also can only be used on one limb at a time, plus one more each time relearned.
Description: Performing the Snake seal just before taking damage the Kage-Hebi is able to "pull" themselves back together. This is through an odd manner, as once damaged snakes come between the body and the amputated limb, bringing the two back into one, usually granting the user a chance for a suprise attack on their would be attacker.
Domain: Kagehebi. Nan-Kaizou 'A'[/font]

Last Edit: Aug 3, 2011 22:44:39 GMT -8 by Gally G6

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Party in the Province [recreate] - NOT DONE! Jun 16, 2011 9:05:16 GMT -8

Post by Gally G6 on Jun 16, 2011 9:05:16 GMT -8

Called:[/u] ^{Kandou, Okui [Being Deeply Moved Emotionally, True Intention]}
Moniker:[/u] ^{Buyo [Soft and Warm]}
Age:[/u] ¹⁸
Inheritance:[/u] ^{Kage-Hebi [Race of Ancients]}
Genesis:[/u] ^{Oto no Kuni [Land of the Rice Fields]}
Loyalty:[/u] ^{Konohagakure no Sato [Hidden Leaf Village]}
Rank:[/u] ^{Runt [Genin]}
Profession:[/u] ^{Undecided [Not Applicable]}
Specialty:[/u] ^{Combat [Primary – Tai], ^{Magic [Secondary – Nin], Lying [Tertiary – Gen]}
Difficulty Setting:}[/u] ^{Hard/Advanced}
Standing:[/u] ^190,5cm
Supporting:[/u] ^84,9kg

Body Shot:[/u] While not all, but most people seem to be most drawn by Okui's rather large bulk at first sight. Some people would describe him as grossly unhealthy, while others would say Okui looks like a teddy bear. Okui's cheeks are somewhat chubby, which seem to contradict his set jaw and stern looking face. Sometimes others are caught off guard by Okui's olive-gold skin, seeming to contradict his menacing appearance. Okui bares fire-amber optics with a slight glazed-white tinge. If one looks close enough they can see his eyes seemingly shake ever so slightly as if he were constantly crying. At a quick glanc, most would not be able to tell that Okui is blind; his eyes never lost their pigment. Over his eyes Okui wears black glasses with frames that are thicker near the rims and get smaller closer to the ear; the rim facing him is a creamy white. Okui's hair is a very intense red, very short and spiky having some bangs that go the the middle of his forehead with four "buns" of spiky red hair in the back. Okui can almost always be seen with a smile on his face. Okui's headband hangs around his neck on a piece of jetblack cloth.

Okui's body structure is a little odd, as if someone took a weightlifter and a swimmer and smashed them together. His arms are not at all bulked or thick, having a more slim yet toned appearance of that of a swimmer. Okui's shoulders are of average width, though to others it seems bigger. Though he is very strong his muscles do not show, giving a toned appearance; if Okui were to suddenly stop where he was standing it would feel like running into a brick wall, as his body is very dense. Okui bares what some would call a muscle gut; from years of lack of exercise and malnutrition, Durius gained a lot of weight that was never shed. His "gut" can clearly be defined from the large bulge against the shirts he wears, and that clothes are about 8 centimeters from his body, usually hanging off his body a little bit.

Apparel:[/u] Okui typically wears what some would consider street or punk clothes, ofter donning a plain white t-shirt, a maroon zip-up hoodie with feux fur on the edge of the hood, and purple, gray and black camouflage cargo pants. He also wears yellow-striped black armbands that extends all the way to his elbows. His starter pouch hangs on his left thigh

Blemishes & Scars:[/u] On Okui's left shoulder is the kanji for tranquility, while on his right is the kanji for angel, inscribed with deep scarlet ink.

