The green arrow of Naruto

[くすり]

Explosive Arrow
Rank: B
Range: 2 meters
Type: Secondary, Melee/Range
Special: 2 Arrows / Pack
Description: A normal looking arrow on the outside, but within its arrow head rests explosive properties. Once this arrow strikes something solid it releases a explosion within a 2 meter span.
Cost: 5000 Ryo / Pack

Flash Grenade Arrow
Rank: D
Range: 5 meters
Type: Secondary, Melee/Range
Special: 10 Arrows / Pack
Description: A normal looking arrow on the outside, but within its arrow head rests the properties of a flash grenade. Once this arrow strikes something solid it releases a blinding light within a 5 meter span, which obstructs vision for a short 1 post.
Cost: 500 Ryo / Pack

Glue Foam Arrow
Rank: C
Type: Secondary, Melee/Range
Special: 5 Arrows / Pack
Description: A normal looking arrow on the outside, but within its arrow head rests a sticky, adhesive glue that once hits something solid erupts into a giant mass of foam like material that restricts movement in a flash. The glue like foam completely engulfs targets leaving only there heads open. The thing about this arrow is that it does not pierce the, tip of it is blunt and very fragile so once it strikes it literally bursts open releasing the sticky agent.
Cost: 1000 Ryo / Pack

Stun Arrow
Rank: D
Type: Secondary, Melee/Range
Special: 10 Arrows / Pack
Description: A normal looking arrow on the outside, but within its arrow head rest a chemical that once strikes something solid sends a discharge of energy throughout the opponents body, halving movement speed for only two posts before the discharge stop being effective upon the nervous system and muscles. The discharge is not constant, but enough is contained inside the arrow to inhibit speed ofr the allotted time.
Cost: 500

Poison Arrow
Rank: C
Type: Secondary, Melee/Range
Special: 5 Arrows / Pack
Description: A normal looking arrow on the outside, but within its arrow head rest a poisonous chemical. Once it enters the body system, it causes a multitude of problems over time. Takes five posts for nausea, headaches, dizziness, and a burning pain to began to show. During their 5th post is when the signs began to show, beforehand nothing can be perceived about actually being poison, unless one figures out in a viable manner. The poison lasts five posts.
Cost: 1000 Ryo / Pack

Acid Arrow
Rank: C
Type: Secondary, Melee/Range
Special: 5 Arrows / Pack
Description: A normal looking arrow on the outside, but within its arrow head rest a deadly chemical. Once it strikes something physical the arrowhead bursts, releasing a corrosive agent onto their body burning through skin with ease. This acid is able to effectively burn through weak metals, meaning armor above C will not be affected as well as weapons.
Cost: 1000 Ryo / Pack

Smoke Grenade Arrow
Rank: D
Range: 5 meters
Type: Secondary, Melee/Range
Special: 10 Arrows / Pack
Description: A normal looking arrow on the outside, but within its arrow head rests the properties of a smoke grenade. Once this arrow strikes something solid it releases a obscuring veil within a 5 meter span.
Cost: 500 Ryo / Pack

Laughing gas Arrow
Rank: C
Range: 5 meters
Type: Secondary, Melee/Range
Special: 5 Arrows / Pack
Description: A normal looking arrow on the outside, but within its arrow head rests the chemical properties of laughing gas. Once this arrow strikes something solid it releases the chemical within a 5 meter span and once inhaled opponents begin to abruptly laugh. The tip of the arrow head is blunt and does not pierce, but instead erupts like the other trick arrows which than spreads an extremely, high, potent amount of nitrous oxide. It than seeks to enter the opponents nervous system allowing its effects to take over. It takes one full post of inhaling for the effects to reach extreme amounts. If just simply inhaled for a quarter of a post the opponent will only laugh for two posts. Half a post and they laugh for five posts. Anymore and the effects lasts as long as 10 posts. The effects are, Disorientation (both spatial and time-based), Fixated vision, Throbbing or pulsating auditory hallucinations, Similarly pulsating visual hallucinations, Increased pain threshold, Deeper mental connections, and Lowered vocal pitch (opposite of helium)
Cost: 1000 Ryo / Pack

Stinky Arrow
Rank: B
Type: Secondary, Melee/Range
Special: 2 Arrows / Pack
Description: A normal looking arrow on the outside, but within its arrow head rests a large amount of smelly liquid. Once this arrow strikes something solid the arrow head bursts and it releases the liquid. A tea-cup amount resides within the arrow head. The liquid has a unique smell and is hard to remove; also it makes tracking easier. The smell can be perceived from as far as 20 meters away. Liquid lasts entire thread, unless removed in some viable way or form.
Cost: 5000 Ryo / Pack

Large Quiver
Rank: C
Type: --
Special: Holds 125 arrows
Description: A large quiver, made to contain a wealth of arrows as well as housing side compartments for other gadgets.
Cost: 1000

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[Trigga]

Nigga think he speedy

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[Comatose]

Explosive Arrow - I don't know how I feel about it. It's. . too good. The radius of the explosion should be lowered, 1 - 3 meters tops. With foresight in mind, shooting dozens of these would be much too simple, and provide much too devastating of an effect. Up the rank of this arrow.

