Fuuton Compilation, Vol. 1

[addy-hime ♥]

Kaze Bakudan (Wind Bomb)

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Rank: D
Type: Offensive / Fuuton Ninjutsu
Range: 0 - 5 meters
Chakra: Low
Special: The explosion is more powerful at the site of detonation and becomes weaker the farther the opponent is from it.
Description: The user holds up a hand after performing a short series of handseals. Their chakra is focused into this point, and a small, swirling green ball is created as wind is tightly compacted. The bomb is then thrown, and upon contacting a solid object will detonate. The explosion has roughly the same power as an Exploding Tag.
Domain: Fuuton.

Dai Yakushin (Great Leap)[/u]
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary / Fuuton Ninjutsu
Range: 5 - 50 meters
Chakra: Low
Special: At the basic level, this technique allows the user to jump 5 meters. Each time retrained, however, another 5 meters are added on, until they have reached a maximum of 50 meters.
Description: Fuuton has a variety of uses, primarily offensive in nature, but this technique is one of the exceptions. The user performs three handseals and focuses their chakra into their legs. When they leap from their position, the wind itself will help them lengthen the height of their jump. By using more or less chakra the exact height can be controlled, but it does require a good judge of distance and fair chakra control to perform correctly.
Domain: Fuuton.

Kaze Dangan (Wind Bullet)[/u]
Rank: C
Type: Offensive / Fuuton Ninjutsu
Range: 20 meters
Chakra: Mid
Special: There is a one second cool down between shots, meaning that the user can only fire three bullets per post.
Description: The user performs a set of handseals, ending with Tiger, and holds it. Chakra is focused into the point at the tip of their fingers; a bullet-sized and shaped ball of green energy begins to form. By aiming at an opponent as if using a gun, they can fire this streamlined pellet. It travels at twice the speed of a kunai thanks to a decrease in wind velocity around the bullet, and packs the same amount of power when it does hit. The drawback is that it shoots in a linear path and, like every other object, is pulled down by gravity as it travels. The farther away the target, the less likely it will be to connect.
Domain: Fuuton.

Kushu (Air Strike)[/u]
Rank: B
Type: Offensive / Fuuton Nintaijutsu
Range: 0 - 5 meters
Chakra: High
Special: The strike would be at its most powerful if the user were to hit the target directly; the further away they are, the less effective. Each time retrained, an extra B-rank worth of damage is added on.
Description: To perform Kushu, the user runs through a series of seals and then focuses their chakra on a fist. This is generally the dominant hand for top power. A green aura takes shape, and is quickly replaced by a spherical casing of highly condensed wind. The user simply needs to throw a punch at a target and the wind will continue to travel, lengthening the range of the punch itself. Contact with this high density wind will cause cuts from a distance, but a close-range or contact punch has the ability to cause major internal damage in the afflicted area.
Domain: Fuuton.

Kaze Keri (Wind Kick)
Rank: B
Type: Offensive / Fuuton Nintaijutsu
Range: See special!
Chakra: High
Special: The wind can only create an extension that is double the user's leg length at maximum. Each time retrained, an extra B-rank worth of damage is added on.
Description: The element of surprise always gives one a leg up in combat; in the case of Kaze no Keri, this particular fact is more than true. After performing the correct hand seals, the user focuses their Fuuton chakra on their dominant leg and rushes toward the opponent. When they leap in the air to perform a roundhouse kick, the wind will have created an invisible extension of the leg, making it harder for the opponent to dodge. The wind is a solid force, not unlike the leg itself, and has the potential to do serious internal damage.
Domain: Fuuton.

Kakucho Sokudo (Speed Enhancement)[/u]
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary / Fuuton Ninjutsu
Range: Self
Chakra: Very High
Special: At the basic level, this technique allows the user to increase their speed for one post. With each retrain the post limit goes up one.
Description: Two handseals are performed by the shinobi, who concentrates their chakra and releases it into the air around them. This allows them to run swiftly by decreasing air resistance, and even sprint across or run up vertical surfaces by generating a wind current behind themselves to propel them forward. Kakucho Sokudo doubles the user's speed, making them hard to follow with an untrained eye. They are, however, much slower than the average Shunshin. The advantage here is the ability to maneuver mid-run instead of having to continue in a linear path.
Domain: Fuuton.