Personality:[/u] Okui is what some people would call the nicest person in the cruelest world. He is known as the "quiet young man who always holds the door open for others," takes others' verbal abuses with smiles, and simply tries to smile even when others frown and yell. Okui is the kind of man who would happily help the community for hours or even days by choice, and for no recognition or reward except a small thanks. His quiet nature could lead others to believe he is antisocial or incapable when really he is just very shy.

Okui is very patient and unselfish, often times giving more to others in physical deeds than people can return in favor of. Though he is not sure if he could call himself such, Okui is indeed very humble. He has been known to accept praise by "reinforcing" with a statement such as "I just do the best I can, and that makes me happy." As a musician, and very talented one at that, Okui was often told of his skill and prowess at the instrument he played, mastery it like NinJutsu. While some would kindly accept the compliment, Okui would reply that he "wasn't sure if he could call himself a skillful musician, he could 'hold his own' with the other students his age." As well, Okui is incredibly sensitive to the things around him. He often dislikes the jokes and comments people make about other religions, races, cultures, or just anything that is really not kind. Being of a kind nature, Okui would more likely do an act of kindness for someone his disliked than make comments about them. Due to his sensitivity Okui dislikes his bond of trust being broken, as his love for someone (for him it's really everyone) will never be lost but trust will have to be earned.

Okui is incredibly reliable and responsible, always looking out for others and doing what is right other than what is approved. Okui always gets his work done first before he does anything else, and is always ready to help out. When it comes down to being on time, Okui likes to be at things a tad bit early, as in his mind being a little early is better than being a little late. Okui is the kind of person who was asked to take care of younger children he lived around when he was only 10, and as such was always invited to many adult celebrations that many children were put to sleep for.

Possibly just the way Okui ended up as he matured, or as a result of his up-bringing, he is incredibly respectful, faithful and has a sense of leadership. Okui is not the kind of person who yells, or even raises his voice above a normal speaking level; his booming bass voice seems to elude to this fact. His hearty laugh can always be seen with a smile when he jokes around, but when it is time to be serious Okui can be rather intense. Due to the fact that Okui is usually so subdued makes his intensity seem to appear almost enraged. Over the years Okui learned to respect all of those around you, even if others have no respect for themselves. Often times Okui gets comments about how polite he is, which is often a rarity for adults who deal with people his age. Though Okui and his family never had a name for the deity they worshiped, he always felt a powerful connection to something that was not of the shinobi world. Every night Okui prays for something: his gift of kindness, for giving him the ability for help the world, for giving him a loving family and a strong bond to all that is life. He would even pray thanks for a sunny day, or a school day of good grades. During all of this, Okui became some what of a leader. He was always personally one who liked to lead by example, learning from his knowledgeable peers and wishing to be just like them. While Okui does not particularly enjoy having a leadership role, if given one he will accept the responsibilities; Okui usually tends to be a leader who does what is needed without ever being asked of.

Okui is shunned by some not for his unhealthy lifestyle, but for his orientation. From the moment he was born his mother told him that whatever he decided in his life, she would be right behind him. At the age of 17, while he was in the academy, Okui began to bud. Most didn't really expect what was to come. Okui is bisexual, and he open expresses it to a degree. Regardless of whether a woman or man gives him thanks, he may try to give a hug in return. He is aware that many more men than woman would rather not have to be around him, which is why Okui makes his existence that much more full of life, happiness and goodness all the time.

Allegiance:[/u] Konohagakure
Morality:[/u] Lawful Good
Quirks & Tendencies:[/u] Okui has a homicidal urge which often pushes him to eliminate those he sees as criminals. However, learned from others to never hurt those who were innocent, instead only eliminating people who committed crimes that went against the morality code, such as killing children.
Nindo:[/u] "Injustice is censured because the censures are afraid of suffering, and not from any fear which they have of doing injustice."