Flash Grenade Arrow - How long is one blinded?

Glue Foam Arrow - It's kind of. . odd. It only restricts movement? Doesn't the arrow strike and pierce skin first? Would the foam expand inside someone? Needs to be explained further.

Stun Arrow - For how long does this effect last?

Poison Arrow - Don't think this would take effect immediately. That doesn't make much sense.

Acid Arrow - Corrosive factor needed.

Laughing Gas Arrow - Need to be fleshed out. The effect is fine, I suppose.

Ink Arrow - Needs a duration.

[くすり]

All questions answered as well as done. I fixed all to what you gave me, hopefully they are more detailed now.

[addy-hime ♥]

Stun Arrow - Do these effects remain after the arrow is removed? I could see someone just ripping it out, and considering the description says the discharge comes from it, I don't see how they would continue to have movement issues.

Poison Arrow - The description is extremely redundant when it says "to all transpire at one moment," and then you go on to say it takes five posts for it to become active. Make that more concise, and also, this needs a duration. How long do the effects last?

Laughing Gas Arrow - Please, don't say "a post or two." You really need to be specific with these things. Likewise, I see no reason why the gas would bring an opponent near their death at 10 posts.. I don't know how I feel about that at all.

Ink Arrow - I don't understand why this is ink; most ink has no smell whatsoever. It would make more sense for the liquid inside to be a smelling solution of some kind. That said, I also don't understand how an amount of liquid in an arrowhead could splash out 5 meters.

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[くすり]

fixed as suggested

[addy-hime ♥]

Okay.

1/2.

[chiatsuki]

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I'm not so sure this will fly. Not even kage-hebi poison is that strong. Although it takes five posts to procure within a person it seems unrealistic to allow it to screw your opponent over for five full posts.

Acid Arrow
Rank: C
Type: Secondary, Melee/Range
Special: 5 Arrows / Pack
Description: A normal looking arrow on the outside, but within its arrow head rest a deadly chemical. Once it strikes something physical the arrowhead bursts, releasing a corrosive agent onto their body burning through skin with ease. This acid is able to effectively burn through weak metals, meaning armor above C will not be affected as well as weapons.
Cost: 1000 Ryo / Pack

Could this acid corrode bone or is it just enough to burn the skin?

Laughing gas Arrow
Rank: C
Range: 5 meters
Type: Secondary, Melee/Range
Special: 5 Arrows / Pack
Description: A normal looking arrow on the outside, but within its arrow head rests the chemical properties of laughing gas. Once this arrow strikes something solid it releases the chemical within a 5 meter span and once inhaled opponents begin to abruptly laugh. The tip of the arrow head is blunt and does not pierce, but instead erupts like the other trick arrows which than spreads an extremely, high, potent amount of nitrous oxide. It than seeks to enter the opponents nervous system allowing its effects to take over. It takes one full post of inhaling for the effects to reach extreme amounts. If just simply inhaled for a quarter of a post the opponent will only laugh for two posts. Half a post and they laugh for five posts. Anymore and the effects lasts as long as 10 posts. The effects are, Disorientation (both spatial and time-based), Fixated vision, Throbbing or pulsating auditory hallucinations, Similarly pulsating visual hallucinations, Increased pain threshold, Deeper mental connections, and Lowered vocal pitch (opposite of helium)
Cost: 1000 Ryo / Pack

Why does half a post = 5 posts? Make it to where the opponent will feel the effects of the nitrous oxide for the amount of time they are within the nitrous oxide range - just to be fair..

Large Quiver
Rank: A
Type: --
Special: Holds 150 arrows
Description: A large quiver, made to contain a wealth of arrows as well as housing side compartments for other gadgets.
Cost: 2500 Ryo

Seeing as how this is an item / accessory I am going to have to ask you change your pricing to 10,000 Ryo (standard A ranked accessory price).
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[くすり]

I'm not so sure this will fly. Not even kage-hebi poison is that strong. Although it takes five posts to procure within a person it seems unrealistic to allow it to screw your opponent over for five full posts.

