wow it cuts!

[Sayomi]

Suigai {Lit: Waters Edge}
Rank:A
Type: Melee/ specialty/ offensive
Special: Suigai has one major ability, also must have suiton release in order to wield.
Description: Suigai looks like an oversized elegant cleaver, it has no tsuba and no proper hilt; making the user hold the cloth-wrapped tang. Suigai is 1.75 meters in total length, and has a black blade with a silver edge.
Cost: 35k
Kirikatta {Lit: Watter Cutter}
Rank: B
Type: Offesnive
Range: 10 meters
Chakra consumption: High
Special: Kirikatta travels 10 meters, plus another 10 after being retrained.
Description: Kirikatta draws from the wielders Suiton chakra, molding it into a pressurized arc of highly condensed water. The outcome of such is a slash attack being released that flies forward in only a linear fashion. This slash takes the form of a wave and is so sharp that it can easily slice through boulders. Each time the users fires Kirikatta, B rank chakra is consumed. Kirikatta moves at a speed equal to that of a thrown kunai x3.
Domain: Suiton

[.DEVIOUS]

Can you put some sort of cooldown on Kirikata? I don't want to see like 6,000 of these flying in one turn. (Obvious exaggeration but you understand). With a cooldown this is acceptable.

[Sayomi]

done

[.DEVIOUS]

1.2

[addy-hime ♥]

2/2.

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[☆ F ☆]

May 7, 2011 9:06:26 GMT -8 ☆ F ☆ said:

Considering the nature of shinobi and players of this genre, custom weapons are just as common if not more commonly submitted than jutsu themselves. From simple weapons with singular effects to legendary weapons of lore, below you will find everything need to create your own!

• Regardless of status and method of acquisition, weapons must have at all times an assigned price!
  
  
  
• Weapon rank tends to establish a tendency as to what to expect from the weapon, and as such, each rank has certain expectations. With this players can establish how to properly rank their own creations!
  
  • E-C: Simple, non-magical weapons. Unless there's an exception, these types of weapons are usually weak main weaponry with nothing special added to it, or simple ammunition and/or secondary weapons such as kunai and shuriken. Nothing special.
    
    
  • B: Now that weapons of these kind are getting more refined, so is the scope of their skill. Weapons of this rank can now be influenced by chakra, though nothing complex such as a release, a kekkei touta, or a sense. Simple, pure chakra is what's to expect from these kinds of creations, though no complex abilities! (chakra sucking/negating/blocking, summoning, controlling, etc.)
    
    
  • A: If the previous class allows simple, pure chakra to dominate it, then these kinds of weapons can be used as beacons to house elemental and illusionary. From releases and kekkei touta to genjutsu senses, these weapons can manipualte these elements with each.
    
    
  • S: Only the strongest of the strongest. On top of controlling any type of chakra, weapons of these kinds can also have complex abilities that rival even the strongest of powers out there.
  
  
  
  
• Weapon pricing applies to default, common weapons of each rank; adding abilities increases the pricing
  

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• D: 500 Ryo
  
• C: 1,000 Ryo
  
• B: 5,000 Ryo
  
• A: 25,000 Ryo
  
• S: 50,000 Ryo
  

Add-Ons! [each][/u]

• Pure-Chakra: 5,000 Ryo
  
• Release: 10,000 Ryo
  
• Kekkei-Touta: 20,000 Ryo
  
• Illusionary Sense: 10,000 Ryo
  
• Complex Abilities/Effects: 40,000 Ryo
  

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Due to our latest custom's update, I'm moving this back so we can update this interesting weapon. I do have a few comments on the weapon's jutsu...

• x5 kunai speed is a bit ridiculous, honestly, even with the use limits. There's such a thing as making a cool weapon, but making a broken one is no fun. x2 or x3 is usually higher-ranked projectile techs tend to use; x3 seems reasonable.
  
  
• No need for use or turn limits, nor cool-downs - just leave exhaustion that to your chakra reserves!
  
  
• Chakra consumption - Mid to High, considering your adding a speed element to a release that's not exactly the best for that (think of fuuton or raiton for more speed-based attacks)
  

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[Sayomi]

edited

[Axcel]

Add a cost and just keep the technique cost as 'high'. Also add Suigai to the domain, so it is clear that it can't be used with normal weapons.

[Sayomi]

made the speed x3, btu why would I add an cost, the blade was originally B rank which made it free, so do I have to pay for it now or something?

[Axcel]

Because if someone kills you and intends on selling the sword, they would need to know the price in order to do so.

[marvolous.]

1/2.

[Comatose]

2/2