Starting Release:[/u] Suiton
Genjutsu Senses:[/u] N/A
Starting Exp:[/u] 2200/2222 [/font]

Last Edit: Aug 3, 2011 22:06:04 GMT -8 by Gally G6

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Summon WIP - Please do not read yet (: Jun 15, 2011 8:52:15 GMT -8

Post by Gally G6 on Jun 15, 2011 8:52:15 GMT -8

For the time being, please do not post anything within this thread. I just want to keep it clean and tidy until ready for grading. (: Thank you.

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Youton Customs, Vol 1 - not too harsh please (: Jun 15, 2011 7:20:49 GMT -8

Post by Gally G6 on Jun 15, 2011 7:20:49 GMT -8

Edited. Sorry about that. I was unsure on some of them, so if you think some need to have the chakra drain bumped lowered, please let me know.

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Youton Customs, Vol 1 - not too harsh please (: Jun 11, 2011 7:56:31 GMT -8

Post by Gally G6 on Jun 11, 2011 7:56:31 GMT -8

Monster Woman- edited in. should be good now.

Quiet Unsociable Person is now called "Ishindenshinfuon [Quiet Understanding of Disturbed Conditions]" (just for clarification). I changed this completley from befroe. If it doens't work, I can change it to something you think would work better (ill take any suggestions you have

). Otherwise I think everything else is ready.

Last Edit: Jun 15, 2011 7:19:48 GMT -8 by Gally G6

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Barren Wasteland [O] Jun 6, 2011 18:23:02 GMT -8

Post by Gally G6 on Jun 6, 2011 18:23:02 GMT -8

OOC: Sorry for the gruesomeness

IC:Koga nodded as he listened to her story. It was true that many of the Lesser Villages had been shrouded in a great mystery as to how they were crushed. Many left their homes to wander the world. Others simply didn't care about the ruined state of their homes. Some questioned their own loyalty much like Koga, while others still had hope as the woman who stood before him.

"If there is one thing I could change...I would take back all the time they spent with me preparing for the battlefield as a medic." Koga raised his eyes to level with the blonde, who returned with a clam stare. "I know that sounds cruel, but to understand fully perhaps I should explain."

[Flashback - 10 Years Ago]

"Back then, when I first enrolled to become a medic-nin, I had no idea of what to expect. Even now, I truly am an awful medic. My instructors told me that all I needed to know was how to heal a wound, and to put those too far gone out of their misery. I was naive and young, and so I followed their words blindly. I figured as a healer I would learn more fo the art I had essentially sacrificed my life for.

"There was one incident in particular that I will never forget. I was sent to the field briefed with only the knowledge that a shinobi had been seriously injured. So I went with a partner to protect me, but I what I encountered was not something I had expected. The man had become victim of a giant slab of earth on most of his lower half." Koga shuddered as he remembered the blood splattered like a painter's careless flicking of a brush.

He explained how this man had been situated. From his partner's analysis, the shinobi held the trait of the Kaguya, a rarity even in his village. Even for the man's inheritance could not repair the multitude of obliterated bones within his body. While his partner utilized her gifted knowledge in the medical strength style, he braced himself for the worst. It truly was horrific.

"His body, from the torso down, had been smashed. It looked as if his body has been comprised of wood, for all I could see hanging from his upper body were splintered bone, sinews of flesh...it was horrifying." Koga explained that the shinobi's legs were no longer existent, literally having been crushed to oblivion. "I later realized that the blood splattered around the slab was the remnants of the lower half." So he stepped over to the man, and carefully cut off all the dead and broken pieces of his body. It was then that he stuck his hands on the slimy, dying body that Koga began to cry.

The man had been cleaved in half and Koga had never been taught any means to save him, nor had his partner. "My partner told me he didn't have much time, that we'd been too late. I remember the man grabbing my wrist and crying out, fearful he would kill me for failing him. By whatever force he managed to call out my chakra scalpel, and then without being able to fight his massive hand, shoved it into his jugular. I just stood there, covered in blood, tears and caked in dirt, my hand wrapped around the man's neck."