Realistically, some if any poisons wouldn't just up and vanish without proper treatment. Like, you just don't get bitten by the Black Mamba and expect its venom to simply wear off, so as I see it, waiting five full posts to reap the benefits of its effects for only FIVE turns is more than modest. Meaning magically the poisons wears off.

Could this acid corrode bone or is it just enough to burn the skin?

Its strong enough acid to corrode through C ranked armor, don't see why It wouldn't, but to be fair I could raise the rank to B-A and give the acid a corrosion time,so that its not eating through things in a flash.

Why does half a post = 5 posts? Make it to where the opponent will feel the effects of the nitrous oxide for the amount of time they are within the nitrous oxide range - just to be fair..

This is a dangerously high amount of nitrous oxide they'll be breathing in, and its effects just don't up and leave you once you move from the vicinity, so making it as you say would be unrealistic. Furthermore, it takes time for the effects to wear off, especially if the amount is substantial. A full post 10, half 5 and a quarter 2, i believe it to be fair as the amount only dictates however long one remains within the radius of it.

As for the quiver, Im content with that.

[chiatsuki]

Sept 6, 2011 6:30:57 GMT -8 くすり said:

I'm not so sure this will fly. Not even kage-hebi poison is that strong. Although it takes five posts to procure within a person it seems unrealistic to allow it to screw your opponent over for five full posts.

Realistically, some if any poisons wouldn't just up and vanish without proper treatment. Like, you just don't get bitten by the Black Mamba and expect its venom to simply wear off, so as I see it, waiting five full posts to reap the benefits of its effects for only FIVE turns is more than modest. Meaning magically the poisons wears off.

By the way, your quiver held 150 arrows at A rank. Bump it down a bit for C rank.

Sept 6, 2011 6:30:57 GMT -8 くすり said:

Why does half a post = 5 posts? Make it to where the opponent will feel the effects of the nitrous oxide for the amount of time they are within the nitrous oxide range - just to be fair..

This is a dangerously high amount of nitrous oxide they'll be breathing in, and its effects just don't up and leave you once you move from the vicinity, so making it as you say would be unrealistic. Furthermore, it takes time for the effects to wear off, especially if the amount is substantial. A full post 10, half 5 and a quarter 2, i believe it to be fair as the amount only dictates however long one remains within the radius of it.

Yes but 'realistically' in this world we've created it'd be 'realistic' to have it effect the user in some sort of a ranked dosage; if that makes any sense.

[くすり]

Its strong enough acid to corrode through C ranked armor, don't see why It wouldn't, but to be fair I could raise the rank to B-A and give the acid a corrosion time,so that its not eating through things in a flash.

This suggestion is fine with you? If so I'll implement it.

Yes but 'realistically' in this world we've created it'd be 'realistic' to have it effect the user in some sort of a ranked dosage; if that makes any sense.

I don't follow this.

As for the quiver reduced, tlhough there was never a set quiver amount to begin with.

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[chiatsuki]

Yes. You can make the poisonous arrows B-A ranking.

My point is nitrous oxide does not disorient vision or create hallucinations. It decreases the pain a persons nerves can feel - and in no way actually disrupts the way a person can think or move unless somehow they were restrained. For this to truly work I would like to see it have a ranked system. 1 post = 1 post. 2 posts = 2 posts. It's only fair. If you want the effects to last for five posts - trap them in a room while you throw the arrow in there and somehow keep them occupied. Nitrous oxide does not have a smell - or taste - so a person wouldn't even know they were breathing it in until the effects started producing.

[.DEVIOUS]

To be 100% honest, I'm not sure that I really want arrows that are more than arrows on the site. For example, all of these effects are Arrows with some sort of property that could be added to them through other means.

Exploding Arrow - arrow with an explosive tag attached
Blinding Arrow - arrow with a light bomb attached

If you wanted to make specific poisons or other additives that you would then attach to the arrow to complement them, then that would be fine, but the specific arrows I'm not happy about.

I also intentionally did not include a quiver when I posted up the Archery FS we have right now. To keep the arrows more within the realm of the site, I simply had them take up a # of slots, similar to all other secondary weaponry, which is how arrows will be treated here. I do recognize the fact that its a bit unfair to ask you to carry both arrows and other secondary weapons, but that's the price that archers will pay for having consistent long-range lethality.

[KID GAMBINO.]

You have until September 24th, 2011 to modify this, or it will be archived.

[KID GAMBINO.]

Archived.