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Rank: B
Type: Supplementary / Fuuton Ninjutsu
Range: 0 - 10 meters
Chakra: High
Special: At the basic level, this technique allows the user to decrease their opponents' speed by half for one post, and effects everyone in a 10 meter radius. This includes the user, should they step inside the area of effect. With each retrain the post limit goes up by one. If an opponent should enter any of the Eight Chakra Gates while under the influence of this technique or move out of the area of effect, the speed reduction will be removed.
Description: After one has mastered Kakucho Sokudo, they are sufficiently versed in the art of wind resistance to manipulate it even further. A few hand seals are performed, and the user releases their chakra into the air around them. It quickly starts to concentrate around nearby enemies, making it more difficult for them to move and therefore slowing them down until the chakra disperses again.
Domain: Fuuton. Kakucho Sokudo.[/ul]Kaze no Chakram (Wind Chakram)
Rank: A
Type: Offensive / Fuuton Ninjutsu
Range: Self
Chakra: High
Special: When thrown, the Chakram is able to be called back to the user from a distance of 20 meters. Each time retrained, 5 meters are added. Requires a low amount of chakra per turn for upkeep.
Description: By performing a set of handseals, the user is able to condense their Fuuton chakra into a visible, green ring about 35 mm in diameter, with a curved handle inside. The outer edge is sharp enough to slice through barriers at A-rank or below, and can have devastating effects on flesh. The Chakram is mainly used as a long-distance weapon, but is also suited for close combat, capable of slashing, parrying, and even disarming an opponent.
Domain: Fuuton.

Ea no Yoroi (Air Armor)[/u]
Rank: A
Type: Defensive / Fuuton Ninjutsu
Range: Self
Chakra: Very High
Special: To maintain the armor, an additional mid amount of chakra is consumed every turn. Protects against attacks equal to or lower than the technique. Can withstand one hit from an A-rank technique before shattering, and one more each time retrained. An attack of a higher rank will not only shatter the armor, but will also fully damage the user. If the opposing technique is Katon or Youton in nature all rank protections are dropped by one level: B-rank techniques have the ability to eventually shatter the armor, and any rank higher than that will shatter it and damage the user.
Description: After performing a set of handseals, the user emits a controlled amount of chakra that mingles with the atmosphere. An invisible layer of the highly-condensed air molds around the user's entire body, effectively forming a kind of armor against incoming attacks. It is a highly useful technique for stressful fights, as the air remains condensed so long as a minor amount of chakra is used to keep it in place.
Domain: Fuuton.

Ikarikuruu Tatsumaki (Raging Tornado)[/u]
Rank: S
Type: Offensive / Fuuton Ninjutsu
Range: 30 meters
Chakra: Massive
Special: The tornado is capable of traveling a maximum of 30 meters from its starting position when first learned. With every retrain, however, the distance increases by 10 meters. The user is incapable of controlling the tornado once it touches down; after that point, it is simply a force of nature.
Description: One of the most deadly wind-related natural occurrences is a tornado. Fuuton users have been trying to master creating one of these for generations, but only recently have the mechanics behind it been fleshed out. After a long string of handseals, the user directs their naturally wind-nature chakra up into the clouds, changing the pressurization of the area and forming a mesocyclone: an area of organized rotation. A condensation funnel begins to form in the clouds above and quickly descends to the ground. The cyclone itself is 20 meters across at the very bottom, but grows larger the closer it gets to the clouds. It rotates at a speed of 300 km/h, and is easily capable of ripping buildings off their foundations. Should any person be sucked into the vortex, they will be spun wildly and thrown to the ground at high speeds.
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[addy-hime ♥]

This is a combination of old and new. There are a few techniques in here that have already been accepted (twice), seen here. I decided to do a small revamp and make some of them less OP, like changing the speed on Wind Bullet. The biggest change, however, is making the Fuuton techniques open to all instead of making them Suna-exclusive. I decided it was a bit selfish and unnecessary.

Anyway, grade away. I plan to delete the 'Fuuton' post in the linked thread above when these get accepted (unless an LM wants to do that themselves), so no one gets confused about which version to use.

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[Icarus]

rate of travel in kunai terms @ first tech

speed attunement, gates should be able to ignore this.

chakram requires low chakra to keep available @ each turn

air armor. I'm feeling like it should shatter on equal ranked attacks and above.