[End Flashback]

"What kind of world do we live in now that we are no longer taught to heal the injured? To kill the dying, the suffering?" Koga grabbed the bridge of his nose, apologizing for his outburst. "I just can't understand, even now, why they taught us such things. As I look back, my lack in the healing arts killed more people than it saved. Perhaps that's what they wanted..." With that said, Koga looked at the woman as if to say, I don't ask for much, but please, remove this guilt I live with.

Last Edit: Jun 6, 2011 21:46:54 GMT -8 by Gally G6

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Sig Help Please? :'( Jun 6, 2011 9:54:42 GMT -8

Post by Gally G6 on Jun 6, 2011 9:54:42 GMT -8

I'm not sure what's wrong, but my sig keeps streching the thread. Could any one perhpas help me fix that? I'm not sure what's wrong :/

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PS Every time i refresh my page, the amount of space changes. O.o Is that supposed to happne?
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MEDICS ARE DOING IT FOR THEMSELVES [Training?] Jun 6, 2011 9:27:59 GMT -8

Post by Gally G6 on Jun 6, 2011 9:27:59 GMT -8

Any time

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MEDICS ARE DOING IT FOR THEMSELVES [Training?] Jun 6, 2011 9:18:13 GMT -8

Post by Gally G6 on Jun 6, 2011 9:18:13 GMT -8

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Youton Customs, Vol 1 - not too harsh please (: Jun 4, 2011 19:13:09 GMT -8

Post by Gally G6 on Jun 4, 2011 19:13:09 GMT -8

Strong Poison[/u] - All the stuff mentioned had been edited

Incoming Wave[/u] - Removed ability to guide the wave

Tail of a Pine Tree[/u] - Edited

Help Out[/u] - Edited. Unable to use any techniques requiring handseals for the duration of the technique. (Basically DoJutsu are the only thing able to function, unless they require seals as well. In that case, no techniques can be used. Whichever fits your fansy)

Monster Woman[/u] - Edited. Had an idea to add to Monster Woman. To make it fair, if the user was covered in this blob of lava and took a hit from an S rank tai, they woulndt just leave unscathed. So, what if after the attack the lava glob is dipersed (basically it explodes outward much like when a paintball shatters), taking a turn. If the user wishes to bring the glob of lava back to their body, the must use an S rank charge to reform it (the one turn of the lava glob would take away from the initial total the user can hold Monster Woman for).[/u] Sorry if that doesn't make sense. I'll try to explain more in depth if I can. (:

~~Quiet Unsociable Person~~[/u] - (i apologize if any of this comes across as rude) First off, you need to understand the technique is comes from. Monster Woman does not change the user's physical/chemical/whatever structure like that of the Hozuki; INSTEAD[/u] it simply coats the user in a constant lava-like blob, which to others may appear as a slug-like creature composed of lava. IN NO WAY[/u] is the user turning into a slug, they are simply covering themselves in a blob that slightly resembles a slug.

Here's how I inteneded Quiet Unsociable Person to work: I'm sure at this point you understand the user is covered in the blob of lava. With QUP, upon receiving a powerful blow equal to the users Fushokuzai rank, the coating of lava itself (NOT THE USER)[/u] will separate into numerous tiny "slugs" made of lava. The coating of lava explodes into the little slugs much like a paintball shatters into the splatter shapes. The user has no control over the little slugs while they are in this tiny form, as well as becoming a possible target (they are unable to use the slugs while they are divided in any way). I think to make it fare, while the coating of lava is in the "little slug" form, it should take time away from the total duration of Monster Woman (i.e the user activated the technique for 2 turns, the user is attacked so the slugs divide for three turns. This means if the user has only learned the technique 5 times, then the user can't cover themself in another coat of lava without recasting the jutsu again). After reading Quiet Unsociable Person, I notice it is confusing. If this explanation suffices at all, then please tell me. If this again does not make any clarity, I want to try to make a way in which it does.[/u][/b]

If that doesn't work, then maybe the technique can simply allow the user to separate the coating of lava into a small army of slugs (again, the user will not physically split their body, just the coating of lava around them. Perhaps it can be retrained for more slugs to be spawned from the coating at one time. i.e. first training allows 20 slugs or somethings, plus 10 more each time retrained, or something like that. *shrug*)[/s]

EDIT: I had an idea for Quiet Unsociable Person that will be competely unrelated to Monster Woman. In essence, i'm changing what the tehcnique dods completely.[/u]

Dead Space[/u] - That little part edited. I think I had a thought that was never finished...[/font]

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Barren Wasteland [O] Jun 3, 2011 11:09:24 GMT -8

Post by Gally G6 on Jun 3, 2011 11:09:24 GMT -8

He had received her utmost attention. While the woman seemed to have been given a carriage which many would be jealous of, it was her sharp, cold eyes that he starred at. Many may not have noticed her questioning looks. However, Koga saw something unkind in her face. He was very aware of her starring at his frame, and he could not help suppress a small smile. He may not have been the most beautiful monster in this world, but he carried all parts of his being with a fierce pride.

Many dared not to look directly into the eyes of those being spoken to. Eyes like molten rock, Koga bored into the woman in front of him. He couldn't tell what she was thinking of him at this very moment, but he had every intention of showing this woman his ferocity. You know more than you think you do. Koga's eyes portrayed not happiness or even loyalty, but raw anger and cruelty like that of his blood nature.

"For a while, Amegakure was a place of piece. Under the reign of the Beautiful Lady that lead us, we were happy. But then things started to change. The skies turned black, the rain fell harder. People died." Koga never let his eyes drop from the woman's gaze. He bore no smile or indication that his foreshadowing was a mere jest of his home.

"We never had a true leader in our village, after a long dispute caused long ago. We never saw the Lady, but her presence was always known by the mysterious acts she performed: healing the sick, driving off dangerous enemies, bringing us all together as a family. It was when her death was reported by one of the Gashira that we began to worry. No longer was a home a safe haven for all ninja seeking comfort. When we looked up, blood fell upon our faces, fresh and cold like a new kill.

"Many fled the Country Where the Sky Bleeds, but many like myself stayed. For a while we stayed loyal, believing, hoping that the heavens where trying to mourn for the Lady in its bizarre way. It wasn't until the killing began that I was enlightened of how our village was deteriorating. Whoever had orchestrated the Lady's death, for it was not natural in the slightest, decreed that all who would not fight for their country would die.

Woman, men, daughters, sons...so many of them were killed, just because they could not serve. Many wished to stay with their families, while others were hindered by age or lack of knowledge to be Shinobi. So they were killed. I was contacted because of my inheritance to become a soldier for a great army that was to be." It was then that Koga put together a few quick seals. He first looked at his hand, then at the woman, then moved his hand to his eyes as if to say I want to show you why they wanted me.

His hand began to glow a luminous, blue color. "A man came to me, eyes of a rat, tongue of a liar, venom of a killer. He was enthralled by my knowledge in the arts of medicine, and for my inheritance that lay hidden, and wished for my compliance." Koga looked at the woman with an expression that was hard to read. Sadness. Regret, perhaps. "I declined his offer. Immediately he began to yell...I killed him with this blue chakra. To this day, I have not been able to touch a dying soul without feeling the regret of slaughter. Saving people just hasn't really been my thing since that...accident." The chakra faded, and again Koga looked to the woman.

"I may be an ass, I admit that. But I don't just kill people because it's fun. After I killed the man, I fled my village as well, no longer seeing it as the home it used to be. I have never been outside my home, so for a while I was lost. I heard this land was prosperous, and while dangerous, seemed to be better off. Upon hearing there was a village in this country, I have began my search for it, in hopes I can start a new life...or perhaps offer a purpose to forget my old life." Koga looked up at the woman, his face no longer happy or sad, simply showing the seriousness of his true nature. "You know my story. I must ask you, and your...eh, friend the same thing, miss." With that he gave a deep bow, his drunken sauve vanished for the time being.