[addy-hime ♥]

rate of travel in kunai terms @ first tech

The technique is literally making a small bomb, just like if you pulled a smoke grenade or exploding pouch from your bag and threw it at someone. It doesn't move at the speed of anything, it is simply thrown. Bombs aren't particularly aerodynamic and the speed would depend on several factors, like how far it needs to be thrown and the strength of the person throwing it.

speed attunement, gates should be able to ignore this.

Edited.

chakram requires low chakra to keep available @ each turn

The technique "Kaze no Yaiba (Sword of Wind)" is basically the basis for this one. As it says, it creates a sword made out of wind that the user can wield indefinitely and has no upkeep cost. I wanted to keep this technique on level with that one, but that being said, I do agree it needs a restriction. Edited.

air armor. I'm feeling like it should shatter on equal ranked attacks and above.

There's actually a rule in the custom thread that goes over this, found below:

"Shields and blocking type jutsu generally are multi-rank, as defense is represented by presenting a block of equal rank to the strike; essentially, if you want a shield to block everything, it must be equivalent to the highest rank of things you want blocked."

It can shield you from an attack that is equal rank, and therefore shatters when something more powerful hits it.

[Icarus]

My mistake I assumed that it was a "fired" bomb

I'll ask another staffer bout your chakram and if it should indeed be upkeep-less or if yaiba needs its own upkeep.

My mistake then on armor!

[くすり]

Kaze Bakudan (Wind Bomb):
I assume this cannot be retrained? If it can state any perks gained from being re-trained; if not ignore this

Lol the rest look good.

1.2 under the assumption Kaze Bakudan was not meant to be re-trained

[addy-hime ♥]

Nope. There's no reason for it to be retrainable, in my opinion~

[Sayomi]

again 1.2

[Axcel]

Kakucho Sokudo (Speed Enhancement) - Although I know this has already been accepted (this is my first time seeing it), it needs to be reworked. It grants equal speed to the first chakra gate without any drawbacks or heavy restrictions as well as well as being relatively cheap (chakra wise). It also infringes on the wind elemental armor (kinjutsu). For a technique like this to work, I'd suggest either making it B-rank or A-rank. The B-rank version would require the final handseal to be held (as a drawback). If you decide to opt for an A-rank version, the chakra cost should be "Very High".

Ea no Yoroi (Air Armor) - Change this to have an initial cost of "Very High" and a sustain cost of "Mid" per turn, or just leave it as "High" but bump up the sustain cost to be "High" as well.

Everything else seems fine, though I'm iffy on the last one despite being an S-rank + Massive cost. With a technique as huge as this I'd probably feel more comfortable if it were to cost 2x Massive, but I won't deny it and if no other staffer feels the same I'll accept.

[.DEVIOUS]

Kaze Dangan: What do you mean by "Able to be used with one-handed seals, so long as Tiger is held"? Of course the technique can be used with One Handed seals, every jutsu can, but only if the user has One Handed Seals mastery. I don't understand the necessity of having this in here, unless the goal is to be able to use the jutsu with One Handed Seals without first having the mastery, which would not be allowed. Overall, I feel like this statement should just be removed from the technique in general as to avoid confusion both now and in the future.

Sokudo Gensui (Speed Attenuation): Is this technique targeted at a person, or is it targeted at an area? Unless you're maintaining some form of chakra link with the technique (maintained handseal), it seems unlikely that you'd be able to keep the effect centered on a person. Basically, either state that it targets an area or else state that you must maintain a handseal in order to keep the target locked. I feel that it should also be stated as a drawback of the technique that you are also effected if you enter the 10 meter radius, although you could use your speed enhancing technique to have the two balance each other out so that you're moving at normal speeds while the opponent is at half.

Ea no Yoroi (Air Armor): I think you misunderstood barrier or defensive jutsu. The technique WILL be capable of defending against an equal-ranked attack; however, an equal rank attack will break the barrier and force you to re-use the technique. Basically, you wont be effected by the damage, but your defense is then broken and you need to create a new one. Modify this technique accordingly.