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Barren Wasteland [O] May 31, 2011 5:00:32 GMT -8

Post by Gally G6 on May 31, 2011 5:00:32 GMT -8

It was a day like no other, coming back from a rather eventful night. Expressions of absolute bliss were plastered across the towering man's face. His mind danced gracefully amidst the tumultuous cascade of blurred thoughts. His body ached from the liquids he had consumed before, yet he wanted nothing more than to have another go at the bar. He was very aware, to a the slightest, that somewhere was important. A date perhaps, or maybe a meetings. Words of team work echoed through the dulled senses of his skull, but to no avail. As he watched from afar, a group seemed to have begun gathering. Maybe this was where he was supposed to turn.

Senses clogged with bitterness from the night before, a snap occurred in the crevices of his brain. Beauty with hair touched by the gentle hand of the sun, a gaze so intent she seemed to have lost track of her thoughts in concentration. She was so familiar, he could almost touch her name, a forgotten, dusty book shelved as youth left his body.

"Hey, beauty," he murmured, his words slurring purposely. Trying to ignore the other male present, the Koga's first move was to speak to this woman who he seemed to have a strong pull towards. It was this fatal decision to name the beauty as such that would be a turn table to his memory. Eyes widening one single phrase had escaped his mind as quickly as it has been formed: my friends enemies are my greatest allies. Everything made no sense, but something seemed comfortable about this place, something that made him want to wake up from his slumbering dream.

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Youton Customs, Vol 1 - not too harsh please (: May 30, 2011 18:54:25 GMT -8

Post by Gally G6 on May 30, 2011 18:54:25 GMT -8

I would say the lava couldn't extend more than 5 meters max. If it went farthur than that, the user would not really be able to control it, as you said. Therefore, the lava could not really be used to attack someone who is out of the limited short range. Not sure if this would work, but assuming the user has to expell a constant amount of chakra, the lava would constantly push against the air, propelling the user until chakra flow is stopped.

Also, I would think that despite the short range the lava would burst, the user would be flung back at the same rate as if flying, due to the sheer momentum of the lava being expelled.

Not sure if that helped (or made it worse X.x), but if necessary the rank could be bumped due to a intense level of chakra control.

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Unexpected Chase [Iwa Search] May 27, 2011 22:12:21 GMT -8

Post by Gally G6 on May 27, 2011 22:12:21 GMT -8

The fire spitter did not expect that finding a mass of earth would be so difficult. When no obvious landmarks presented themselves, the sky would always have an answer. As Koga looked upon the sky's gaze, he did not find a simple answer. No, his hint was in the slightest shift of the world as the clouds slowly drifted towards something...grand. They would guide him towards his destination, but after that would soon depart on their own way.

Wisps of wind against the nape of his neck seemed to tell the shinobi to look down. Upon the earth he traveled was a simple path. Carved out by the mounds of sojourned soil, stories etched in every grain. It was this path, one which threatened to lead Koga into a pit of darkness, that would take him where he wanted to go. He just had to take the signs he would be given.

OOC:[/u] Sorry about not posting earlier. With finals I was doing some necessary studying. But I'm all graduated now, so I should be a lot more frequent =D[/font]

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Youton Customs, Vol 1 - not too harsh please (: May 27, 2011 19:50:03 GMT -8

Post by Gally G6 on May 27, 2011 19:50:03 GMT -8

Alright. Just wanted to clarify. - Slug

For Monster Woman: I had planned for it to just be the user coating themselves in lava. if it doesn't come across that way when read, do you think you might be able to help me reword it to do so?

I completley understand your position. I just graduated, so hopefully i'll be more free as well

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