Ikarikuruu Tatsumaki (Raging Tornado): Do you control the tornado? The biggest problem I see with this technique is that the base of it reaches the maximum limit of what we're willing to allow for ranged techniques, 50 meters. This means that, in effect, the tornado can't move and it's forced to be stationary, which would make the technique a rather colossal waste of chakra and time. If you want the technique to be able to travel, the base of the tornados size absolutely needs to be reduced by about 45 meters, or else we need to see a much more significant chakra drain on the caster's behalf. In short, this is the sort of technique that only someone with a bijuu level of chakra could cast, and it would still wreck their chakra pool. Overall, I'm not sure where to tell you to take this.

[addy-hime ♥]

Kakucho Sokudo (Speed Enhancement) - Edited. Made the technique A-rank with a Very High chakra cost.

Kaze Dangan (Wind Bullet) - Edited. Removed the phrase. It was only in there to begin with because the user needs to hold Tiger while firing the bullets, which is supposed to simulate a 'fake' gun shape with one's hands. To that effect, I wanted to make sure people knew that this part would keep its integrity even if one used one-handed seals. It's all about the show, people. qq

Sokudo Gensui (Speed Attenuation) - The technique already stated clearly that everyone in the AOE would be effected. Even still, I edited and made it more clear that this includes the user, should they step into the area. As for their speed going back to a normal level when they use a jutsu (such as Kakucho Sokudo) that is supposed to double their speed when their speed is already halved, I thought that was just common sense/logical, so I didn't bother writing that out.

Ikarikuruu Tatsumaki (Raging Tornado) - Edited. The base of the technique is now 20 meters across and the range it can move is 30 meters before retrain, which fits into the standard 50 meters for S-rank techniques. I picked a massive chakra level for this not because they aren't creating the tornado with their chakra. In actuality, they are using their chakra to manipulate the wind currents in the air, creating a mesocyclone that, in turn, creates the tornado. They have absolutely no control over the tornado once it is on the ground, so I made that more clear.

Ea no Yoroi (Air Armor) - Changed to be Very High cost with a Mid upkeep, as suggested by Axcel. As for whether it can be broken by an A-rank technique, I actually don't believe that to be immediately true, for the following reasons:

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All generic shield and armor defend once against an attack of equal rank before being destroyed

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Kazekaeshi (Wind Return)
Rank: D, C, B, A, S
Type: Defensive / Fuuton Ninjutsu
Range: See special!
Chakra: D: Low; C, B: Mid; A, S: High
Special: Effective in blocking and returning ninjutsu and taijutsu of equal rank. Push-back distance starts off at 10 meters, and increases by 10 more with each new rank acquired.
Description: No one knows the power of Fuuton more than a Fuuton specialist, and this technique was designed by those that met reality sooner than most. Varying by skill and rank, this technique allows the user to take hold of any offensive jutsu used upon them, as along as the attack’s nature allows for whatever is thrown to be controlled. With a great burst of chakra at either their hands or weapons, the user quickly returns the technique back at the opponent, in full effect.
Domain: Fuuton.

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Doton Kekkai – Dorou Doumu (Earth Barrier – Earth Dome Prison)
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary / Doton Ninjutsu
Range: See special!
Chakra: High
Special: Size and range of dome depends on the user's 'Earth Dominion' rank. Dome can withstand up to one 'B' ranked strike from within, plus one more each time retrained.
Description: This advanced Doton ninjutsu acts as its name implies – it facilitates the user creating a prison around their victims, comprised of pure dirt. After forming the necessary handseals and striking the ground with their hands, the user is able to overturn the earth and cause it to rise up around their opponents. As long as they keep their hands on it and feed it chakra, the prison can withstand most attempts to break free from within. As a bonus, if the user knows of any chakra absorbing techniques, they may place their hands against the dome, sucking out the chakra from the people trapped inside and bring it back into one’s own body, as well as combine it with his own in order to spread throughout the dome, allowing the suer to repair any damage their opponents manage to inflict on the inside.
Domain: Doton. Earth Dominion 'B'.

That being said, I decided to edit in also that it can withstand ONE A-rank attack to start with, more if retrained. I hope that makes you feel a bit better about the technique in general.

[.DEVIOUS]

Ea no Yoroi: If you read all of the jutsu and armor that you posted, they all state being able to block one attack of the same rank before breaking. That means that once it has sustained that amount of damage, it breaks, which is exactly what I was saying previously. The jutsu could absorb an A rank amount of damage and protect you from it, but you would need to re-use your defense before another attack because it would be broken after absorbing the A rank.

Since there's no point in arguing when you've edited to my specifications, 1/2.

[Apple]

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